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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: npksk8495
Superb update as always
but raj-yudi ki baat humne kyon nahi suni?
wow! raj to bahut achchha actor hai aisa bhola ban raha jaise usse kuchh pata hi nahi
thanks for pm take care keep smiling

ha wo to hai... he is bestest actor😉😆
anyways thanks dear...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: vssdp
Awesome update
Hit waala update
Chalo naina ne apne pyaar ko confess kar diya yippee
Oh no naveen ne sun liya
Next waala pakka interesting update hoga
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

yup dear...
thanks for comments...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria
HI
The up is really good
so yudi came as Shaliny's dr and gave hope to Rajveer
Yudi became friends with Alekh and Rajveer and Pooja but Naina's love is making her restless
She called Rajveer to meet her but Rajveer got late
but finally Naina confessed her feeling to Rajveer
Plz cont soon and pm me

thanks alot ria my jaan...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: mylifereality
Sorry for late comment dear,omg finally naina ne bol diya raj ko,bs ab ghar wale man jaye or hero heroine ki shadi,bs ye raj ka mere samjh mein nhi ata,ldka khud bhi confuse hai or mujhe bhi kr diya bs plz ab jldi se mera confusion dur kr do love u, dear plz continue soon

dear.. raj ka to mujhe b nahi smajh aa raha yeh ab mujhe bhi confuse kar raha hai...😆😉
anyways thanks for the comment...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: saiaarti
hiii...
first of all a big sorry for not commenting before... actually i was busy wid my exams and my exams were out of station... The place where i was staying, there my net was not working properly... so i couldn't comment...

now coming to your story, it's just amzing, superb, mindblowing, fantastic... ab aur kya bolu?
first of all your story is not related to army like most of other RN stories... so it's quite refreshing... ur story line and concept is totally new... it's gud to c Rajveer and Naina in corporate world...

so Rajveer and naina are married, naina loves him a lot...but Rajveer hates her and Naina didn't even know d reason for dat... so sad...can't imagine rajveer hating Naina... jayadatar story e rajveer pehle Naina se pyaar karne lagta hai aur uske pyaar ke liye sab kuch karta hai...but yaha pe its NAina... who loves Rajveer a lot and can do anything for him... so again a nice change and refreshing...

u r showing RN journey how dey met, how Naina fall in love with Rajveer, how they got married... their journey from strangers to a married couple... very interesting journey with full of twists and suspense from Rajveer's side... really enjoying reading it...

Naina beintehaan Raj se pyaar karne lagi hai, par Raj wo to uske liye kuch bhi feel nahi karta... aisa kaise ho sakta hai? i don't know whether i m right or not, but i think Rajveer too feels something for Naina or started feeling... may be its just a little but something is der from his side too...Naina's innocence and her unconditional love for him, must be affecting him too... but i think his anger, his revenge are overpowering and overshadowing his every other emotions and that's why he doesn't know and doesn't feeling anything right now for Naina... but i hope soon he too will start loving Naina...

rajveer ne naveen aur uske papa se badla lene ke liye NAina se shaadi ki... wo naina ko uss galti ki saza de raha hai jo usne ki hi nahi... gunah to naveen aur uske papa ne kiya phir Naina ko saza kyu? yeh to galat hai... i hope Rajveer realise this soon... warna kahi der na ho jaye...

eagerly waiting to see how NAina will react after knowing that rajveer hates her and married her not becoz of their love but becoz of his his revenge... want to know what happened with shalini... what Naveen did with her that she is in this condition and Rajveer hates him this much that he is even ready to spoil his and Naina's life for taking revenge from him...

right now enjoying their journey from stangers to a married couple, but eagerly waiting to c their married life... their journey where Naina's love for rajveer will force him to love Naina back... i hope aisa hi ho... becoz love is powerful than any other feeling... aur hum to yaha Naina ke pyaar ki baat kar rahe hai...
want to c their journey from married couple to a couple madly n love with each other, their journey of becoming soulmates...

veryyy nice story...
just amazing, super, mind blowing...
keep updating...
keep up d gud and fabulous work...

stay blessed...

love

arti

hi aati...
first of all.. thanks for d lovely commet... it compensated all...
thanks alot again...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: prasannakamila
Kaun sach bol raha hain naveen ya raj?but jo bi ho naina ko bahut dard milne wali hai.naina loves raj really a lot bt raj doesn't lv her wat hpns to naina...

yup dear... she will suffer...
but at d end sab theek hoga...
thanks...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: golu_1677
Pls update soon...

updating in a while dear...

