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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Hey Aqua... How can you write something so so awesome...I loved it...

How cute can arnav and khushi get? And what can I say about you... Your so so cute and crazy to write such whacky, lovely piece of work...

Thanks for making me smile

Sri

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Oh one more thing... Your filmy dialogues are superb... laughed at many places...I can appreciate more... But I'm not good at words like you...

Thanks

Sri

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#413

FINALLY... sorry sorry lakhon sorry... I'm this late... bohot buri hoon mai 😒 but late hone ka ek faeda hua... I read it all over again... from the beginning... 😃 hell khushi is as crazy as one can get...😆 and ASR, he's super cute... perfect gentleman... loved them and all the filminess in their relationship... bohot zyada adorable hai...❤️ also loved all the couples, and non-couples on the way of recognising them... beautiful story Aayat...👏 ek kaam karo, every once in a while diary entry dete raho... sometimes his, sometimes her...😛 this can go on forever, u know 😉

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#414

This story had a very Emma-ish feel to it (Emma is a novel by Jane Austen in which the titular character rejoices in match-fixing- the matches being completely, utterly, disastrously wrong).

But thank god your Khushi wasnt like the self-absorbed, irritating, unbearable heroine of the aforementioned book. Probably it is the right balance of pagal and cute that you achieved 👍🏼

I knew right from the start, Arnav ko kuch kuch huwa hai for Khushi and Khushi is so involved in all love stories but hers, she won't realise a thing. And I was right *pats my own back*

And come on! Koyi kitna bhi hottie ho, jab dil lagey khadoos se toh hottie kya cheez hai? 😛

PS: I really enjoyed reading Khushi's mother. We know where Khushi gets her dramatic genes from.

PPS: Khuda meri bhi ma ko Arnav jaisa damaad gift karein 😛 😆

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#415

very refreshing sweet cute story

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Its 1:45 am and iam grinning like an idiot here. You sure have some magic..some charm when it comes to writing. Had so much fun reading this.llooking forward to more work of yours..

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shalinii173

@shalinii173

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#417

I just found your ss. . am I smiling? grinning? That was really sweet. 😳

Loved it.

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#418

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#419

This was such a sweet and feel good story. I could relate to this khushi because even I overthink and write diary entry. Fact - write diary entries now And laugh at your stupidity years later when you re read it.
Keep writing :*