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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prasannakamila

Finally hamaraa rains ki shadi ho gayi raj ne yeah acha kiya ki alekh ko sab kuch bata diya
Ab alekh ki hothe hui darna kya...but ab raj naina ka dil todnewala hai
Pls pls jaldi se raj ki misunderstanding clear kardo pls pls
Dash wala ud nd emotional
Eagerly waiting for next ud
Cont.soon



thanks alote dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajveernainalov

Sigh of relief...bina kisi avroadh ke vivah sampann huya...
Var-vadhu ko mera ashirwaad
Haan to thnkew jii...apne monday ko bola to monday ko hi update aa gyii..thnk u soo much
Now about the update-
Ritu...tum sudhrogi nii..i know.. and dadi i love u..agar dadi ka ek lafa pad jaye ritu ke to...??god knows what'll happen
Raj...plzz yrr use ur mind..u r also in love.but nii,ye kaise maan skte he janab??
Naina is happy...i m too...itna dance ,itni masti...wow..
But i didn't read about vidayi in the update..mujhe rona ata he
Ye part to sweet laya mere liye...so sweet..
Now i have a complain-u didn't pm me..koi nii...i was too eager to update check kr li.
Now what is upnext???i m little bid afraid.Naina's dream must not be broken by Raj..it'll be too painful for her.plzzz next part accha likhna..
Thnkew for this gooddy gooddy and sweet sweet part


aww.. thanks alot... sorry i didnt pm u bcz aap mere buddy list me nahi the sayad... now i have included u in my bussy list... onwards u will also get the pm...

thanks again for such a lovely comment...😊😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Amazing Chapter!!😊

I guess, flashback is also coming to an end and now the real story will start...
Please update soon
Thanks for the pm


yup flashback in it s end...
thanks dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kratiagrawal

Very nice please update very soon & I m really eager to know what will happen after the flashback is over


tthanku... just one more part...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Komalbubly

Superb update yr ...

Raj loves Naina but he did not accept ...
Ritu boht buri hai aur Huda San se bara bewaqof ...
Idiot ko samjh nai a rai k ritu Iska ise kr rai hai Raj and Naina ko alag krne k liye ...
Raj aur Naina k bech misunderstandings create kr rai hai ritu ...
I love the song . . . pyara bhaiya mera dulha raja ban k a gya ...
Dadi ki entry ...
Interesting ...
Waiting for next ...
Continue soon ...


ha raj ko akal kanb aayegi...😆😆 thanku komu😳
that song is very close to me...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

amzing updates. dadi ka character is amazng. huda n ritu r behaving abnormal. i hope huda confesses raj aldi. sorry for late comments was busyy..!!


its ok dear... lets see... n thanks...
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Posted: 8 years ago
a big thanks to alll for liking and commenting on part 21... here is part 22 have a look... i willl bit busy so next part will be on monday... till then keep reading n keep smiling always...
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Posted: 8 years ago

*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***

Part 22

dadi:- chalo bhaai... veer puttar... ja naina ko apne kamre me le ja...

rajveer:- ji dadi... (rajveer jaane lagta hai... )...

dadi:- oye yeh kya... aise jayega...

rajveer:- toh...

viren:- bhai veer... tumhe naina ko apni baahon me utha ke leke jana hoga...

rajveer:- kya... wo kyun...

dadi:- rasam hai is ghar ki...tere baap ne bhi teri maa ko uthaya tha...

rajveer:- aisi kaisi rasam... aap jhooth bol rahe ho...

pooja:- are tu manta kyun nahi hai...?

ishita:- ha veer yeh rasam hai... chalo naina ko lekar jaao...

naina apni palke jhukaaye khadi thi... aur blush kar rahi hai... aalekh janta hai sayad aaj rajveer ko sach bata dega.. aur naina ki aankhon ki khushi bhi kho jayegi... isiliye chup chap khada hai... rajveer naina ke kareeb aata hai... use apni bahon me uthata hai... naina apni baahien rajveergale me daal deti hai...uski saas uske gale me atak si gayi... wo aaj azeeb sa mehsoos kar rahi thi... aisa ehsaas pehli baar tha...

na na na naaa... na na na...naaa
na na na naaa... na na na... naaa
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
kuchh rang pyar ke, aise bhi...
(rajveer naina ko god me uthaye hue stairs chadh raha tha... uska pura dhyaan stairs pe tha... aur naina bas rajveer ko dekhe ja rahi thi...)