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#448

thanks a lottt to all of u...
for liking and commenting on part 12...
here is part 13...
enjoy...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: rkchandni
thanks a lottt to all of u...
for liking and commenting on part 12...
here is part 13...
enjoy...

I'm eagerly waiting 😛

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rkchandni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#450

*** Kuchh Rang Pyar Ke Aise bhi...***
Part 13

Rajveer ko achha nahi lag raha tha... par usne bhi hug kar lia... aur dono wahan se chale gaye... par in dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki koi inhe bahut der se dekh raha... naveen door apni gadi me baitha in dono ko dekh raha tha... gussa uski aankhon me tha... usne apni car start ki aur gusse se nikal gaya... rajveer ne naina ko ghar drop kiya aur apne ghar chala gaya...

aluhwalia mansion...

naina happily ander aati hai... to hall me naveen khada tha... sath me uske papa aur bhabhi bhi... naina ko ajeeb laga fir bhi usne smile ke sath unhe wish kiya...

naveen:- kahan se aa rahi hai naina...?

naina:- wo bhaiya... actually... wo ek frnd se milne gayi thi...

naveen:- kis frnd se...?

naina:- bhaiya aap aise kyun...?

naveen ( shouting):- maine puchha kis frnd se...

rishabh:- naveen yeh tum kis tarah se...

naveen:- ek minute papa... bol naina... kis frnd se...

naina:- raj se...

naveen:- mana kiya tha na tujhe... ki us...

ritu:- naveen agar wo rajveer se milne gayi bhi thi to problem kya hai... wo humara dost hai aur...

naveen:- koi dost nahi hai humara wo... aur tu naina... beech road me use gale lage hui thi...( ritu and rishabh were shocked... and dhamaake on naina's face...)... bol kyun... kya kar rahi thi uske sath... main chahta to usi waqt use.. par main chup raha kyuki mujhe tujhse janna tha ki tu...

naina:- pyar karti hun main unse...( dhamaake on naveen's face...) ha bhaiya... i love him... aur yahi batane gayi thi main unhe... aur papa isse pehle bhaiya aapko kuchh kahe... main hi aapko bata deti hun... raj koi aur nahi viren singh shekhawat ka beta RV hai... ( now ritu and rishabh were shocked...)...

naveen:- naina tu...

naina:- pyar karna koi galat baat hai...?? aap logon ne hi kaha tha na... ki agar main kisi ko pasand karti hun to aap meri shadi usi se karaienge... so he is the man... RV i love him... wahi hai meri pasand...

rishabh:- naina chup karo... tumhe puri duniyaan me koi aur nahi mila... wahi ek ladka...

naina:- kyun papa... kya kharaabi hai unme ha... bas yeh ki kabhi unki behen ka rishta bhaiya ke liye aaya tha... aur aap logon ko manzoor nahi tha... bas isiliye main...

naveen:- naina tu samajh nahi rahi hai yeh uski koi chaal...

naina:- kaisi chal bhaiya... are raj ko to pata bhi nahi tha ki aapke aur unke family ke beech kya problem hai... jaise main ab tak sabhi baaton se anjaan thi... we bhi the...jab maine unhe sab bataya to unhone practically aur normally react kiya... aapki tarah nahi... jabki aapka to kuchh nahi bigda,,, aapki shadi bhabhi se ho gayi... aur par raj ki di... unka to kuch sal pehle accident hua tha... aur aaj bhi trauma me hai... dekha jaaye to nafarat unhe aapse karni chahiye... aapko nahi... par nahi we aapse nafarat nahi karte kyuki unhe pata hai ki isme aapki koi galti nahi thi...( softly) papa... bhaiya... main unse bahut pyar karti hun...plzz papa... (naina gayi aur usne rishabh ko hug kiya... par rishabh ne use apne aap se door kar diya...)...

rishabh:- aisa kabhi nahi hoga... us pariwaar se humara rishta kabhi nahi judega... kabhi nahi... ( rishabh jaane laga...)...

naina ( shouting):- to theek hai papa... main bhi aapse wada karti hun... shadi karungi to sirf raj se nahi to zindagi bhar main shadi hi nahi karungi... and i mean it...( naina bhag kar apne room me chali gayi... aur baki sab use shocked se dekh rahe the...)...

