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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Interesting start,

Loved this concept,

Waiting for the next part.

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

NK = Hottie ?!?!?! Nahin!!!! I hope ASR continues to keep a firm eye on her ;) Seems to me that ...

"Pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kar diya

Tera ban baitha hai mera jiya"

This is such a sweet style of writing. You get a wonderful feel of a young girl on the cusp of discovering life and all it's beauty and angst. Looking forward to more of her ruminations.

Ayaat, you'll have to post on the General requests / complaints thread, in the forum where you had created your index thread, to ask the Mods to reopen it.

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Beautiful update,

Loved it so much.

Last few lines of this part made me smile.

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Interseting start cannot wait to read the feast of the story!!!!

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Raji Senthilkumar

@RajiSobtian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow beautiful start
Loved it 👍🏼
Eagerly waiting for upcoming updates

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Jessie

@jessjazz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

A good intro via her diary page. If she says her name is long, wait till she actually knows what ASR stands for. Is ASR the head chef or manager? Why is he broody? Hey, Khushi, just a tip for you. Guys go through pms as well... haha

Edited by jessjazz - 9 years ago