rajveer naina ko lekar apne kamre ke bahar pahunchta hai ki dekhta hai pooja uske room ke door ke bahar khadi hai...

rajveer:- aise kyun khadi hai... hat...

pooja:- badi jaldi hai...

rajveer:- kya...?

pooja:-kuchh nahi... achha chal nek nikal phir kamre me entry milegi...

rajveer:- nek kaisa nek...? yeh mera kamra hai... (naina janti hai pooja kaun sa nek mang rahi hai... to muskura rahi hai... aur rajveer naina ko bahon me liye khada hai...

naina:- raj pooja ko uska nek de dijiye... yeh har behen ka haq hota hai...

pooja:- right kuchh seekh isse...

rajveer:- yeh meri right pocket me hai... nikal le...

pooja:- badi jaldi man gaya... kya baat hai naina... ( she winks... pooja rajveer ke pocket se paise leti hai... ) double hai yeh... half mere- half di ke... bye... enjoyyy... (aur paise hilate hue chali jati hai...)...

rajveer naina ko room me lata hai... aur bed ke pass khada karta hai... aur idhar udhar dekhta hai... fir jake window ke pass khada ho jata hai... naina apne room ko dekh rahi thi... bahut jyada khubsurat tha,... pura room flowers aur cented candles se saja tha... naina rajveer ko dekhti hai.. aur uske pass jati hai...

naina:- raj...?

rajveer:- wo main bahut thak gaya hun... tum bhi change karlo aur so jaao... (rajveer jaldi se apne kapde leta hai... aur wash room me chala jata hai...

naina in her mind:- janti hu main ki aap abhi bhi mere sath uncomfortable hai... aapne mujh se shadi to kar li hai... par aapko waqt chahiye... aapko jitna waqt chahiye... aap le sakte ho... main aapka zindagi bhar intezaar karne ko taiyaar hu raj... kyuki jahan sachha pyar hota hai... wahan intezar bhi khubsurat ban jata hai... aur pyar ko jab manzil milti hai... wo aur bhi khubsurat... (tabhi rajveer ke bahar aane ki awaaj aati hai... rajveer naina ko dekhta hai... aur jakar bed me aankhien band karke late jata hai...) aaj mujhe fakra hai raj ki maine aapse shadi ki hai... kyuki aap auro jaise nahi... jahan shadi sirf logon ke liye jism ka rishta ban kar reh gaya hai... (naina smile ke sath dressing table ke aage baithti hai... aur apni saari jwellery utar kar wash room chali jati hai...)

rajveer aankhein kholta hai:- yeh maine kya kia mujhe to naina ko sachhai batani thi... main bata kyun nahi paya... kal bata dunga... ha... ( and he slept... naina wash room se change karke aati hai... aur rajveer ke bagal me hi late jati hai... aur use dekhte hue hi so jaati hai...

isi beech humari nazar ek ghar me jati hai... aur ek kamre me... pura andhera hai kamre me... par lights jal aur bujh rahi hai... tabhi hum charo taraf dekhte hai to sirf aur sirf naina ki tasveere thi... ek nahi do nahi kareeb 100 se jyada chhoti badi tasveere thi naina ki... wahi koi baitha... uske hath me sharab ki bottle thi... wo piye ja raha tha... kareeb jakar dekha to huda tha... jo bilkul bhi hose me nahi tha... khud se badbadaaye jaa raha tha...

huda;- tu sirf meri hai naina... sirf meri... aaj wo sala rajveer tujhe chhuega... nahi... kabhi nahi... (wo bottle tod deta hai...)... us ritu ke chakkar me aake maine koi khash kadam nahi uthaya warna aaj us rajveer ki jagah main hota... koi baat nahi... tu meri toh hoke rahegi... i dont care ki tu kiski biwi hai... tu meri banegi... sirf meri... aur jo bhi humare beech aayega... main use barbaad kar dunga... hata dunga apne raste main... hata dunga... hata dunga... tu sirf huda ki hai naina... sirf huda ki... ( aur behose ho jata hai...)

