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Posted: 9 years ago
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InnocenceWith Maturity

Part-1

A girl is playing in the field of some village with another girlof same age

G: sapna tu sahi se khel na...aaj tera mood nahi hai khelne ka

S: riddhi tjhse ek baat puchu

R: ha puch

S: ye shaadi kya hota hai

R: shaadi... umm... haa mai patiala gayi thi na last month shaadi mein.. usme naa bhut majaa ata hai.. sab khoob dance karte hai... variety of food .. ek bhut sundar ladka horse per ata hai.. fir use bhut cute ladki k saamne laate hai.. haa fr wo bhut sari pics click krwate hai.. or pata hai last mein wo log fire k around circles bhi lete hai

S: or

R: or bss fir mjhe neend aa gyi m so gyi

S: kya wo cute si ladki uss ladke k 7 jaati hai

R: um pata nahi per tu ye sab kyu puch rahi hai

S: wo na meri didi ki shaadi hai tou ghar per sab baat ker rhe the ki didi ab chali jaengi

R: achaa.. fr na mai tou kabhi shaadi nahi karungi mai apne maa papa ko chod k kahi ni jaungi

S: mai bhi.

Both smiled and returned to their playing.
Here phone is ringing continuously in someone house in village and a lady in late 30's picked the call

L: Hello

V: maa

L: armaan beta.. kaisa hai

A: mai thik hu aap btao ghar per sab kaise hai

L: yaha sab thik hai beta tu ghar kab aa raha hai.

A: maa kal last exam hai or papa perso aenge na Chandigarh tou mai unke 7 hi wapis aa jaunga

L: thik hai beta apna dhyan rakha

A: jii maa... bye

They hang up the call

V: ananya bahu kiska phone tha

Any: wo maaji armaan ka phone tha

D: kaisa hai beta wo

Any: thik hai.. or perso inke 7 wapis aa raha hai

D: chal ye tou achi baat hai... ab mai uske lie to uska manpasand laddu banati hu

Any: are maaji aap baithie mai banati hu na

D: nahi mere bache k lie mai apne haatho se laddu banaungi

R: mere lie nahi banaogi dadi

D: are riddhu... tu kab aai or tere lie bhi banaungi... jab armaan yaha nahi hota tou sara pyar tjhper hi tou loota ker.. apna dill ko tasalli deti hu

Any: aja riddhu.. baith mai tere lie khana lagati hu

She left from there

R: dadi kya apka pauta aa raha hai

D: haa beta

R: kyu aa raha hai wo.. mjhe wo bilkul acha nahi lagta

D: are kyu

R: wo jab bhi ata tou mjhe moti moti keh ker bulata hai.. mjhe usse baat krna bilkul pasand nahi

D: are iss baar agar usne the kuch kaha tou mai use dantungi

R: yeee... thank you dadi

Ananya served her food and riddhima got busy in having it.

Any: maa ji in dono ki ek minute k lie nahi banti ye aage chal ker zindagi 7 kaise guzaarenge

D: are abhi bache hai ye tu chinta mat ker.. sab thik hoga.

Later riddhima goes to her house and padma asked her to have food

R: nahi maa mai choti maa k yaha se kha aai hu

P: tu bhi na ... kitni baar kaha hai waha jati hai tou bta ker jaya ker or kapde bhi dhang k nahi pehnker jaati

R: maa

Sh: are kya hua meri bachi ko

R: papa dekho naa maa kal ki tarah fir se mjhe suna rahi hai

Sh: padma kyu use tum dant rahi ho abhi bachi hai wo

P: thik hai or chadaie isse sir per.

She left from there

R: papa... She pout

Sh: mai baat kerta hu teri maa se jaa tu jaa ker tv dekh

Riddhima got busy in watching her favorite cartoons forgetting the world around

Shashank goes to padma

Sh: are tum kyu riddhu ko iss baare me danti rehti ho

P: ji kal ko bhi usne unke ghar byah ker jana hai ... wo log kya sochenge

Sh: kuch nahi sochenge.. wo abhi bachi hai tum chinta mat karo

P: fr bhi

Sh: padmaa

P: ji thik hai... aap khana kha lijie.

Next Day at Chandigarh

A: yo rahul ... exam over ho gye an tera kya hai plan hai

Ra: mai tou apne mama k ghr jaa raha hu prso..

G: ohh how boring rahul

Ra: anji ab tumhari tarah itna rich tou nahi hu ki kahi holidays k lie jaau

Anji: yar I didn't mean to say like that

Ra: I know.. waise ye niks kaha hai

N: yaha hai

She said from back

A: kaha thi tu.

N: wo bss kuch friends ko bye bol rahi thi.. ab sab tou college me nahi milenge and na

A: haa but we all are going to same college

Ra: yaa man..