rishabh:- naveen mere room me aao... ( rishabh left...)..

ritu:- yeh sab kya hai naveen... naina ne aisa bhi kya mang lia hai jo...

naveen:- ritu tum sab kuchh jante hue bhi aisa kaise... rajveer ki behen...

ritu:- are to kya hua... mana ki ek rishtey ki baat se rishtey bigde the... par ab rajveer aur naina ki baat se yeh do pariwaar ek ho sakte hai... isme...

naveen:- ritu tum... leave it... main papa se baat karta hun...( naveen left)...

yahan naina apne room me leti hai... aur roye jaa rahi thi...

naina:- bhaiya... papa... aap loge aisa kaise... aap...(ritu aati hai...)

ritu:- naina... bachha... tu sabra se kaam le... agar tere pyar me taakat hai na to wo dono jarur maan jayeinge... par kya rajveer ke ghar wale...

naina:- bhabhi... raj waise nahi hai jaisa bhaiya ya papa samajh rahe hai... aur i m sure unki family unhe samjhegi... par yahan to mere apne hi...

ritu:- tu chinta mat kar sab theek hoga...

rishabh's room...

rishabh:- tumne naina se jhooth kyun bola...?

naveen:- toh kya karta... sach bhi nahi bata sakta na... isiliye jhuth kaha ki shalini ka rishta aaya tha mere liye... maine mana kar diya aur... viren shekhawat ne aapki bhi insult ki...

rishabh:- bas naveen... tum samajh kyun nahi rahe ho... suna na tumne usne kya kaha... and she mean it... uski aankhien dekhi hai...maine kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki yeh waqt bhi ayega... look naveen... mujhe meri naina ki khushiyaan chahiye samjhe tum... aur mujhe shekhawat ke saamne jhukna bhi manzoor nahi hai... ab tumhe jo karna pade karo... main bhi jald se jald naina ke liye achha ladka dhundhta hun...

naveen:- par papa... abhi toh...

rishabh:- jitna kaha hai utna karo... waise bhi in sab ki jad tum hi ho...(rishabh gusse se chale gaye...)...

shekhaawat vila...

rajveer apne room me tha... use aaj ki saari baatien yaad aa rahi thi... use is baat ki khushi thi ki usne jo socha wo toh ho raha tha... par is baat ka gum bhi tha ki wo naina ko takleef de raha hai... use jhuthi umeed de raha tha... rajveer ko apne aap se nafarat ho rahi thi... par fir humesha ki tarah uske dimaag ne uske dil ka sath na diya... aur jeet dimaag ki hui... usne aalekh ko call kiya aur sab kuchh bata diya...

aalekh on phone:- what... par... dekh veer.. maine tujhe kaha tha ki naina ki koi galti nahi hai... use mat ghaseet in sab me... par tu nahi mana... khair ab tu peeche nahi hat sakta samjha... aur jo naina ne kaha hai wo ho jaane de... veer pata nahi kyun par mera man keh raha hai ki jo ho raha hai sahi ho raha hai...

rajveer:- kya...? yeh tu keh raha hai...?

aalekh;- ha yeh main keh raha hun... tu wo sab chhod... tere hisaab se aur jitna maine naina ko absorve kiya hai... wo bhi bahut ziddi hai... wo apne pariwaar ko to mana hi legi... tu soch... agar we maan gaye... to tu kya karega... tu sapne me bhi apne pariwaar ke khilaaf nahi ja sakta... fir to yeh teri life ka sawaal hai... jo ki ab naveen ke khandaan se judne waali hai...

rajveer:- to ab main kya karun...?

aalekh:- abe gadhe...itana bada raiyta jab tune faiyalaya tha to mujhse pucha tha kya...? nahi na... to ab kyun puchh raha hai...

rajveer:- dekh main confused hu isiliye tujhse pucha... tere ko nahi batana hai na... to mat bata...

aalekh:- oye break maar... sun... ja shanti se uncle aunty se baat kar... but abhi yeh mat batana ki wo ladki naveen ki behen hai... samajh raha hai na...

rajveer:- hmm... theek hai... byee...

aalekh:- byee...

rajveer in his mind:- kya galat kaha aalekh ne... mujhe bhi yakeen hai ki naina unhe mana kar hi rahegi... hmmm lets see...

viren & ishita's room...