NEXT DAY...

naina ki aankh khulti to wo apne aap ko bilkul alag jagah pati hai... fir use sab yaad aata hai... ki kaise kal uski shadi uske pyar se hui hai... wo apne side pe dekhti hai... to rajveer so raha hota hai... naina uth kar baithti hai... aur apne knees fold karti hai... fir apna face apne knees pe rakh kar bas rajveer ki ore dekhe ja rahi hai... kafi time ho gaya... naina bas ek cute smile ke sath apne naye - navele so cute husband ko dekh rahi hai... ki raj ki neend khuli... usne turn kia... aur rajveer ka hath naina ko touch hua... rajveer jag gaya... aur naina use dekh rahi hai... yeh bhi use mehsoos hua... wo uth kar baitha... naina ne bhi apni nazare apne pati se hataai...

rajveer:- wo... good morning...

naina:- good morning... (naina watch dekhti hai...)... abhi to kafi subah hai... aap chahe to thodi der aur so jaiye... main jab tak fresh hoke aati hai...

rajveer nods in yes... aur naina washroom me chali jati hai... rajveer jakar news paper lata hai... aur padhne lagta hai... tab tak kaka uski black coffee bhi lakar de dete hai... naina ready hokar aati hai... usne aaj offwhite aur red color ke combination ki bahut hi khubsurat se saaree pehni thi... bal geele the... rajveer ki nazar coffee ka sip lete hue naina pe padi aur naina ne bhi use dekha and both smiles a bit naina ready hone lagi... aur rajveer newspaper me ghush gaya... naina ready ho rahi hai... aur mirror se apne raj ko bhi dekh rahi hai... finally wo ready hoti hai... aur rajveer ko ready hone ka keh ke neeche chali jati hai... rajveer bhi washroom chala jata hai...

naina neeche aati hai to dekhti hai... aalekh sahit sabhi loge breakfast table pe baithe the... naina jakar sabhi bado ka aashirwaad leti hai... aur unhi ke sath baith jati hai...

dadi:- hi... naina puttar sach me... mere veer ki pasand hai badi lajawaab... tu to bahut soni lag rahi hai... sach me mere pote ne lakho me nahi karoro me ek bahu dhundhi hai...

ishita:- ab hogi na ma... ab mera veer bhi to karoro me ek hai...

viren:- boli veer ki mom...

dadi:- are nahi... mera veer to arabo me ek hai...

viren:- naina beta yeh yahan ka roz ka hone wala hai... jab bhi ma aur ishita sath hote hai...

pooja(viren ko kat -te hue)- to yahan ka hot topic one n only aapke pati hote hai... humari to koi value hi nahi hai...

aalekh (sady - sady):- right... humare to sirf uncle hai... (naina is smiling)...

dadi:- chup lafantar kahin ka...

aalekh;- daaadi... ab to kam se kam naina ke saamne nam leke bulaao...

dadi:- oye khote da puttar... naina ke saamne kya... tere bacchho ke bachho ke saamne bhi tujhe lafantar hi bulaungi.. kya kar lega...

aalekh:- main... main wo... kuchh nahi karunga... main kar bhi kya sakta hu...

naina:- ma... dijiye main karti hun...

ishita:- are nahi... abhi to tumhare hath ki mehendi nahi utari hai... tum koi kaam nahi karogi...

naina:- are kuchh nahi hota ma...

dadi:- are naina sahi keh rahi hai... ishita aisa kar abhi to kuchh time hai... veer bhi nahi aaya hai... naina ko lejakar pehli rasoi ki rasm karwa de... naina puttar... tu kuchh meetha bana de theek hai...

aalekh:- naina... gajar ka halwa... veer ka favourite hai... (naina nods in yes aur kitchen me jati hai... naina ka face pura utar gaya tha... ishita bhi peeche - peeche gayi... ishita jakar fridge se gajar, mava, cheeni, dryfruits, aur deshi ghee deti hai... naina sabhi cheejo ko dekhti hai... aur dara hua sa face banati hai... ishita samajh gayi thi...)...

ishita:- tumhe khana banana nahi aata...?? ( naina apna sir jhuka kar khadi ho gayi...)...

naina:- ma wo... thoda bahut aata hai... like anda bread omlate maggi... par yeh sab...

ishita( naina ke sir pe hath rakhte hue);- koi bat nahi beta... isme kya problem hai... tumhe main sikhaungi... veer ki pasand ka khana banana... mere veer ko meetha bahut pasand hai... ( naina smiles)... achha chalo yeh banana to tumhe hi hoga... main batati hu... tum banate jao ok... sabse pehle yeh gajar wash karke peel karke grate kar lo... jab tak main dry friuts kat- ti hu... ( fir ishita bata rahi thi aur naina khushi - khushi waisa hi kar rahi thi... aur aadhe ghante me halwa ban jata hai... naina halwa lekar aati hai ki tabhi rajveer bhi upar se aata hai aur sabhi ka ashirwaad leta hai... shalini ke forehead pe kiss karke baith jata hai...)

