Indradhanush 2 'Itta Sa' - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi there shilpa. Hope you hv been doing ok. Good to see u here.[/QUOT
Hi Kalpana...

Yeah I am doing good...was busy for past few days .

For a few days I was having trouble logging in thru mobile and both my laptop and desktop have crashed but I was reading all the updates and as usual Nisha has all hooked...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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NeelAsma, where are you ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nisha please don't leave us hanging...Gurpreet's planning should no go to waste...
Pleassseee

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Kalpana, Shruti loved your posts.
SVM your morning raga is here where are you ?
Vani aapli Marathi mulgi ne nasik cha plan sadhya cancel kela ( our Marathi girl has cancelled her plan of nasik for now). Apan kuthe ahat ? (where are you?)


Yaar mera dimaag bahut ulta chalta hai. Zindagi mein itne challenges Hain, nahi Aisa kuchch nahi, Lekin I like chatpati zindagi, yahan itna boring hai, useless politics, useless headlines, no Mazaa isliye Nisha ki stories ke zariye yeh shauk Poora kar lete hain. She writes so well and describes india and indianess with such precision, not an emotion or social context out of place ki uspar tippani KARNE ko man karta hai. And I dig pain, I dig Hindi/Urdu songs with lyrics which have meaning, I dig OTT sometimes, I dig everything INDIA!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aage kya hoga Nisha...will Neel Pandit be able to convince our Suvi for seeing him every Friday...
Until the next I am gonna read the update once more...to keep me going
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shilpa I have already read four times.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: PriteeMisra

Shilpa I have already read four times.


Pritee whenever a update comes I read it twice...once quickly (too much curiosity) and next a bit slowly...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pritee, Asma will be MIA for a fortnight. She is busy both at home and at work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Meeting of the mothers


Two other families were there, all from the neighborhood

The house was large and beautiful

She had a female cook and a male helper
Drinks and appys flowed like Yamuna after the monsoons

Neel drank beer but not his FIL or MIL

Gagan introduced her and not Neel

"Arey hum miley hain" beta" Ragini smiled

"she works in the same ad agency aunty, she is the Creative Director" Gagan said

"Aapko mere saath agle job interview mein jaane ka hai" Suvi smiled shyly

"Arey boss maine, Naren Noodle dekha Nihar ke room mein" Gagan looked stunned

"AAPKI creativity hai?" Ragini smiled surprised

"Aunty maine sach bata diya warna Neel ne saara credit le lena tha" Gagan laughed

"She makes killer pao bhaji aunty" Gagan said

"UP mein kehne ka... dal chawal...(nodding) Punjabi mein makke de roti" suvi drew analogies

"Preet doesnt make it yaar, she makes dhasoo chicken tikka tho" Gags smiled

"Paas mein rehti hain aap?" Ragini asked

"Yaha se 10 km par hai" Suvi said

"Mujhe Mumbai ki yaad aa gayi" Bhuvan smiled joyously

"Mumbai mein kuch special nai Uncle" she said bluntly

"Aap gayi hain kabhi?"

"Thoda time ruki" she said

"Preet ko kaise jaanti hain?" Ragini asked

"Ek baar Neel ke ghar par"

ragini nodded disarmingly, no idea Preet had caught them making out

Neel supervised the boys talked with men

Teased Preet
He appeared happy and relaxed Suvi noticed

Like his in laws were his own parents?

They uttered his name in every sentence as well

She didnt know her in laws were even alive until Rutwik's truth came out
He had told her he was an orphan

Neel was a normal son in law she concluded

When dinner was served, he handed her a fork and a spoon

Suvi added mirchi ka achar in Aadhya's dal chawal after neel commented dal was "great" and not spicy at all"

Bhuvan looked on startled "She loves her spicy food" Neel chuckled
Rotis were soft as a blanket, tearing on touch, the food absolutely delicious

Paneer made two ways, malai koftas, stuffed shimla mirch, and Punjabi chholey and moong dal

Preet brought out a hot roti and tore it up in half and gave it to her husband and Neel

"Usko de yaar.. mehmaan haiga"

"That probably means Nihar is not welcome everyday" neel laughed

"Saale" Gags shouted

"Sorry Oh sorry sorry Uncle ji" he back tracked

Bhuvan smiled content
"its OK" he said

There were no coy glances exchanged no coquettish smiles no contrived attempts to avoid Neel or sitting by Neel,


