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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: i_am_PRASANNA

AWESOME cum FANTASTIC👏😃...very very glad with ur comeback, devika dear...it's so brightening😊😊
LOVED all the back to back updates...Beautiful narration with even more Beautiful dialogues...
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ROSID sweet cute scene is just so AWWWESOMME😛...n also love ROSID -amar's, Roli-amar's, Sid-amar's bonding...
Fell in love with ur ff❤️❤️...so pls update very very soon

i love u...u know...whenever i read ur comments...that gives me energy and boosts me to write...i happy for all of you liking it...thank u soo much of the long comment akka...i feel so encouraged...thank u agan...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: angelsaranya
wow lovely update dear...rosid conversation was so beautiful...aww my blushing girl...i loved it...eagerly waiting for the next update...thx for pm...😊

hey..thank u for loving it...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: ayeshasif
Rosid conversation is so nice waiting for the next eagerly

thabk u for the comment dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: RajRosid
Finally you are back. Whole story is Amazing. Loved it and waiting for next. Please send me pm when u gave update.

yeah...i am back...thank u dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Part:19(b)

Trio went to the water world...roli was very excited to play with water like a kid...

Amar webt to purchase tickets leaving two...

Sid: roli...listen carefully...stay with us only okay..? Where ever u want to go take us along with u okay...? But dint go anywhere without telling us...

Roli pouted and said: i am not a kid u know...

Sid: that i can see it...dont you get enough proof from morning experience...? Did u forget...? Or u want me to prove that i dont think u as a kid...

Roli just closed her listening to his not so innicent words...while her cheecks are rising sids favourite colour...

Sid: by the way roli...this red colour suits u too good...

Listening to this roli opened her eyes wondering she is not wearing any red colour...

Roli: have u lost ur sight... ?? I am wearing black colour not any red colour...

Sid: i am not talking about deess baby...

Sid came forward while roli looked confused...he just carsed her cheecks with back of his palm...while roli just closed her eyes...

Sid: i said about colour...i think i can seen it more frequently from now...

While roli looked scared...she never thought sid would be flirting to this extent...

She dont have any words to reply him...

Meanwhile amar came back with tickets...

Both were back to their previous positions...

Amar: i was totally dead in that que...we should never come here at weekends...

Sid: hmm..lets go inside...roli u remember what i said right...? Dont go anywhere without us...crowd is more here...ok

Roli just nodded to this...with out looking at him...

When there were about to go...sid holded roli's hand possessively and moved forward...while roli didnt move a bit...sid turned and asked what happened to which she replied nothing..and started walking..

While amar is all smiled and whishpered to sid..:dont scare her man...
Sid: shut up...(to amar)

Roli: why...?

Sid: will tell u later ok..? These are the locker keys...u change and come we will be waiting...
Roli nodded and took keys and went away to change...

She came back after some time...

Trio went for many water game like water falls...sliding...swimming pool...wave pool...roli was enjoying like a child in all this as if they are very precious to her...all were enjoying a lot...it felt like relaxation to the tensions they were facing...

On Such time when they were dancing in the rain dance, there were few idiots who were passing comments on all girls over there...

Roli was unaware of all these... she also went to rain dance and started dancing crazily...

Guy 1: yaar...look at that hot chick...

Guy2: gosh...i wish she is dancing with me in my own washroom...under me...

Guy1: u are so selfish man...

Guy2: kya karu yaar..maan!! Look at her boobs and look at her tumkas...the way her hip is shaking..

Both guys went towards roli not noting the red burning eyes behind them...

They reached roli...
They about to press her hip...couldnt do...instead felt pain in their hands...

Yeah...sid was the one twisting their hands...

Sid: how dare you both...

Both guys are wincing with pain while roli panicked...

Roli: siddhanth what are you doing..? Leave them...

Amar: u dont know anything roli..stay quiet they deserve this treatment...

Roli: but what happened..? Why is sid this angry..?

Amar: will tell u later...

While those guys tried to defend themselves but failed immensely...

Sid: how dare you both to pass comments.. how dare both...

Saying this sid hit those guys mouths with his fist...which us now bleeding...when they tried to defend themselves and were about to hit sid...they were nocked down by both amar and sid...

They both are yelping in pain...

Roli tried to control the situation as it seems attention seeking...as everyone looking at them..

Roli: guys..stop it...or u will kill them...siddhant please cool down...bhai aap bhi...whatever it is...it is not the way to solve it...see everyone are looking at us...lets leave from here...

She pulled sid's hand whole is still holding that guy's shirt...who doesnt seem to calmdown...

Roli: please siddhant...for my sake..calm down..please...

To this sid left their shirt and turned to roli...she just nodded her head...and pulled him out from there...

While trio were about to move from there...those recovered somehow..

Guy1: u dont know whom u have touch...

Hearing this rosid and amar stopped on their tracks...

Sid: i dont know...so tell me whom i are...

Guy2: u know ACP..?

All trio seems shocked to hear this as sid is ACP...

While those guys thought that they are scared of ACP and thought to scare them more...whereas sid smirked and asked...

Sid: nope...

Guy1: u dont know Who ACP is...still u beat his brother showing guy2..!!

While roli and amar were like they dont know whether to laugh or pity them...looking at sid..amar tried take the situation in his hands before sid do something to them..

Amar: so guys know who ACP is...

Guy1: ofcourse...thats what i said...

Amar: then u saw the ACP...?

Guy1: thats what i meant right...why do you ask me that..?(looked tensed at the way he was asking questions...)

Amar: so...u mean to say that guy(guy2) is ACP's brother..?

Guy2: r u mad..? How many times he will tell that i am ACP's brother..?

Amar: i appreciate ur guts...by the way how can u not identify ur brother who is standing infront of u...?

Those guys looked confused...

Amar: y r u both confused..? U said u r ACP's brother right...? So why are u not identifying when ACP himself is standing infront of u...?(said showing sid)...

While guys just looked from amar to sid with shocked face...

Guys: sorry sir...(and ran away from there within a second)

To which roli burst out laughing...

Sid also smiled shaking his head thinking how people are using police name without knowing itself...

Amar also joined them in laughing...

After sometime trio went from there changing their dresses...

Rosid reached their house dropping amar on the way...both slept off with the most tiring day...

Peek-a-boo to the upcoming story:

Guy: what do you mean u are yet to find her...? Its been 6 months since we lost her...there is no use of this oldman now...we have to finish him but before that u should find her...do u all understand...? What for am i paying u all...? One week...u all have only one week of time to find her...else all of u prepare to dig ur graves...