dadi:- yeh aaj ke din suit kaun pehenta hai...

rajveer:- office jana hai dadi toh...

dadi;- kya... nalaayak... apne vyaah ke dusre din koi office jata hai kya...?

rajveer:- dadi bahut important meeting hai... foreign delicates aaye hai... plzz dadi... main jaldi aa jaunga dont worry...

viren:-ma... ise jaane do... wakai wo log important hai...

dadi:- theek hai... par sun aate hue naina ko uske ghar se lekar aana... abhi naina ka bhai aata hoga use pagfere ke liye lene ke liye...

rajveer:- ji...

ishita:- achha... yeh lijiye... naina ki pehli rasoi ka halwa... naina beta sabko serve karo... ( naina sabhi ko serve karti hai... aur pooja naina ko rajveer ke bagal me bitha deti hai...)...

pooja:- aaj se yeh aapki jagah hai...

aalekh:- are wah... kya tastey halwa hai boss... veer tera fav... kaisa laga... ( rajveer khata hai...)

rajveer:- bahut achha hai... ( naina smiles...)...

naina:- dadi... wo mujhe yeh banana nahi aata tha.. ma batati gayi aur fir maine banaya...

dadi:- are koi nahi puttar... ishita ko shadi ke waqt kaun sa khana banana aata tha... but ab expert hai meri bahu... tujhe bhi bana degi... ishita wo samaan lana... (ishita kuchh samaan lati hai... usme se dadi ek khandani har nikalti hai aur naina ko deti hai...)... naina yeh raha tera sagun... yeh shekhwat khaandan ka pushtaini har hai... yehi mujhe meri dadi saas ne dia tha... aaj wahi main tujhe de rahi hu... yeh har apne pote bahu ke liye hota hai... jo ishita ke pass hai.. wo har yeh teri bahu ko degi... (all smiles... except rajveer)...

naina:- thanku dadi...( aur naina unke pair touch karti hai...)...

viren:- yeh lijiye beta ji... ( envelop dete hue...)... aapka sagun... and thanku hum sab ki zindagi aur is ghar me aane ke liye... ( naina takes it and touches his feet...)...

ishita:- beta waise to har dulhan ko nath apne mayke se milti hai... tumhe bhi mili hai... par yeh nath humari khandani nath hai... matalab humare yahan yeh riwaaz hai... ki aane wale har ek subh awsar par tum yeh nath pehnogi... jaise koi subh tyohar ya brat... aur yeh chunari... yeh do cheezo ko kabhi khud se door mat karna sambhal kar rakhna...

naina:- ji ma... main khayal rakhungi... (naina ishita ka bhi aashirwad deti hai...)...

ishita:- abhi ek cheej aur hai... ( ishita ek chabhi ka key chain silver ka naina ke hath me rakhti hai...)... beta... yeh is ghar ki sabhi importatnt cheezo ki chabhiyan hai... jaise locklers and all... aaj se yeh sab tumhari zimmedari...

naina:- nahi ma... main yeh nahi le sakti... main abhi is kaabil nahi hu...

ishita:- tum is kabil ho beta... mere veer ki patni ho tum... yehi chabhiyan ma ne mujhe di thi... pehle din... aur yeh is ghar ki rasm hai... ki ghar ki chabhiya ghar ki lakshmi ke pass honi chahiye...

naina:- bilkul sahi kaha aapne... to aap hi lakshmi hai ma... koi bhi ghar kyun na ho... ma ke bina adhura hota hai... aapne mujhe yeh dia... maine yeh le bhi li...( lete hue... ) aur ab...( wapas ishita kehath me deti hai...) yeh main aapko sambhalne ke liye de di... rasm bhi ho gayi... aur yeh apni sahi jagah pe bhi hai...

ishita:- par beta...

rajveer:- mom.. main nikal raha hu... (aur rajveer bina kuchh aur sune chala gaya...)...

ishita:- ise kya...

aalekh;- aunty wo meeting hai na isiliye... u both continue... ( pooja and aalekh hifive)...

naina:- aalekh... but ma... plzz.. abhi main itani badi zimedari nahi nibha paungi... jab sahi waqt aayega main khud aapse yeh le lungi...

