KRPKAB {Alternate Universe} - Their Priced Misunderstandings - Page 2

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Hi Hello Namskar Pranam Aadab... 😆

Of course..naam is very popular...bahuto en suna hoga.😉

The banner looks beautiful ...❤️

Coming to the story, awesome beginning...Perfect blend of emotions... Flow of scenes was handled nicely. 👍🏼

Overall, Awesome! 😎

Didn't know that you write lol...😆

Gritted his teeth? Please fetch him a dentist. 😳 He is so hot, so will be his teeth - they'll melt lol. 🤣

Kar ke dekha - bohot sochna parta hai! 🤓 🤣

Oye goye!! New ff!! *seeti maar* sorry maine yeh sekh tak nhi tha... lol...

Woww sounds intrstng
I m luking frwrd to read it

Awesome one!!! 👏

Thanks a lot for the pm!! 😊

Originally posted by: ramya06

Res first!
Par sun le ye res tab tak unres nahi hoga jab tak mera unres nahi hota. 😛😉
Tit for tat! 😈

Unres
Wowie! What an interesting start.
Dev's father's case opened by divisha.
And what did her father do? Better even, what did the father's do. Woah! The flashback looks like a lot of mess. Poor divisha,felt really bad for her. So DevIsha were childhood friends separated by misunderstandings, hmm interesting. And a lot of questions coming up. So do update next part soon bae. I am eagerly waiting.

Love
Ramya aka Your Uloopi mata ❤️

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star

Hey!!!!

Samu🤗 [this hug is coz i missed u so much😆]

Coming to your story...the starting is really very interesting...it surely increases the curosity of knowing their relation and offcourse "Their Misunderstandings" more...

And my name in a story...🤗[this hug coz u will say thank u and i will not like it...so huggiee se kaam chala lo🤣]...par desai...chalo chadho na...story demand hai😆...

Superb starting😃

Waiting to read more...update soon😳

Thanks for pm😊

lol

Wow! Sam... This is was awesome! Loved it dear

Originally posted by: -Saishree-

Wowww Sam! This is so so soo interesting! And yeah finally u in action! I so missed this!
Yaar one small request...plz sid ko add kar story me! *showing puppy eyes* dekh tuni bhi hai nah! Plz plz plz plz...infinite Plz...plz yeh chotti si icchha purn kar plz...
Eager to know this mystery now!
Update soon!

thank you . Haha . Will think about it 😉

Originally posted by: Sonatia

Res ! Its not my lazyness. ~_~
un
where to start? Umm yes u took a lot of time to post it. I am late but not more than u are.
Hmm banner is very colourful and looking beautiful and i love ur introduction to. Magenta is looking perfect with black.
Well i know u will kill me if i end my comment here. 🤣 afterall i ate ur head so much.
So coming to the story. It was awesome re. Tere hath,payr and dimag me jaadu hai. Itni awesome idea ati kahanse hai re ?
I love the starting..it was very admirable.
*Dev took off his coat went to washroom to freshen himself*
i can totally imagine my handsome aary pata hai when he comes from office and takes off his coat he looks so yummy.
And that convo in that phone call was very interesting. What have his father done re?
And that part where my arya asks who opened that case mr bhat answers it is a young lawyer. It was funny how he reacts "i don't care if she is young or old." *arrogant boss* hmm B-)
and while having this convo when he undid his shirt buttons, i was shipping :-P *my bedsome arya*
see, i notice each and everything. :-D
and that flashback it was so interesting and touching as well. Btw is it the same girl who is reopening the case?

i was literraly angry when the man pushed her to the ground. And what happened to her dad and why her face was guilty? And that part where *she kept looking at him telling him to forgive and belive her* and arya was fighting between his heart and mind. It was so beautifully written. But it was so sad how the girl was crying.
And then that ishwari. :-| ugh! She is such a vampire in the show. :-|
but the last sentence
"its her opening the case"
i guess, the flashback wali girl hired a lawyer. And it is divisha. i guess she wants to prove that her father was not a criminal..it was awesome start of a story re. U rock !
Update soon. Want more And can't wait. When will u update? Don't make us wait long.