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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: himani_rosid

no need yr just need to read last few updates happy that you are back update next soon

ok...i will...but have to work on it..as i said before i have lost all of my backups except the last one...so have think again...i will try...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part :18(a)

Flashback:

Sid telling about how he buried all the bodies of their loved ones...

Driver kaka has joined me in an orphanage...i dont know what to do...i frlt numb...

One moment i had everything in my life...a loving mom,a caring dad,my best friend, my mama and maami who are not any less than my mom and dad...
the other moment...i have nothing with me, no one with me to call me as their own...

Seeing teary eyes of roli and aman...sid tried to light up the topic...

Anu maam...she was the one who took care after me...never let me feel left out...there
This kuthe(showing aman) sat down crying...

Aman remembering their old days started smiling...

Aman: oh hello...for ur kind information i was not the one crying you know...

Sid: oh really..?(sid smirked)

Aman: ya ya i cried...ab kush...?

Sid: u know the reason for which this idiot cried roli...??

When roli interestingly nodded no...sid laughed out thinking and continued...

Sid: he cried because mmmphhh...(aman covered his mouth stopped from talking saying he will continue)

Aman: yaar roli...u tell me... if u like a person and wants that person to be ur friend...
And whenever u meet that person and that person ignoers you...and doesnt give any shit about you...

What will you feel at the age of six...?

Roli got it...

Aman: got it right...? All i want was friendship from this bandha.. but this idiot was like my misty is my friend...other than her no one are my friends...so i cried...


Sid: ha ha...without noticing only...i know that you were crying...?

Roli: so...what happened..? When did you both became friends...?

Sid: that time itself roli...this idiot made such a scene to which anu maam came asked me to accept his friendship...i had no other option other than accepting this trouble...

Aman huffed and puffed listening the word trouble...

While roli laughed out loudly...


The part is not over guys...as today is feiendship day...i tried to write this...i know there is no rosid in this...will try to update in the continution of this...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy friendship day to one and all...love you guys...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update yaar. ...poor sid. ...when he recognised his roli. ...hahahah aman. ...waiting for nxt
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tatmantad

Happy friendship day to one and all...love you guys...

happy friendship day dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part:18(b)

The day they spent by sid and aman puling eachothers legs and playing nokjoks at eachother...

Roli was smiling seeing them...wished where are u pappa..i miss u...

Aman: roli...u know everything about us... now tell me about yours...(asked suddenly getting everyones attention...)

While sid looked at aman and nodded...

Roli smile suddenly vanished into some thin air...

Roli closed her eyes...she started getting flashes of how her amma maami maamu were killed brutally infront of her eyes...

She started sweating...

Sid and aman noticed...

Sid: its ok roli...its already late now...anyways i have to make some important phone call...u guys carryon and i will join u in few minutes...we will have dinner and go to sleep...

Sid left from there leaving both...aman sighed and came to roli and sat beside her...

Roli was nervous...aman holded rolis hands...

Aman: its ok roli...if u are not comfortable leave it...we wont force u...

Roli: not like that bhai...i will tell u both...but not now...atleast not until i find answers for myself...

Aman: ok as ur wish...but tell me..what plans u have for tommorow...?

Roli: aah actually i dont know bhai...i said na..i dont know anything here...

Aman: ok we will plan once after sid joins us...till that timewe will see what to eat ok...?

Saying this...aman was about to get up but stopped by pull in his hand by roli...

Before aman could say anything roli hugged him...
Roli: thank u so much bhai...thank u both for taking care of me...

Aman: hey kiddo...what is this...common what did i do..?

Sid was boing by jealous though he knows that it was a brotherly hug..still he felt rights on roli...its only his right to console her...hug her...pamper her...everything...he feels roli should do everything with him only...reason_he dont know...
So he tried to join them atleast tried to hide his jealous...

Sid: this is not fair guys...where am i in this hug...?

Aman: u are such an as***e man...i am her brother u know right...

Sid glared at him and roli burst into pearls of laughter...

While aman whishpered to sid that someone is burning jealous...take a chillpill dude...

Sid sighed and led both of them to the nearby restaurent...again dinner went by pulling eachothers legs...