dadi:- oye ruko... ishita tu inko apne pass hi rakh... rasm to ho gayi hai... par ha riwaaz ke mutabit inki duplicates banwa ke naina ko de de... samajh gayi...

ishita:- theek hai ma...

naina:- ma... meri ma kehti thi... ki naina jab tu kisi ki patni banegi to tere sath ek nahi kai rishtey judenge... ho sakta ha kuchh me tujhe pareshani ho... par sab ko bhul kar itna dhyaan rakhna... ki ab wo naya ghar tera sabse apna hoga... teri duniyaan hoga... tere pass dhan daulat ho na ho... sachhe rishtey jarur hone chahiye... tu us ghar ko basayegi nahi... balki us ghar ke har ek kone me khud bas jayegi... jis ghar me tune apna bachapan bitaya hoga... wo ghar tujhe paraya lagega... aur tera sasural sabse kareeb... bas itani kosis karna ki humesha apne pati ko khush rakhna... ho sake to uske dil me ek chhoti si jagah bana lena... tujhe waqt jarur lagega... par kab wo ghar aur tera pati teri zindagi ban jayega tujhe pata nahi chalega... ma... mujhe meri ma ne jab kaha tha... tab maine mazak bana dia tha... ki aisa thodi na hota hai... aisa kabhi nahi hoga ki koi aur mere liye mere ma - papa se jyada kareeb ho jayega... par aaj yeh main mehsoos kar rahi hu... sirf ek din me... thanku ma... papa... dadi... main bahut kismat wali hu... aap jaisa sasural mujhe mila... ( ishita naina ke sir pe hath rakhti hai...)...

ishita;- maine humesha socha tha... jab bhi veer ya aalekh ki patni aayegi... mere liye bahu nahi beti hogi... aur tum meri beti ho aur rahogi... samjhi... ( both hugs...)...

dadi( in her mind);- ek dar tha man me... ki jo kuchh bhi ateet me hua hai... kahin uski parchhahi mere veer ki zindagi na barbaad kar de... par ab mujhe pura yakeen hai ki naina is ghar ko swarg bana degi... waye guru ji aapka lakh lakh sukriya...

aalekh in his mind;- tu galat hai veer... tu galat hai... ab main is huda ko nahi chhodunga... jald se jald pata lagana hi hoga... (loudly) are daily soap ki sas bahu... mujhe bhookh lagi hai... kuchh aur bhi do...

dadi:- lo bola bhukkhad kahin ka... ek wo naalayak hai... jo kuchh khata nahi... aur ek yeh lafantar... jo sab kha jata hai... (all alughs... thodi der bad naveen aata hai... aur naina ko lekar ghar jata hai...)

pura din beet gaya... rajveer bilkul khush nahi hai ki uski family naina pe itana trust karti hai... usne kaha to tha ki jaldi chala jayega ghar par jan bujhkar nahi gaya... aur fir rat ko aluhwalia house gaya jab ishita ne dant lagayi... naina ka man bhi udaas tha... par rajveer ko dekhte hi wo khush ho gayi... sabhi ne dinner kia... aur rajveer naina ko lekar shekhawat vila pahucha...

next day evening...

aaj rajveer aur naina ka reception tha... pure corporate jagat ke loge aaye the... kafi shandar party chal rahi hai shekhawat vila me... rajveer aur naina apne room me hi hai... rajveer ne black blazer aur mehroon color ke combination ka outfit pehna tha... he is looking dam handsome... woh apne bed pe baitha kuchh soch raha tha... sayad naina washroom me hai... rajveer ki nazar naina ke phone pe gayi... aur use kuchh yad aaya...

yesterday morning before breakfast naina neeche gayi aur rajveer washroom se ready hoke aaya... usne dekha naina ka phone ring kar raha tha... usne phone lia... but usme private no dekh kar naina ko dene ki jagah khud recieve kia... rajveer kuchh bolta usse pehle kaka aakar rajveer ko bolte hai...

kaka:- rajveer baba... wo naina bhabhi ne halwa bana dia hai... sab neeche hai aap aa jaiye... ( rajveer ne phone ki taraf dekha aur kaka ko nod kia...)...