Anji: so u not we party in evening

N: nice idea

A: yar mjhe packing kerni hai

N: ohh armaan chl na waise bhi tum result k time hi wapis aaoge

A:ok fine

They all had fun in evening and next day billy goes to pick up armaan

A: papa

Bi: so my boy ready to go back home

A: ji

Bi: waise ghr chl tum sab k lie ek surprise hai

A: really kya

Bi: are surprise hai chal tou sahi

A: mjhe pata hai bade papa ko jarur pata hoga

Bi: armaan tu pehle ghar chalega

A: nhi bade papa k paas

They bicker whole way to home and finally reaching home he rushed to shashank ... in fields

A: bade papa

Sh: are armaan puttar tu

Armaan touch his feet to take blessings.. shashank hugged him.. abhi was also present there

Abhi: kaisa hai tu

A: mai badia hu tu bata... ab college tu Chandigarh me join ker raha hai na

Abhi: haa ummid tou puri hai

A: acha.. bade papa.. papa ka surprise batao na plzzz

He make such cute faces that shashank can't stop himself and told him

Sh: thje pata hai na tere papa ne pehle chandigarh me ek choti si factory lagai thi lower banane ki

A: jii

Sh: tou use usme profit acha hua tou 7 me usne t-shirt or shirts ka bhi kaam start ker dia or ab factory ek big scale per phunch gyi hai

A: jii.. mai bhi ab waha se leta hu shirt and all

Sh: so ab tere papa waha office khol rahe hai... or waha per apne khud ka brand lauch krenge.. fashion show bhi karnge.. designer wagerha sab ko hire ker ke

A: waao sach me

Sh: haa.. or billy ne waha ek bhut sundar ghr bhi khareed lia hai... jisme ek bhut sundar garden.. basement me pool wagerha sab hai

A: sach me bade papa... iska matlab ab hum waha rahenge.. yes... lekin aap log bhi aauge naa hamare 7

Sh: nhi beta the pata hai na mera kaam tou yaha per hai.. mai waha kaise aa skta hu

Bi: kyu nahi tu hamare 7 rhega

Sh: nahi balvinder.. mai ye kaam kaise chodunga smjh na.. the kitni bar kaha hai

Bi: acha thik hai.. armaan ab tu ghar chal raha hai.. teri maa or dadi tera intezar ker rhe hai

A: jii papa.. or abhi badi maa ko kehna mai shaam ko aunga.. mere lie aalu k pranthe ready rakhe or uss moti se bacha k rakhenge

Bi: armaan.. he scold her

A: sorry papa

Bi: chl ghar chl

Armaan and billy reached home.. he greet his mother and dadi.. and got lots of pampering and favorite foods.. he was very happy that now he doesn't need to stay at hostel.. as he is going to live with his family..

In evening he reached riddhima's home..and greet padma there.. have aalu pranthas there

R: khud tou 4 pranthe kha Chuka hai or mjhe moti bolta hai.. she said coming home

Abhi: choti tu kya waha khadi uske pranthe gin rahi hai

R: haa.. bhukkar kahi ka

A: tu moti

R: tum yaha ate hi kyu ho

A: tu roj mere ghr kyu jati hai

R: wo meri choti maa ka gher hai

A: tou ye meri badi maa ka gher hai

R: huh

P: riddhu tune fr armaan se ladna shuru ker dia

A: dekho na badi maa iss golu ko mjhe khane nahi de rahi

R: khao kisne roka hai saand kahi k

P: riddhu..she scolded her

R: huh . She leave from there..

Later from abhi and armaan padma got to know about them shifting to Chandigarh she got happy and in a day or two whole village got to know about this and they started gossiping of malik family leaving to city and will never return back to do marriage of armaan and riddhima.

Padma is really stressed due to this but unknown to these talk armaan and riddhima are enjoying their vacations. Armaan and abhi used to roam whole day... sometimes play cricket and also help shashank in fields. Riddhima is excited to attend new class and she is preparing for and that and spend her time playing with sapna or helping padma in some house chores... but whenever armaan riddhima come in front of each other they used to fight and got scolding from their parents.

Next Day Billy and shashank both are sitting together

Bi: shashank tujhe meri dosti per bharosa hai na

Sh: aise kyu puch raha hai yar

Bi: mai janta hu pure gaav me kya baatein ho rahi hai

Sh: dekh ek beti ka pita hone k naate mjhe kahi na kahi darr lagta hai lekin mjhe inn sab se kahi upar mere dost per vishwas hai..

Bi: bss yehi vishwas hamesha banaye rakhna.. or mera vada hai sahi samay ane per mai khud armaan riddhima ki shaadi karaunga

Sh: mjhe uss din ka intezar rahega.

Both hugged each other and armaan listen their talk was in a great shock and he runs from there.

Here goes the first part hope u all will like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
A different concept...looks interesting..waiting for nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Interesting start.
Cont asap.
Thnx for d pm
T.c
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nice starting
Interesting concept
Plzz so pm me
Update soon
Edited by T.Peru - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Hey dear
Lovely first part...story looks amazing waiting how armaan nd ridz got married in this small age.
Update soon
Love
Sania
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awesome part... Loved it...
AR bickering is superb...
Hehhehehhehe...

It was damn cute... Oye AR ka toh already rishta pakka ho chuka hai... Ek dusre se...
Bechaare ko pata bhi ni par armaan ne sun liya... Ab kya hogaa...hope sab achha hao... Plss next jaldi post kar... Jaldi yaar... Can't wait...

#megha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
sound to bda interesting kr rha h concept bht acha h or part bhi and ha u can send me adult parts I m 24 okk nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
lovely update next jldi plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Great storyline . Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice concept :)
Armaan and Riddhima are going to get married :O she's so young

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