Yet to finish this part...again this part solely goes to aman and roli as tommorow is ralshabandhan...so happy ralshabandhan in adwance guys...will continue...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Part:18(c)

Trio planned for the next day events and for now to take rest as they had a very tiring day...

Wishing good night to each other...roli went to one bk and sid and amar went to the other bk...

Amar: now tell me...what was the call about...

Sid: remember the file u gave me...? Yeah...it doesnt contain any useful details yaar...i dont know where this goes and ends up...we have to close this case soon before it goes to CBI...how much ever i try..it ends up on the same place where it started...its so frustrating yaar...

Aman: dont worry sid...think with cool mind...we will get any link to proceed further...

Sid: how to cooly amar...just listen to the points...


1. roli met with an accident which according to the locals it looks like a break failure...but actually it is not...we have seen in cctv right...
If it was a break failure...then driver must have horned it or might have made the vehicle out of control right...? But how that man straightly hit roli and went away...

So, it a very master planned murder...

2. When we search for the driver whom we saw on cctv...we gat shocking news right...he was dead before the week of accident...
And that vehicle seems to be an old one and it was hit badly...

3. Even roli doesnt opens up anything...if she tells anything..atleast we can see through it...but i dont want to pressure her...so knowing truth from her seems closed door...

4. Not in one certificates, there any details of roli other than her college which doesnt makes any sense...

Amar: it does makes sense siddhant...take a deep breath and think now...

Sid did what amar said...

Sid: it means...there is no point continuing the case from here...

Amar: yeah...

Sid: but it is not easy...

Amar: yes it is not easy...but we should try atleast right...

Sid nodded...

Amar: so...whats the plan...

Amar smiled seeing sid smirking...

Amar: rahul...?

Sid: yup...he is the best...

Amar: ok then...its cool...lets sleep for now..rest we will discuss tomorrow...

Sid: yeah very tiered...

Both lied on the bed but both are far away from the sleep...

Amar: sid can i ask u one thing...?

Sid: from when did u start asking permission bey..?

Amar : be serious man...

Sid: okay okay...

Amar : dont you think you thinking too deeply...i mean..look at you...you solved many cases before...few got success and few got failed...but this case, i have never seen u this stressed out...

Sid: i dont know amar...whenever i look at roli and think about her...all i remember is my mitsy...the way she talks the way she behaves...most importantly her eyes...exactly looks like my mitsy...

Whenever i look into rolis eyes, there is a lot in it yaar...i dont know what it is...but mixed emotions...pain,love,confused alot but mostly it is pain in it... i feely like taking her away from this world and protect her where there no pain should present in her eyes other than love...

Amar: love for you...(said before sid could complete)

Sid: i dont know what it is amar...

Amar: its love man...i have seen it in our eyes...when roli looked troubled..the pain i have seen in ir eyes sid...when she spoke freely to me i saw the jealousy in ur eyes...whenever she smiles..i have seen love in your eyes... dont think too much man...

Sid: i dont want to think any thing other than this case amar...solving this case is more important than knowing my feelings...lets first solve this...

Amar: siddhant...life is very short...only few people gets chances to live completely in it...dont push away those chances...solving cases is not a new thing to you...they will always wait for you one after the other...i have seen you suffering siddhant...
Now just imagine your life without roli...?

Sid grasped for breath just to think about it...

Amar: you cant breath right..? To which sid nodded...dont push her away siddhanth...who knows..with ur care she might opens up with u...so think well before deciding anything...

I suggested u all these things as a friend..but let me suggest you as roli's brother...dont ever let her in if you are not sure about this..dont give her false hopes when u cannot go for it...ok...?

Sid: i will think about it...for now lets sleep okay..? Good night...

Both slept off with their determined minds...waiting for the dawn...



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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice yaar. ..cute update. ...I luv aman. ...so great yaar. ..waiting for nxt. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ufff...its a very long update from me so far...hope u all like it...again i wish all of u a very happy friendship day and rakshabandhan in advans...love u guys...waiting for ur valuable comments...let me know ur views ragarding it...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sarahrosid

Nice yaar. ..cute update. ...I luv aman. ...so great yaar. ..waiting for nxt. .

thank u so much dear..by the way its amar here...

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