Aadhya LOVED stairs she either chased kids or was chased by kids

Preet appointed her oldest a 14 year old to trail Aadhya


"Aaj saara veg item hai, phir kabhi ao, Punjabi fish khilati hoon" Preet chuckled


"Aisa gunah mat kar Preet, phir woh fish khaana chhod degi" Gagan chuckled

"Gags please" preet shouted

"Aap Gags bulate hai inko?" she asked

"Kyon ki yeh CHUP nahi hotey... GAG? get it?" Preet guffawed at her own joke

Neel and Suvi's gaze met across the giant living room
For a nano second

They both thought about how they craved to say each other's names while love making

Ragini was was washing her hands

And Bhuvan went looking for Nihar

"Ghar mein kaun kaun hai beta?" Ragini asked after she returned

Gagan and Bhuvan and Neel and the other men wandered on the street

"Main aur Aadhya, aur Tai"

"Woh nahi aayin?"

"Nai... wo kahi nahi jaati hai" Suvi said

Ragini smiled at the lack of grammar skills causing Suvi to speak disrespectfully

Preet showed them around and and her studio, where she made hand crafted lamp shades with natural materials

And talked about her NGO and stuff based in the remote Punjab village where Gagan's company manufactured drugs
They came down in an hour, and the men were back she went to the rest room and when she stepped out
"She heard her daughter upstairs and went up

"Main idad nai hai... Main idad nai hai' Adhya was screaming... trying NOt to be found in hide and seek

Suvi laughed and did "shhh" multiple times

But Aadhya being 5 did not get it

Then the boys didnt make her "it" Considering she was only 5

The other girls in the group were 10, 12 etc...

The next time Suvi and her shut the lights out and hid behind a study desk in Maneet's room
Aadhya escaped when she heard the bathroom door
Suvi stood up wondering how the kids could find her, and assumed the bathroom had another door on the other side

IT WAS NEEL!!
The bathroom light was on

His shirt was wet

"Mango custard mein naha liye hum" he laughed

"Meetha mast lagta hai kya aapko?" she mocked "Jaldi jaldi mein khaaya hoyega"

He pinned her or atleast stood in front

"Neel" she whispered

Trembling

"They are all down eating custard" he said

Neel" she squirmed

"suvechha" he returned the favor

"I AM BEGGING YOU" he said hoarsely

And she was noble she wudnt let him beg too much

After the first kiss Suvi said "Tumne khaate time giraya?" she whispered
He had tasted like mangi custrad to her

"Agar nahi khaate to 100% nuksaan tha na... abhi to sirf 20%" he laughed

She moaned as he let his right hand creep up under her stiff pallu to cup her curve
And groaned... agonized... and kissed her rough

Gagan called his driver from Sector 3 and had her dropped

They returned at 1 AM
And Bhuvan yawned on the sofa

Ragini went to change

"Pasand karti hain aapko?" he said all of sudden

Neel felt a golf ball fly up his wind pipe

"Jee?" he asked baffled
"Suvechha aapko pasand karti hain?" Bhuvan spoke firmly

NO IDEA HOW TO ANSWER THAT
He tried to channel all of Suvechha's expressions all evening long JUST to be able to place WHICH of her expression had given his FIL the clue

There was NO interaction that could have caused Bhuvan to come to that conclusion

NO WAY!!
They were discreet to the point of being invisible to each other in the living room
HOW did he know? Neel wondered astounded

Upstairs Ragini changed, texted Preet to thank her

"Beta Suvechha ka last name kya hai?" "I think she told me I couldnt catch it in the din" she texted

Gurpreet texted "Dhabolkar" AND then realized the besan laddoo dabba event

And shouted OMGEEE! OMGEE!!!

"Shubhangi is her mother?" Ragini asked

Gurpreet rolled over and slammed her face into the pillow squirming

"Oh shit! "oh shit!"

Gags shouted "So ja Preeto"

"Yes Aunty" Gurpreet texted with shaking fingers

Ragini stared at the last name for the longest time...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Panditji why are you interested in having mundane conversation with suvi ?
Why did you want her to cut her trip short ?
Is she needed to discuss the reorganiAtion process ?
Decide karo aapko woh chahiye ya nahi ?
I hope ragini is able to observe aapne Damad ke lakshan when he is around suvi.

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