ishita:- are veer... wahan kyun khada hai... ander aa na... (rajveer ander jata hai... viren aur ishita bed pe hi baithe baatien kar rahe the... to rajveer bhi unke saamne bed pe jakar baith gaya...)... kya baat hai... kuchh kehna hai...

rajveer:- mom... woh... woh... main...m...

viren:- are ishu... humara veer stammer kar raha hai... hmmm jarur koi personal baat hai...

ishita:- right... bol kya hua...?

rajveer:- mom aap meri shadi karana chahte ho na... (viren and ishita were happily shocked...)...

ishita:- ha to tu ready hai... wo ladki jo mrs...( ishita ko katate hue)...

rajveer:- mom... unko sabko mana kar do...

ishita:- kya par... ( viren placed his hand on ishita)...

viren:- veer... tujhe koi aur pasand hai...?

rajveer:- dad woh...

viren:- ha ya na...

rajveer:- ha dad wo main ek ladki se shadi karna chahta hun... agar aap loge...

ishita(khush hokar):- sach veer... bata kaun hai wo ladki... kya naam hai uska... main kal hi jakar...

rajveer:- mom... meri puri baat to sun lijiye... mom main use aap dono se milaunga... par kya aap logon ko meri pasand pe bharosha hai... kya aap dono...

ishita:- veer... is high society me sabko lagta hai ki ishita shekhawat apne liye koi high class bahu layegi... jo use match kar sake...( placed her hand on rajveer's cheek)... par beta... mujhe wo bahu chahiye... jo bhale hi gareeb kyun na ho... bhale hi wo mere standard ko match kare ya na kare... par wo mere bete ko khush rakhe... mere veer ko sachha pyar kare... apni jaan se jyada sabse jyada... jiske sath tu khush rahe... mujhe wahi ladki teri patni ke roop me chahiye... teri har chahat puri ho bas...

rajveer:- thankyou mom.. u r d best... mom... uska naam naina hai... humari mulakat kuchh mahine pehle hui thi... hum dost ban gaye the... actually she loves me... aur kisi stranger k sath life bitaane se achha hai ki kyun na main apne dost ke sath...

viren:- ishita iski love story humari love story ki tarah hi hai... hai na...??

ishita:- ha... naina... bahut pyara naam hai... bata kab mila raha hai...

rajveer:- bahut jald mom... main usse baat karke aap ko bata dunga... ab main chalun... (rajveer uth kar jaane lagta hai... tabhi ishita bolti hai...)...

ishita:- veer... ( rajveer turns)... tu to khush hai na...?

rajveer:- ha mom... main bahut khush hu... akhir kar jo main chahta hun mujhe mil jayega... bye.. gn...

ishita:- gn beta... ( rajveer left)... kya hua aapko... yeh to bahut khushi ki baat hai na...

viren:- ha par ishita... wo humse nazare mila kar baat nahi kar raha tha... mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki uske dil me kuchh aur chal raha hai... aur dimaag me kuchh aur...

ishita:- aap bhi na... are ab humne humare bachho ko itane sanskaar to diye hai... ab apni shadi ki baat aankh mila kar kaise karta...

viren:- hmm... yeh bhi hai... chalo gn... ( both slept...)...

next day...

aadha din chad gaya... naina apne kamre se bahar nahi aayi... usne kal raat se kuchh nahi khaya tha... bahar ritu, naveen rishabh sabhi pareshaan the... par naina apni zid pe adi thi... 3no naina ke room me jaate hai... naina ne ro - ro kar apna haal behal kar lia tha...

ritu:- naina plzz kuchh kha lo...

naveen:- dekh naina... apni yeh harkat band kar... humein teri pasand manzoor nahi hai...

rishabh:- beta... samajhne ki kosis karo... main tujhse wada karta hun ki teri shadi bahut hi achhe ladke se karaunga...

naina:- mujhe sirf raj chahiye...

rishabh:- naina tu... aisa nahi hoga samjhi... chalo naveen... din bhar bhukhi rahegi to akal thikaane aa jayegi... pata nahi kya jaadu kar diya hai us ladke ne... ( 3no chale jaate hai...)...

hall...
naveen:- papa wo... aap jante hai na... use bhookh bardast nahi hoti hai... use kuchh ho gaya to...

ritu;- itani hi parwaah hai to maan kyun nahi lete aap loge uski baat... ek baar rajveer ke papa se baat karke...

naveen:- ritu plzz... tum in sab se door raho... hemesha ki tarah uska sath dena jaruri nahi hai...

