Rosid Ts: THAKDEER(the destiny)

Hello guys...this is my 1st attempt of Ts...and this I hope it ends in 3 shots...all I need is ur support...I don't know but all of sudden this one popped out of my mind and thought of dedicating to our Rosid...after all I am a rosidian...ok I don't want to bore u all with my blabbering...coming to the story...

Part:1

A beautiful mahal...celebrations are on full swing...everyone are involved in decorating it...

Elders eyes are getting wet by seeing what is happening before their eyes...Haa...Haa..those are happy tears...because their children are finally is going into a new bond...that finally getting married...

More than elders...

groom is on cloud9...

Finally he is going to marry his bride...but waiting for his bride at the entrance of the hall...

Relatives are teasing him very badly for his impatience...

And also they felt pity for the bride thinking how she could manage her Romeo in future...

Listing to their teasings, groom is all blushy blushy...and literally begging God to send his bride to him as soon as possible...

Few close friends of groom are feeling pity for him as from next day he will also be joining into "wife's slave club" just like them...and just got caught infront of their wives...and they trying to easy their wives...


Groom is all laughing seeing his surroundings...thinking how happy everyone are...but just waiting for his bride...

Suddenly grooms father got some call and after finishing his call...his face became sad and tears are shedding from his eyes...

He was coming towards his son...with slow steps...

Groom: pappa...Kya hua...?(what happened..?)

Groom' father: come with me beta...

Groom: but pappa...

He didn't speak anything as his father dragged him inside the car...

In the car groom was continuesly asking his father...

Groom: pappa...where r u taking me...? She will come...and she will feel bad if I am not there...

His father didn't respond anything...

Groom: pappa for god's sake please answer me something...u are scaring me...

In some time they reached city hospital...

Groom: pappa...why are we here...?

Father: come beta...

Groom: no pappa...she will be waiting for me...I have to go...why are we here...

Father: please beta...come with me...

Groom: pappa u are scaring me...

Father dragged his son inside the hospital...


So guys...how is the first shot...? I hope it is not bad...waiting for ur comments...

So awesome who is in hospital

very intersting waiting for next

very different luvd it hope not sad ending eagerly waiting for nxt dear

nice start dear me too scared update next part soon can't wait

hope nothing went wrong with ROLI...n it's a fantastic start!!👏👏...great job dear...pls go on

Originally posted by: tatmantad

Well...this confusion will be cleared in next part and now I am just working on it...I will update it soon...be prepared for it...and one more news...i may take 3 or 4 more shots to complete this...I hope u don't mind. With this...wait for the next part...

y we mind dear its gud eagerly waiting for nxt dear

seems u r confusing us...anyways, i'm excited to see if u r confusing or giving any twist😛