other side:- sun naina... kahin us rajveer ne tujhe chhua to nahi na... ( he was none other than huda)... achha sun... use ek mahine tak khud ko touch karne mat dena... jaisa humne plan kia tha... lawyer ne bataya hai... hum court me yeh saabit kar denge ki sadi ke ek mahine bad tak tere aur rajveer ke beech koi pati - patni wale sambhandh nahi the... jisse yeh court me proove kar denge ki tera yeh so called pati... aur shekhawat khandan ka iklauta beta... Na-Mard hai... ( bade wale dhamaake on rajveer's face...)... naina tera badla pura ho jayega... rajveer ki aadhi property bhi teri hogi... aur shekhawat khandaan ki dhajjiyyan ud jayeingi... hello... naina... naina... tu sun rahi hai na... ( rajveer phone cut karke bed me fek ke gusse se neeche chala jata hai...)...

tabhi naina ki awaaz se rajveer apni soch se bahar aata hai... aur naina ki taraf dekhta hai... naina ne coffee color ki half netted saaree pehni thi... with daimond elegent jwellery... magalsutra.. sindoor... chuda... aur payal... bal khule the... halka sa make up... wo had se jyada khubsurat lag rahi thi... rajveer ek pal ke liye naina ki khubsurati me kho jata hai... tabhi pooja ki awaaz aati hai... aur dono neeche jate hai... sabhi aluhwalia bhi sath me the... party zoro soro se chal rahi thi... ki ali sabko dance floor pe bulata hai... rajveer aur naina bhi dance floor pe the...

aye mere...humsafar...
ek zara intezaar...
sun sadaayein de rahi hai...manzil pyar ki...
aye mere...humsafar...
ek zara intezaar...
sun sadaayein de rahi hai...manzil pyar ki...
(rajveer naina ki waist pe hath rakhta hai...naina kaanp si jati hai... aur naina uske soulder pe hath rakhti hai... dono ek dusre ki aankhon me dekh rahe the... naina blush kar rahi thi... rajveer apni nazare hata leta hai...)

jisko duaaon...mein manga...
tu hai wahin rehnumaan...
tere bina mushkil hai...
ek bhi kadam chalna...
(naina apna sir rajveer ke soulder pe rakh leti hai... spot light un par hi thi... naina aankhien band karke is pal ko mehsoos kar rahi thi...)

bin tere kahaan hai...manzil pyar ki...
aye mere...humsafar...
ek zara intezaar...
sun sadaayein de rahi hai...manzil pyar ki...
(naina wapas rajveer ko dekhti hai... dono hi dance kar rahe the... ki rajveer ki nazar interance pe gayi jahan se huda aaya tha... aur smile ke sath khada tha... rajveer jo ek pal ke liye sab kuchh bhool gaya tha use wapas sab yaad aa gaya)...

naa hum bewafa hai...
naa pyar hai kam darmiyaan...
( rajveer naina ka hath chhod deta hai... aur dance floor se jane lagta hai... naina bas use dekhe ja rahi thi... uski aankhien num bhi ho gayi... par sabko dekh kar rajveer naina ka hath pakad kar floor se bahar lata hai... )

fir kaise milegi...manzil pyar kiii...
na na na na na na na na na na na...
(naina ko rajveer ke instant reaction se bilkul achha nahi laga... par chup khadi thi...)

bani aakar naina ko le jati hai... rajveer dekhta hai ki bani aalekh huda naina pooja ali sab sath hai... wo yahan wahan dekhta hai aur ritu ko ek msg deta hai... aur bahar chala jata hai...

back yard...

rajveer khada hai... aur ritu aati hai...

ritu:- ha rajveer kaho... aisi bhi kya baat karni hai... koi sun lega na toh humara plan...

rajveer turns( angry):- to hell with u... and your plan... aur mujhse is lahze ab aage baat ki na toh mujhse bura tumhare liye koi nahi hoga... !!!... huda aur naina ka chakkar kab se hai...??

ritu ( wicked smile):- pata chal gaya...

rajveer:- matalab... ?

ritu:- to tumne kya socha rajveer ki sirf tum hi smart ho... naina humse char kadam aage nikali... mujhe 3 din pehle hi pata chala... naina tumhari family se badla lene ke liye yeh sab kar rahi hai... aur ab tum kya kahoge,... kya karoge... ab naina tumhari family ko khoon ke aanshu...

rajveer:- just shut up... khoon ke aanshu meri family nahi balki naina singh aluhwalia royegi... wo mujhe barbaad kare isse pehle main use kahin ka nahi chhodunga... kahin na kahin apni family ke hathon mazbur jarur ho jata hu... par iraade aaj bhi wahi hai... i know mujhe time lagega meri family ki wajah se par... naina ko chhodunga nahi main... aur tumhara woh pati... use bar - bar mere ghar aane ki jarurat nahi hai... samjha... lena use...