ritu:- nahi reh sakti main door... kal se dekh rahi hun main use... 15 ghante se upar ho gaye hai naveen... wo sirf ro rahi hai... uski haalat dekhi hai na... wo rajveer se bahut pyar karti hai... aap samajh kyun nahi rahe hai... wo rajveer ke sath hi khush rahegi...

rishabh:- to kya kare... jhuk jaaye unke saamne... kya gurantee hai ki wo ladka humari naina ko khush rakhega...

ritu:- par papa... ek baar...

naina( from upper stairs):- bhabhi... kisi se meri pairavi karne ki jarurat nahi hai... aur ha papa... aap ek kya hazar ladke dhundhiye par main shadi karungi to sirf raj se...

naveen:- naina... aisa kabhi nahi hoga... kya karegi tuh ha... ek hafte me teri shadi hum kara deinge... rajveer ko bhool ja...

naina:- theek hai... to ek hafte baad meri arthi is ghar se jayegi... ( dhamaake on all's face...)..

ritu:- naina... pagal ho gayi hai... kuchh bhi...

naina:- papa... bhaiya... aap dono bhool rahe hai ki aapne ma ko kya promise kiya tha... khair ma to chali gayi... main bhi chali jaungi... par kisi aur se shadi is janam me to nahi karungi... aap sab ko yeh char din ka pyar lagta hai na... par in char dino ke pyar me maine apni poori zindagi jee li hai... ab mujhe maut ka bhi dar nahi hai... ( naina left to her room... sabhi udaas ho kar chale jaate hai...)...

naina's room...

naina ko call aata hai... wo pick karti hai...

naina:- yes mam... mam wo... mam agar is baar main perform na karun toh... wo meri tabiyat kuchh theek nahi hai... aur...

college principal.:- its ok naina... but beta yeh program humne is baar anaath bachho ke liye rakha tha... par koi baat nahi...

naina:- nahi mam main perform karungi... aap chita mat kijiye... main kal time pe pahunch jaungi...

college principal:- but tumhari tabiyat...

naina:- meri tabiyat un bachho se jyada important nahi hai mam... sayad un bachho ki kuchh dua mil jaaye...

college principal:- theek hai beta kal milte hai... apne poore pariwaar ke sath aana...

naina:- ok mam...bye...

after some time naveen's room...

ritu:- naveen... i know aap apni jagah bilkul sahi hai... par ek baar... sirf ek baar soch kar dekhiye rajveer bahut achha hai... naina sirf usi ke sath khush reh payegi... kisi aur ke liye ke liye na sahi kam se kam naina ke liye to maan jaao... ha main manti hu ki shalini ke sath aapka ek past tha... ab jab bhi aap unke saamne jaaoge... aapko aapka past yaad aayega...par...

naveen:- plzz ritu... plzz...

ritu:- kyun... aapko dar hai ki kahin aap fir na behek jaaye...?

naveen( shouts):- yeh tum kya bakwaas...

ritu:- kyun kya galat kaha maine ha... kahin aisa to nahi ki us shalini se aaj bhi aap pyar karte hai... aur mere sath...( naveen slaps her...)..

naveen:- shut up... just... (naveen gusse se chala gaya... ritu bas use dekh rahi thi...)...

pura din aise hi beet gaya... is beech baani ka bhi call aaya... naina ne baat ko taal diya aur bas kal ke program ke baare me inform kiya... dusri taraf rajveer ka man bhi bechain tha... naina ne use call nahi kiya tha... par use fark pad raha tha... usne finally naina ko call kiya... naina ne pick kiya... jahan uske aankhon me aanshun the... wahi honthon me muskaan...

rajveer:- naina kaisi ho..? woh... tum theek to ho na...

naina:- ya m fine... wo thoda busy thi... isilye bas...

rajveer:- tumhari awaaz ko kya hua...

naina:- nahi kuchh nahi...

rajveer:- tumne apne ghar me baat ki...?

naina:- ha... lekin...

rajveer:- nahin maane na... mujhe pata tha naina... its ok...

naina:- aapne baat ki...?

rajveer:- ha... we tumse milna chahte the but maine abhi mana kar diya... bcz... jab tak tumhari family ready nahi hoti...

naina:- chaliye koi to mana... yeh log nahi maneinge raj... inka jhutha swabhimaan bahut bada hai...( tears flows down to her cheek...)...

