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Aslam Walaikum everyone
Okay well this is first ever os in this Fanfiction forum 😃 and am so nervous please do ignore mistakes 😃

Os Chahat

Muskan's P.o.v


Muskan's pic

I walked towards the balcony and took a deep breath and looked at the Best businesswomen of the year's theropy in my hands i smiled i just won this award last night and am so happy after all i have worked so hard day and night just to win this award just to keep my family happy , just to give them all the happiness which they have been craved for , just to show the peoples who thinks girls are nothing but just a tissupaper they thinks girls can't do anything their thinking is so cheap right ? just like my husband opps Ex-husband just the thought of my ex-husband brings water in my eyes no matter how much i have tried but still i just can't forget about that men whom once i have loved so much but he never loved me i trusted him so much but he always had broke my trust He even has beaten me so many times but i always had forgive him he even slapped me in front of so many peoples just because the food which i have mad wasn't good but still i have forgive him my friends told me on the very third week of our marriage that he's cheating on me but i never listened to my friends and i clearly remember that day when he broke my heart when i find out that's he's really cheating on me that night i asked him only one thing " Why "

~ Flash back ~

" Why " I asked with teary eyes


Rahul's pic

" Muskan baby listen " Rahul ( My husband ) said and tried to held my hand but i raised my hand

" Just give me answer why wh..y you d..id t..his to me " I asked to him while tears were running down to my cheeks

He stared at me for few seconds and then said calmly " Because i never had love you and never will "

I looked at him shockingly how can he said that of course he did love me we had an love marriage after all he used to love me from college days or he used to lust me ? no no no he can't do this no i want my answers

" You don't love me huh you don't love me " I asked pointing my finger on me

He nodded with out having any regret my family was right yeah they were right they told me that he's not good for me but i ignored them all just for him now am regretting it why i did that

I could feel tears were running down on my cheeks

" Hey don't cry like this i mean if you want then i can give you divorce " He said

It took almost a minute for me to realize the meaning of his words just then i glared at him angrily how can he speak such low words

I slapped him hardly and said wiping my tears " You know what am regretting it why did i marry you its my biggest mistake and about love then i would like to remained you that you were the only one who have proposed me in college days you were the only once who said that i love you "

" That was past the truth is i never had loved you it was lust " He yelled loudly

Yeah right lust love is nothing but just a lust

I looked at him angrily am hurt am so hurt now i have to get out from our mansion no this mansion no HIS MANSION

I took a deep breath and was about to go from there but he hold my hand tightly i turned around and in my heart am hoping that maybe he will apologize maybe he will say that he loves me but his next words make me realize that how wrong i was expecting that

" Going back to your home then okay go and please don't show me your face again and yes one more thing I divorce you i divorce you i divorce you " He said and smirked widely

~ Flash back ends ~

I came out from my thoughts when i realized that someone is hugging me from behind

I turned around and saw my mother who was smiling at me and looking at me with care and love

" Mom " I said and hugged her tightly

She hugged me back and asked with concern " What happened baby you were crying right "

Ah she knows me very well i broke the hug and looked at her " Just remembered the past memories mom " I said i felt my voice become heavy

She shook her head and made me sat on couch and she too sat beside me on the couch

" Listen baby i know its not easy for you to forget the past memories to forget your ex-husband rahul But you can at least try look baby you are going to start a new life with Prem tomorrow is your marriage and am sure that he will keep you always happy so please try to forget that stupid memories " She said and i could sense her voice is also becoming heavy i can see her eyes are becoming wet without wasting a second i hugged her tightly

" Dare to cry if u will cry na then i won't marry that monkey Prem " I warned her angrily

She chuckled and hugged me back

After few minutes of chit chatting mom goes to downstairs while am still sitting on the couch time moves so fast na

Suddenly my phone started to buzz i picked my phone and saw the caller name Its Prem

Prem's pic

I nervously picked up the call

" Aslam Walaikum " I heard his voice

" Walaikum salam " I said nervously

" How are you Muskan " He asked lovingly i smiled he's so nice to me mom says he loves me so much

" Am fine prem " I answered smilingly

And after half an hour we ended the call and all the time i was blushing i don't know whats happening with me firstly i thought that i would never love some one as i loved rahul yes i loved him so much but he never did my parents were right he wasn't good person for me my parents told me that he's bad but i never listened to my parents but that day when rahul had divorced me i was regretting so much and still doing yes am regretting that why did i married rahul why did i fall in love with him why did i let him to play with my emotions , That day when surya had divorced me i came here at my parents home and i told them everything they always have support me and then my parents brings Prem in my life my parents said that they have fixed my marriage with prem and he's a famous businessman firstly i was so shocked i denied to them but they convince me to at least meet him and then will decide what to do firstly i didn't wanted to meet him but then i finally got agree and yes my parents told me that they already have tell my past story to prem and he don't have any problem with it he's such a nice person na i still remember that lines which he have spoke last month when i came from dad's office i was about to enter into the house but then my eyes catch his view i imediaently stopped my self and don't know why but i start listening what he was saying

