Arshi FF: The Broken Hearts ( NEW LINK ADDED) pg 151

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#341

Finally some of the mysteries were solved...still wondering how can Arnav break her heart knowing that she is terribly broken before...and why is he giving her good hopes. I really feel bad for Khushi...she indeed had a difficult childhood.

Such a beautiful chapter...

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#342

Loved the update. By reading the teaser I thought Arnav would go all on ignorance trip with Khushi. And he did plan that.. but fate intervened and he had to take back his resolution.

I liked the way Khushi opened her heart to Arnav. Sharing your grief and talking about it to someone really helps you a lot. It lightens your heart and you feel really good. So I think Khushi did he right thing by sharing her past and pains in them with Arnav.

And our dear boy Arnav now realises that the words he spoke to Khushi were not just mere words but soothing promises which he might have made unknowingly to Khushi while making her feel comfortable.

So now let's see if he is able to live up to the promises rendered.

All the best and waiting for the next update.

Lots Of Love..😊😊

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lin2002

@lin2002

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#343

He knows abt her past...abt her fears...then also he betrayd her...and..break her heart...surprising..

and it is heartbreaking to see ...khushi dreamg abt arnav to be her saviour...its gonna break...like badly..

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1076334

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#344

khushi had a very sad past and I feel very bad for her.

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#345

Subject to change the way of perception to life... I'm glad to be a part of it... 😊

Love your piece of creation... ❤️

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#346

Sad to hear Khushi's past.. however Arnav every effort to be away from Khushi is falling flat and once again he is there for her and to listen and console her.. he is becoming her strength.. loved the amazing update..

thanks for pm 😊

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ddda2006

@ddda2006

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#347

Great storyline, I have read your previous ones too.

Story gets updated on time ( and you always complete your stories) , We have to thank you for that.

Please continue with great service

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#348

That was one dark ride through the darkest tunnel...wow!! You have captured the painful essence of Khushi's struggle's so beautifully. As a reader, the only saving grace for me was Khushi having a nightmarish free night filled with happy thoughts. Would this be a start of a happy phase? Can't wait to read what's next 😊

Thank you sarunilicious.. for recommending this story - it's truly amazing.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#349

Rose,

A beautiful continuation. Though to be honest, I had to go back and read chapter 5 again to remember where we left off...poor Khushi - what an abysmally sad childhood. She is naturally inclined to feel she has no one to call her own. This also makes her look at Arnav as a saviour in more ways than one. Arnav despite his monologues to his diary and his thoughts on staying away is hardly able to do so, and lends her a shoulder in the darkest of times. Hopefully he will not feel angered at this development later on and hold it against Khushi. Khushi's dreams that you started and ended with clearly helped to trace the journey from despair to hope. Wonderful update! Cannot wait to see the next one real soon...

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 9 years ago