rajveer:- naina... plzz.. main isiliye mana kar raha tha... naina tumhari khushi mere liye bahut important hai aur...

naina:- aap meri khushi chahte hai...?

rajveer:- ha...

naina:- to kal shaam VITs college ke special function me aa jana...

rajveer:- kyun...?

naina:- wahan anaath bachho ke liye function rakha gaya hai... main perform karne waali hun...

rajveer:- main jarur aaunga... tum apna khayaal rakhna...

naina:- hmm... bye... gn...

rajveer:- gn...

next day,...

naina ne abhi tak kuchh nahi khaya tha... use bahut weakness ho gayi thi par fir bhi wo college function ke liye nikal jati hai... sabne use mana kiya but wo nahi maani... kisi se uski haalat dekhi nahi ja rahi thi... finally we bhi nikale naina ki function ke liye... dusri taraf rajveer bhi aalekh aur pooja ke sath nikal gaya... aur yahan naina ke sabhi frnds bhi pahunch gaye...naina dressing room me baithi...apne ghunghroos ko bandh rahi thi... tabhi uske sabhi frnds aa jate hai... ritu bhi sath me thi... naina ka chehra gloomy tha... sab hairaan the...

huda:- oye naina... tujhe kya hua hai... yeh tera chehra latka kyun hai...

naina:- are nahi huda... bas thodi nervous hun...

baani:- juth bol rahi hai... kya hua hai tujhe ha...? bol...

naina:- kuchh nahi... aur tum loge ab jaao... meri performance ka waqt ho gaya... hai...aur baani raj aalekh aur pooja bhi aa gaye honge... unhe dekh lena...

ali:- are woh bhi aaye hai... chaliye huda bhai... unse mil ke aate hai... ( huda aur ali chale gaye...)...

bani:- tu theek hai na naina...?

naina:- ha baani mujhe kya hona hai...

ritu:- 2 din se kuchh nahi khaya hai isne... to hal aisa hona hi tha...

naina:- bhabhi...

baani:- kya but kyun...? tu pagal hai... hua kya hai...?

ritu:- main batati hun... yeh meri baat to sun nahi rahi... sayad tum hi samjha sako ise...( then ritu told bani every thing...)...

baani:- par bhabhi... bhaiya aur uncle... aisa kaise... aur naina tu... tu hi maan ja unki baat...

naina:- i love raj... i cant... we keh rahe hai na ki ek hafte ke ander meri shadi kara dienge... main jab zinda hi nahi rahungi toh...

ritu:- bas kar naina...

bani:- dekh agar tera pyar sachha hai na... to tujhe rajveer jarur milega... par tu yeh performance kaise karegi... tu itani week hai...

naina:- main karungi baani... meri takaat ban kar mera pyar bahar baitha hai... main karungi...

bani hugs naina... both have tears... par in teeno ko hi nahi pata tha ki pooja ne inki kafi baatien sun li thi... jo naina se milne aayi thi... pooja ki aankhon me sirf aanshun the... wo apne aanshun saaf karke bahar jakar aalekh ke bagal me baith gayi... unhi ke sath naina ke frnds bhi the... aur side me rishabh aur naveen bhi... naveen ne rajveer ko dekha... to uska gussa saatve aasmaan pe tha... par naina ke khatir usne control kiya... aur rajveer ne totally in dono ko hi ignore maar diya... saamne kuchh performance khatam hoti hai... ab naina ka turn tha... ritu aur bani aakar apni seat me baith jaate hai...

It was finally time for naina's performance...she reached the stage and slowly walked onto the stage..the sound of her ghungroos could be heard as she took each step to the centre..when she reached the centre and stopped.. usne sabhi ki taraf dekha... sakdo loge baithe the... uski nazar seedhe rajveer pe gayi... jo naina ke gloomy chehre ko dekh kar hairaan bhi tha... aur pareshaan bhi... music start hua... aur usne apni performance bhi start ki...

Oh raanjhe... bajiyaa charaiyaan...
raanjhe... bajiyaa charaiyaan...
doli lai gaye... de khed... lag gaye... nain awede...
oh lag gaye... nain awede...
we lag gaye... nain awede...
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana...
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana...
(Naina looked at Rajveer and then began her dance... ritu was shocked to heard this song...)

Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana...
(tears formed in her eyes as she thought about her dreams of being Rajveer's bride)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi...
(she closed her eyes for a moment..letting her tears reach the corner of her eyes..Rajveer's image in her mind)

Chaaha tha maine, socha tha maine...
(thoughts about how she had seen dreams to live her life with Rajveer came to her mind)

Kya kya the armaan dil nadaan ke...
(and how those dreams shattered within a moment)

aankhon me aansu aaye par koi na aaya...
(tears fell down her cheeks as she felt a sense of loneliness forming inside herbcz no one is supporting her love.. no one cares about her...)

Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana...
(she felt a pain inside her as thought of not being rajveer's bride...)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi...
(she danced with increasing pain...her tears continuously running through her eyes and the pain reflecting inside her eyes)

In aankhon me thi ek raat saji...
(she thought about the dreams she had seen of their union... those moments when she usually tak about her love.. her marriage to ritu...)

Haathon me kabhi choodi si baji...
(she ran her hand across her bangles..remembering the time he had placed his hand over hers...the thought still creating a sensational feeling within her)

Par aankh khuli to aaya nazar na raat saji na choodi baji...
(She held on tightly to her hand..as the bangles broke..stabbing her in the skin as drops of blood formed on her arm... and her pain could be sensed by ritu baani and pooja...)

Mera toota tha dil, uski jhankar thi...
(she closed her eyes as she let her tears flow..her feet creating a painful melody)

Saara woh rang tha mere khooni dil ka...
( the bells of her ghungroo broke off as she danced on the broken pieces..her feet starting to bleed.. rajveer could see the blood... and tears flows down to his eyes...)

yeh to hai rona dil ka...
haaa...yeh to hai rona dil ka kaahe ka taraana...
(she continues to dance...letting her pain out as her feet were bleeding...but she felt immune to all the pain...as the pain inside her was a lot more extreme... naveen palced his hand on ritu's... naina's pain can be seen in naveen's eyes...)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi...
(she looked towards Rajveer as she danced..her eyes full of pain... aalekh was evident of rajveer's pain too... he can see the immense love in naina's eyes for rajveer... which was broken him from inside...)

Haske...bheegi palak chamkaana hai...
(she plastered a smile on her face...her wet lashes constantly flashing...as her tears slowly escaped her eyes...and she danced feeling no outer pain)

Sooni baahein ada se laheraana hai...
(she pressed her hands on the remaining bangles...breaking them..as they fell to the ground...the small pieces of the bangles stabbing her feet too as she danced on them...fire was lit to the curtains that swayed on the side of the stage...as the burning curtains were symbolised her inner pain and love for rajveer...)

Gham khaake aansu peeke...
hooo...Gham khaake aansu peeke...
(She stopped for a moment and looked at the burning curtains...memories of her and Rajveer flashing by her eyes..)

mehfil me jaanaa...
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana...
(she saw the memories burning infront of her eyes with the fire of the curtains...tears falling down her cheeks)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana...
(she closed her eyes in pain and turned her head away...continuing to dance on the broken bells and pieces of glass...her feet filled with blood... she is remembering all the moments she spent with rajveer... and that night when she proposed him... thier hug... every thing... memory of naina's dance and happiness on d same song were flashed before ritu's eyes... she has tears...)

Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana...
( Naveen who was watching her dance in so much pain could not see her condition... he almost stood up...when Ritu placed her hand on her arm to stop her...he looked at her wanting to stop the music...but Ritu signed him to leave her alone..it was important for her to let her pain out)

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana...
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana...
Sab ki baaraatein aayi...
aahhh...aa aa... aa...
(Naveen stopped and Ritu looked towards Naina...her pain hurting Ritu...while Naina continued to dance..)

movie:- Jaanam samjha karo... Sad version...

As the music stopped...she fell to the ground...she sat there still for a moment...as though her body had froze...the people who were in the audience were silent for a moment...when someone stood up and started clapping...the rest got up too as they clapped loudly...Naina who heard the clapping looked up at the audience..and then towards Naveen and Ritu... then she looked at Rajveer... who has tears... but he wiped it out... a small smile appears on naina's face... she can see her pain in rajveer's eyes... she moved her gaze down and started collecting the broken bells...gathering them together as she held them in her palm...she got up from the floor and headed off backstage in complete silence..her bloody feet leaving red foot prints...but as she moved further...& she fainted on the stage it self... and all pieces of ghunghroos...were sattered on the stage...

rajveer (screamed):- Nainaaa...

End of Part 13
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