" I know sir that her husband had divorced her but whats her fault in it i think you should forget the past uncle and she's innocent i wanna marry her i wanna give her all the happiness which she have craved for " prem's words made my eyes to wet in water

Bas since that day i also start understanding him and now i will marry him

~ At wedding day ~

" Am so nervous mom " I said looking at her

She smiled and came near me " And why you are nervous " She asked loving

Why am nervous i my self don't know about it then how will i tell mom

" I , I don't know " I answered with an pout

My mom chuckled at me and said " See beta it happens with every girl on her wedding day now come you are getting late "

I nodded and goes with her towards downstairs

~~

" Miss muskan kia apko ye nikah qubool hai " Asked Maulvi sahab to me

I blushed and said " Yes "

" Wait " Suddenly we all heard a voice

but when we turned around to see the voice's owner we all became shocked H..e He's rahul ? B..ut what he's doing here

" You can't marry him " He said angrily his eyes were red with anger

What did he said why i can't who's he to say this he's not my husband anymore

" WHO ARE YOU TO DECIDE IT " My mom asked through gritted teeth

Woa i love you mom

" Her husband " Rahul answered making me all shocked again

he's not my husband he had divorced me

" Ex husband " Prem said angrily i looked at him he has clenched his fist maybe in anger 😕

" What ever i can't let her to marry with some one else other than me she loves me only me " Rahul said and took a deep breath

what he's saying i don't love him anymore why would i he had hurt me so much

I looked at my mom who was giving me shocked looks

I finally broke my silence " I Don't love you Mister rahul " I said confidently

" Muskan listen " Saying this he walked towards me

Prem was about to stop him but i gave him " no " look

He nodded and moved a side

" Muskan listen " Rahul said now standing in front of me

" I know that i have done so wrong with you but please forgive me am so sorry i will never hurt you again please do marry me again " He said

I can't stop my self anymore my blood is boiling i finally did what i wanted to i slapped him hardly making everyone shocked

Mom looked at me with widen eyes but i don't care about anyone's reaction right now ...

" Muskaaann " Rahun said angrily

Now he's showing me his anger what do he think of himself huh such an bas***d he is i don't believe that once i was married to this men this idiot men who always had broke my trust who always had hate me now he's come back and saying that marry me he's mad didn't he think twice before giving me divorce didn't he think for once that how much hurt i was he didn't care for me he never did

" What muskan huh what do you think of ur self you idiot ? huh you will betray me divorced me hurt me and then you will come one day and will say sorry then i will forgive you ? Huh have you gone mad or what RAHUL and what were you saying you can't let me to marry someone else ? You are you to take that decision its my life rahul its my life and i will decide what is best for me i will marry PREM NOT YOU got it " I said angrily and slapped him once again

Now am feeling relived i looked at prem who's having tears in his eyes i smiled at him he's such an nice person and now i love him he always have support me always have took care of me and i know he will never hurt me

" You both are getting late " My mom and friend said together

Prem walks towards him and hugged me tightly

I smiled and hugged him back

" Ahem getting late " My friend said teasing

We broke the hug and then we looked at rahul who was watching us with open mouth

" You may leave now " I said calmly looking at him

And then after few minutes we get married


Hey guys 😃 please hit like 😃 and do comment 😃 love you all 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrts sour dr
Nyc os dr
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awesome ...
thnks 4 d pm..
haye tiger shroff looking cool...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful and dramatic OS Sora... Wonderfully written.. Just felt bad that my crush is a villain in this OS😭 Love you Varun... Forget Muskaan😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww ...Selfish Rahul...he cheated, hurted Muskan so much...

When she get married with Prem...he want to ruin her life again...

Wow Muskan...strong girl...she claped him...make him speechless...

Finally she get married... Amazing update...dear..

Thanks for pm...Sweety..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS dear
Beautifully written
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo on new story dear...
It was quite emotional...
I understand that what ever happened with her was in the past and now she have moved on with someone else...
I cant even imagine what she must have gone through when rahul told her that she can see other men while she is still married..
Prem brought happiness in her life..
And on the marriage day her ex suddenly decides that he wants her back...as if..
she is strong minded women and is what I liked the most in the os..
great job...loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CONGO FOR NEW OS SORU
AWESOME OS

i just loved muskan's character
thanks for pm dear
Edited by Akdhalover6898 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I liked your story and you are very well chosen pic for the characters!
It is very an accurate portrayal of emotional blackmail of Rahul. People of this type are dangerous not only physical violence, but that completely break down proper pride and self-respect of his partner. His behavior at the wedding -- "Dog on the hay" (c).

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent os soru..
Story of a girl who has seen many ups and downs in her life..
That ba****d rahul divorced her saying that he never loved her..
He left her thinking that she won't ever be able to stand again..
But she proved him wrong..she did hard work and won the award for the best business woman.
Prem came in her life and again filled her life with loads of love..
Rahul again came back in her life on her marriage day but this time she gifted him beautiful slaps..
Thanku for pm

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