ritu:- aur mera kaam...?

rajveer:- ho jayega... par abhi yeh muh kahin aur khola na... aur mujhe pata chala ki tum double cross kar rahi ho... aur naina ka sath de rahi ho to ma kasam... tumhari dhajjiyya udaane me mujhe do minute nahi lagenge... ek pal me sabko pata chal jana hai ki mujhe lead tumne kia tha... aluhwalias se apna badla lene ke liye... ab tak tum mujhe apna mohra samjhati thi... ab tum mera mohra ho yaad rakhna... saboot hai mere pass...

ritu:- aisa kuchhh nahi hoga... tumse jyada nafarat mere ander hai unke liye... agar tum unhe barbaad karoge... tumse jyada khush main houngi... aur ha jahan tak sawaal naina ke sath mile hone ka hai... toh apne mare hue papa ki kasam kha ke kehti hu... ki main naina ke sath nahi hu...

rajveer:- chalo mana... par tumhare muh se yeh kasam sabd achha nahi lagta... pehle mujhe lagta tha ki naina inocent hai... main galat hu... but ab mujhe koi afsos nahi hai... ( rajveer chala gaya...)...

ritu in her mind :- bilkul sahi dav laga hai ritu tera... iski aankhon me naina ke liye nafarat badh gayi hai... ab tu bas baith aur tamasha dekh... yeh khud naina ko aur sath hi sath apne aap ko barbaad karega... kambakht pyar hota hi aisa hai... aur mr rajveer tumhari aankhon me pyar to hai... jise tum manna nahi chahte... aur use pyar ki aag ko sulagne se pehle hi maine uspe paani dal dia...

Aur ritu bhi chali gayi... par in dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki kisi ne inki almost sari batien suni... jo sayad rajveer ko bulane aaya tha... wo koi nahi aalekh tha... aalekh ki aankhon me gussa... dard sab tha... uski aankhien num bhi ho gayi... usne khud ko sambhala aur ander chala gaya... party yunhi chalti rahi... aalekh apne hi sawaalon ke jawaab dundhne me busy raha...

aise hi dekhte - dekhte 8 din guzar gaye,... in 8 dino me dadi ne kuchh na kuchh programs rakhe... kabhi jaagran to kabhi kanya bhoj... to kabhi muh dikhai... shalini ki tabiyat bhi lagatar recover kar rahi thi... over all in 8 dino me rajveer naina ko apna sach nahi bata paya... par usne notice kia hai ki aalekh usse kam bat karta hai... ghar me bhi akar usse baat nahi karta.. ab kal rajveer aur naina ko moritious ke liye nikalna hai inke honey moon pe... rajveer ka man nahi tha par viren aur dadi ke kehne pe wo ja raha tha... rajveer naina se na ke barabar bat karta tha... naina ko bura bhi lagta... but apne honey moon ka soch naina ne decide kia ki akele me rajveer ki dil ki sabhi baton ko jaan ke rahegi... in dino huda to chup tha kyuki ritu ne ek good news huda ko di... ki rajveer khud naina ko chhod dega...par rajveer ko aalekh se baat karni hi thi... rajveer apne cabin me tha... ki aalekh aata hai...

aalekh:- bulaya mujhe...? kya kaam hai... jaldi bol... (rajveer apni chair se uth kar aalekh ke pass jata hai...)

rajveer;- tujhe ho kya gaya hai... pichhle ek hafte se dekh raha hu... baat kyun nahi karta hai mujhse...?

aalekh(rude tone):- kar to raha hu... aur kitna karu...?

rajveer:- dekh aalekh... mujhse yeh faltu ki panchayat mat kar... seedhe- seedhe jawaab de... kya chipa raha hai...? bol...

aalekh:- ha chhipa raha hu... nahi batana mujhe tujhe... kya kar lega...

rajveer:- aalekh... tujhe ho...

aalekh ( gusse se...):- chup... bilkul chup... main tujhe sab batau... tune mujhe sab bataya tha...

rajveer;- yeh tu... maine tujhse kya chhipaya hai... aalekh mujhse behtar mujhe tu janta hai... to fir...

aalekh:- yahi to baat hai... yahi baat hai... tujhe tujhse behtar janta hu... manta hu... par tu nahi... tere liye wo ritu bhabhi important hai... unse chhip - chhip ke milta hai tu... apne secrets aur plans share karta hai tu... ( rajveer samajh gaya tha)...

