Arhi SS l When She Rises From The Ashes l Ch 15 l Pg 75 23/11 NEW - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
As promised here with my thoughts on your writing...
Not sure whether I liked the concept or not but enjoyed the same anyway ,I blame your writing 😊.

I hated the way Aakaash changed from bubbly's entry ,he actually forgot how much he grovelled to get payal in his life...and payal was feisty remember when she lashed on ASR ⭐️...so I loved payal episode of this ff...

Somehow I don't like Anjali being all negative...she loved her brother more than Shyam ...because when the kidnapping confrontation happened ASR n khushi couldn't prove anything against him but she still though angry but was with ASR...she was weak ,clingy wife but never a bad sister...for if my brother does the same without any proves or telling me anything I will support my spouse...she had all reasons to doubt khushi ...she even accepted khushi just because her chote loved her...forgetting that khushi was the reason of her broken relationship (she didn't know the truth) . After garima's story came out she still supported and whole heartedly accepted arshi...

Nani as usual stands tall and was my favourite of all time
I don't know what ASR did in this one but if it's nasty then him refusing to get married then I hope there is no reunion...

Anyway I will just sit back n enjoy what u have in your mind😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Drama series mostly presents female lead as a docile character...
I always love stories where the female lead possesses some strength in her behaviour
I m jst loving the story...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Such a cowardly act Akash.. not wanting the family to know about his affair, he quickly diverted the subject and signed the documents. Dadi should be shown a mirror for always bad-mouthing Garima or Khushi or Payal.
Hats off to you Nani. You were the only compassionate one there and told everyone off and even gave the hint about Manorama's future daughter-in-law if Akash marries Sheetal.

Just hope that Arnav who seems to be living in his own world, does not get a shock when he comes face to face with Khushi or her revenge.

Thanks for quick updates of this story and keep it coming. Then I won't lose the gist of the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Awesome update. Finally , Nani got enough footage . I always wondered that she never got a chance to say something so strong in the original show. Infact, dadi got a chance too in the original show , to show her attitude.
I really wanted whatever nani said , she should have said the same things infront of Payal. That would have soothed her a little. Neither she got the respect, nor the love she deserve. No amount of redemption from aakash, Maami or Dadi is going to be sufficient. Infact W*F is dadi doing in their house for last 5 years.

Moreover, inspite of everything, how Anjali could be so pathetic. Her father is no saint. Which Arnav himself accepted. Then how come Anjali can still blame payal or her mother. They are so sadistic person. They really get sadistic pleasure in torturing Payal for all these 5 years.

& even after everything, why the great Mr Raizada is tolerating Shyam for another 5 yrs. I means inspite of being spineless, if Aakash can gift himself an extra marital affair with Sheetal, then was Shyam completely out of action for last 5 years ?

If Shyam is still active on the field, then how the great saale- saab is dealing with this info ? & once a blind Anjali, always a blind Anjali.

Payal have self respect, she paid for everything while living in the Raizada house.

Whereas,
Anjali (inspite of being married) - since obviously by default her brother is earning for her, her daughter, her husband - she need not to contribute. Moreover, since 5 years is passed , I guess, her daughter is in school. Her mamaji (Arnav) is going to sponsor her entire education, since her father... god knows what is he doing these days.

Dadi - another dharti k bojh.

Bechara Arnav & Mamaji - working tirelessly for all these dharti k bojh (Anjali,. Shyam, their daughter , Dadi, Mami )

- So, all these dharti k bojh are respectful person right ?

I never had any problem with Nani & I do not mind her presence. Afterall it's her house & she has done a favour to bring Anjali & Arnav into this house. So, it obviously falls on Mamaji & Arnav to take care of her.

I really want severe punishment for them.

I really wanted to send Dadi to a solitary confinement. She is full of negative energy.

I want to send Anjali & Shyam to a faraway island, with no mode of communication & no people around - they should torture each other. Their daughter is better off without them.

For Mamiji, I want to send her to a tribal village along with Aakash bitwa. Mamaji is better off without her.

I want Arnav to work in place of HP or Aman. That would serve him better.

Well, I will think more about it.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Grt story...completely different.. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great going by payal lived and and went out from that house with dignity
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Wonderful update...

So in all this nani knew everything damn this family is on the edge of breaking apart n when miss beautiful devil comes there won't be a edge anymore bcuz they all will fall..

Akash u had such a wonderful lady n u let her go u treat her like trash n then cheat on her with trash like bimbo who is below ur wife smh I think when ur cheating u should find someone better but no u find someone worst. Lets see if u will repent when fury hits u no spine prick.

Nani i so love what u said mami n dadi need to be duck in a pool of sharks they r disgusting ur son is nothing but a no good waste man.

Anjali stop crying u know u wanted payal to go too ur so stupid n blind.

Arnav i can't wait for u to get what is coming to you I hope she shows you no mercy after all u have done to her, u n ur family are a sick set of pathetic human beings apart from nani...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I soo hate this mami n dadi..but anjali most...
Before accusing someone who is victim by her father she should know it was her who is dirty blood n bad fame...
I just want to see her reaction after knowing her husband true colors n know what a dumb n stupid n useless she was...n how cruel she was to do this to payal n kushi...n also saying this about garima...
I would have loved if payal would have told about akash affair show him what a scum bag is he to his family...
But alas payal is too dignified to do it..
I just want that sheetal to become mamis bahu n dadis grand dil...n so called anjali ki so called nanand...
I just want to be a leech ...n show them torture along with them to akash...
Coz I know from nanus word she won't be faithful to akash ...it will show him mirror n what he last...
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting. ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: koyalpari

Superb.

This ff is becoming more interesting,
Loved this nani who support payal, she knew everything n she also know that time has come n this time truth will win, both sisters will get justice.
Someone should question ASR about akash's realation with another women, what will he do, break realation with akash?
Time has come to face mirror, I really want to know arnav's reaction.
Eagaly waiting for next update.


If this ff is like Ekta Kapoor's style like u said , I think u should update everyday😉



Yes ..I agree with you...would love to see Arnav's reaction..

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