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Posted: 8 years ago
I felt about the Goa plan more than suvi understanding if they hv to postpone, it's Neel who will be caught, it's a catch 22 right, should you give yourself some private moments to let your married life fester before you get to the grind . By God, they need those moments. Or is the need of the hour more the tender aged children who are irreplaceable part of the grid !! Tough one. Hope they find a decent balance.
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Posted: 8 years ago
We are a submarine with Sosy and ID. We can sink under water with Sosy and we can float over water with Air with ID time to time. We have been under water for too long . This crew member is hoping that the captain says 'Aye' for a change to command steering this sub up to Surface for Air .
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

We are a submarine with Sosy and ID. We can sink under water with Sosy and we can float over water with Air with ID time to time. We have been under water for too long . This crew member is hoping that the captain says 'Aye' for a change to command steering this sub up to Surface for Air .


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Posted: 8 years ago
Shapath ani pratigya naahi


"He is fine!!! Hum aapko KEH rahe hain na?" Neel was impatient and upset Suvi wanted to can the Goa trip

"Wo chota hei Neel" Suvi said clearly

"He is. But he is not going to get whatever he wants" Neel was adamant

"Abhi sab both naya hei nei?" Suvi clarified

"Humey yoon lag raha hai, ki agar humne aaj unki baat maan le, to woh yeh samajh lenge ki hamesha unki baat maan li jaayegi" Neel spoke furiously

"Aise nei Neel... Neel" she begged

"pehli larai aur woh bhi ek din ke andar" he laughed out loud

She smiled as her heart raced... this was all new

"Arey aap chaunk gayin? Shaadi aadhi larai hei. saare vachan sanskrit mein yahi baat batati hain" he laughed heartily

Her heart sang with joy at his simple sense of humor

Rutwik never fought with her

The scum that he was
He was afraid if he ever did then the cat wud come out of the bag

They WALKED HAND IN HAND outside the society that night.
Suvi at first couldnt believe herself it was happening to her

Everyone ate in a circle on the Worli living room's floor.

The food was simple, pao bhaji, kulfi falooda and ice cream

"Mast bana hey" Suvi declared shyly biting into a spicy green pepper

"Kitna mirchi khayiyega?" Neel muttered

"ye to kuch mirchi nahi hey baba" she exclaimed joyously, in her element after tasting the food so familiar to her

"Hamey aapko rules samjhane padenge" he whispered

She turned red, looking around self consciously

Aabha's kids sat with Aadhya in a triangle giggling about something

Aabha was quiet and looked tired

Saksham, Mamaji and Mamiji talked family politics

Pushkar and his wife mumbled occasionally

Amma looked weak but happy

"Mere ko Hindi seekhne ka hey nei?" she asked Neel for clarification

"Woh beshaq aap nahi seekhen, par raat ko mirchi ekdum mana hai" he chuckled softly

She turned a deeper shade of red

The walls were barren, the artefacts were gone from the wall cabinetry

It was a different apartment...
It rained and stopped and rained back up again...
Now when they were walking it was breezy and moist

The best time in Mumbai

The tree leaves shook sending a spray of water now and then...
the traffic was sparse.

Autowalas smoked beedis with the tarp up, relieved they got a break from the weather gods

Street hawkers conducted brisk business, frying eggs on giant skillets

Suvi was wearing a pink chikan suit that appeared like purple under the halogen street lights

The dupatta was a dark pink and purple tie dye in silk
She couldnt believe it was even her walking, she frequently checked her right hand (he held her left) to make sure it was indeed her.


The women that walked with their spouses, looked curiously at her/them, as they do in India when they spot newlyweds

Neel wore his side open white chikan kurta and chudidar

He seemed to dress more tradionally than men in the 30s did in india these days

Cars honked and splattered water all over, they jumped from sidewalk to sidewalk avoiding the spray

"Yaha raat ko chalna mushkil hai" he was frustrated

His phone beeped

He looked at it fishing it out from his pocket

He paused and typed for a few minutes

"Amma ko neend nahi aati agar hum sair par nikalte hain to. Usually hum unke soney ka intezaar karte phir nikalte the' Neel inadvertently shared info about his nightly routine with Nupur

Suvi nodded agreeing

"Mumbai daraawna hei nei" she said

"Nahi Amma samajhti hain unka beta bahut mashhoor hain" Neel laughed at himself

"Isi raaste chalte the dono?" Suvi asked

Neel clenched her hand

"I am sorry pata nahi kaise nikal gaya" he apologized

"neel its OK... mei jaanti hei nei?" she smiled

"U probably dont want to hear about it the first time you walk with me" he said sadly

"Mere ko walk karne ka khushi hei" she smiled secretly. "Mei Delhi mei balcony se raat ku" she stopped

"Dilli ki garmi bhi shandaar hai" he agreed amused

"Kitna time chalte the dono?" she asked

He squeezed her hand again...

"Neel agar mere ko jaan ne ka nei tha to mei nahi poochti thi" she said quietly

"so there is no anger?" he asked surprised, looking at her face

"Kyon?" Suvi asked shocked

"U know... I was married to her" Neel reminded

"Par Nupur ne mere waaste kuch galat nahi kara nei?" she said simply

He looked sad when she mentioned Nupur's name

It was her turn to squeeze his fingers

"Mere ko sun ne ka hei Neel. kuch tension nei karne ka" she said softly

"Aapse humne is liye shaadi nei ki, ki hum aapka fayda uthaakar " "umm... I shud be using you for emotional healing" he said angrily

"aise karne ke jaisa mere ku maloom nahi chal raha hey" she said

"Aaj aap chahkar poochh rahin hain" "Kal anjaane mein hamare mooh se koi baat aapko chubh gayi to?" he was afraid

"Koi promise karke shaadi to nei kiya hei na?" she asked
There was no vow never to mention Rutwik or Nupur again

Nope...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vani & Preeti your fave story is back
I was missing this couple now

Hahahhahah
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Vani & Preeti your fave story is back

I was missing this couple now

Hahahhahah


Welcome to our world 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautifully voiced fears..tentative steps at intimacy..establishing a comfort zone that is new to both of them...the confidence with which Suvi accepts the past, both hers and his 😳
And ID is back with a bang !! Thanks as always Nisha and reiterating, welcome to the li'l world of ID lovers. We are uncompromising in our stand that these protagonists need all the happiness possible, packaged with the biggest bow available
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you Nisha.
I love Mumbai.

Walking on sea face in the evening is best. You describe things so well.

Suvi, is remarkable women. She deserves Neel.


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Posted: 8 years ago
Truth bring said out loud but so simply and softly
Both trying not to hurt each other
Lovely aren't they
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Posted: 8 years ago
Last two weeks random thoughts many mornings... will there ever be a note to read saying missing the ID couple... 😊

Enjoy ladies, yes it's bk with a bang

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