rajveer:- dekh ritu ke bare maine sirf isiliye nahi bataya ki...

aalekh:- i dont care... nahi sunna mujhe... bechari naina... jise apni ma ka darza deti wo bhi... pati to pati bhabhi bhi uski...

rajveer:- naina.. naina... naina... jadu kya kar dia hai usne tujh par... ha... teri wahi naina... apne aashique ke sath milkar mujhe na mard saabit karke mujhse divorce lekar... mere pariwaar ko barbaad karna chahti hai... (dhamaake on aalekh's face)... aur tu keh raha hai ki...

aalekh:- kya bakwaas kar raha hai...

rajveer :- yahi sach hai... jis din naina ka ghar me pehla din tha us din subah... ( he told him about that huda's private call...)...

aalekh:- usne private no se call kyun kia...?

rajveer:- mujhe kya pata...? tu naina ko jitna seedha samajhta hai na wo utani hai nahi... aur rahi baat ritu ki toh ha yeh sach hai ki naina ko mohra banane ka idea mujhe ritu ne hi dia tha... main tab naina ko normally janta tha... nahi janta tha main ki wo naveen ki behen hai... ek din mujhe ritu ka call aaya... wo di ke bare me bat karne lagi... main gaya milne... tab usne mujhe bataya ki rishab aluhwalia ne jaise dad ke sath dhoka kia waise hi ritu ke father ke sath bhi dhokha kia... jiski wajah se uske papa ki maut ho gayi... bas isiliye usne badla lene ke liye naveen se sadi ki... aur raha sawal tera to maine tujhe sirf isiliye nahi bataya... kyuki tu yahi kehta... veer galat hai mat kar aisa... to hell with it yar... naina kuchh bhi kare aur main kuchh na karun... ( rajveer ki aankhon se aanshun behne lage...) par tu bhi ab mujhe hi galat samajhta hai... ja aalekh tu bhi ja... jo karna hoga main kar lunga... jyada se jyada kya bura hoga mar jaunga na... toh... ( aalekh slaped him,,,,,,,)...

aalekh:- shut up... just... ( he is also crying... he hugs him...)...

rajveer:- i know aalekh maine galat rah chuni hai... par naina bhi galat hai... wo bhi galat hai... wo pyar to kya nafarat ke bhi kaabil nahi hai...

after about some time...

abhi bhi dono rajveer ke cabin me hai... dono hi pee rahe hai...

aalekh:- moritious jayega...?

rajveer:-jana padega... dadi aur dad ke aage kiski chalti hai...

aalekh:- ab mujhe dar naina ka nahi hai... uncle aunty aur dadi ka hai... bahut pyar karte hai wo naina se... veer ho sakta hai na ki tujhe koi galatfehmi... ( rajveer use ghurta hai...)... theek hai kuchh nahi kehta... chal ab jyada nahi peena... ( aur dono chale jate hai...)

next day... rajveer aur naina moritious ke liye nikal jate hai... dono hotel me check in karte hai... aur thakaan ke kaaran so jate hai... next day naina jab uthti hai to rajveer room me nahi tha... usne socha ki achhe se ready ho jaye aur fir rajveer ke sath ghumne jayegi... shadi ke bad waise bhi rajveer ke sath time spend nahi kar paayi thi... to wo ready hone chali jati hai... ready hokar aati hai... to dekhti hai ki rajveer aa chuka hai... aur drink & smoke kar raha tha... naina sawaal karti hai... ( jo aap sabne first part me read kia... detail ke liye plz refer part 1)... aur dono ka confrontation hota hai... jahaan rajveer naina ko bol deta hai ki he hates naina... aur naina toot jati hai... uske sapne bikhar jate hai...

flashback ends...

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Edited by rkchandni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thnkew for pm..
This part was khatta meetha..meetha because naina got married and came to rajveer's house.
And khatta because somethings gone worse.ritu,u r sick..i hate this lady.kuch karo plzz iska...and huda,plzz use ur common sense.Alekh always supports raj.he is the best buddy.
This was the flashback...ending is so sad..naina is weeping...i hate rajveer for this..
Hope next part'll be some relaxing..thanx for the update.. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii
di,
Beautiful .very nice.
So Flashback is finally end.
Now the real war is going on
Oh this Ritu & huda is real kaminey.

Cont.soon.

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