Luv Finds Its Way PART-22on PG-47 - Page 30

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Posted: 16 years ago
plz continue it....ab aur kitna wait karna padega..........me dying to read nxt part
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Posted: 16 years ago
varu yaar main palkein bichakar raah dekhing... please jaldi se continue karo na dear..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys am back with my part..i know that have made u all wait really wrong and dunno how many of u will still be interested in this one specially when we have so many talanted writers wid us..but still m updating it...i know the part is too short but cudnt helo it as my college nd travelling is so time taking tht really dunt gt nytime to write..but i promise will nt leave this ff without finishing it..i just need your support....as for this part i would like to thanks Surya..who did this whole thing for me...thx a lot suri luv u....and now thanks to all those ppl who are still waiting 4 the part...luv u all..herz the part


Abhi: Alya ye tumne sahi nahi kiya….

Alya: is halat me yahi sahi tha…uska sabkuch janna bahut jaruri hai…

Abhi: wahi to mai bhi keh raha hu ke uska sabkuch janna bahut jaruri hai..agar wo yaha hoti to hum usse bat kar sate the use samjha sakte the..lekin ab to hum chah kar bhi ustak nahi pahuch payenge…

Alya: tumko kya lagta hai tum jake naina ko sabkuch batate aur wo tumhari bat man leti?? Tum usse jake kahoge ke uske ma bap ne use apnane se saf inkar kar diya aur wo manlegi..nai Abhi…kabhi nahi manegi wo …is waqt uski akhon pe galatfehmi ki patti pari hui hai aur jabtak wo sabkuch apni akhon se nahi dekh leti wo humari koi bhi bat nahi manegi

Abhi:- lekin hum kosish to kar sakte the na ab to wo rasta bhi band ho gaya hai....aur ye Arjun ye bhi pata nahi kaha hai....

udhar naina apne ghr pahuchti hai but wo andar nahi jati bas wahi bahar khare hoke apne ghar ko dekh rahi hoti hai….tabhi koi use peeche se awaz deta hai…wo peeche murke dekhti hai to it was Rea….

Rea:- didi….(coming near her) didi ap yaha….oh god…ap wapas aa gai…(hugs her) mai bata nahi sakti ki mai kitni hush hu app kahan chali gait hi…ek bar bataya bhi nahi…lekin ap yaha kyou…chaliye andar chaliye…

naina : nahi rea…

But before she could say anything read draga her inside the house….

Rea:-[shouts] ma baba dekho kaun aya hai….

Hering her shout every one comes to the living room….

Sare naina ko dekh ke chauk jate hai unlogo ne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ke naina aise unke samne aake khari ho jayegi kisi ki samajh me nahi a raha tha ke wo kaise react kare..sab bas apni apni jagah pe khare ek dusre ki taraf dekh rahe the..sabkeliye want mano ruk hi gaya tha....tabhi india(naina's mom) naina ke pas ati hai...she touches her face dono ki akhon me asun hote hai...she huggs her and both breaks down...after some time indira and rashmi naina ko ander leke jate hai....leaving sameer and aastish back...they both look towards each other and then leave for their work....

yahaan doosri taraf Abhi aur Alya ghar par pareshaan hokar baite hue hothe hai.. unhe tho kuch samaj hii nahii aa raha hotha hai kii woh kare tho kya kare..ek hi din me itna sab kuch ho gaya tha ke kisi ki kuch samkh me nahi aa raha tha ke kya kare....it was not that all this come completely as shock coz somewhere they always knew that something like this was bound to happen..its just that they were not prepared for this...both of them were trying to figure out a way by which they can get things back to normal...... woh log is soch mein ghumm hothe hai, tabhi wahaan Arjun aatha hai... Abhi & Alya Arjun ki taraf dekhte hai ... Arjun un logon se nazrein chura kar wahaan se jaane lagtha hai... jab Alya usse rokhthi hai..

Alya:- Arjun rukho...

Arjun apni jagah pe ruk jata hai

Arjun:- kya hua Alya anything wrong?

Alya was about to say something when Abhi cuts her

Abhi: tu thik hai?

Arjun:-[laughs sarcastically] haan main theek hoon , mujhe kya hona hai...

Alya:- Arjun tum humein tho yakeen dila doge kii tum theek ho, lekin tum khud ko kaise yakeen dilaoge kii tum theek ho..

Arjun:- Alya maine kaha na main theek hoon..

Alya:- Arjun shayad tum theek ho, lekin khushi theek nahii hai...

Arjun immediately asks:- kya hua hai khushi ko..

Alya:- jab se naina gayi hai yahaan se khushi bas roye hii jaa rahii hai.. na usne kuch khaya hai aur na hii piya hai.. bas roye jaa rahii hai kii usse naina chahiye...

now Arjun is about to go.. jab

Abhi:- Arjun shayad tum apne ghum ko chupa sakthe ho, lekin khushi ab bhi bachchi hai usse apna ghum chupana nahii aatha...

Arjun stares at Abhi & then leaves the hall... yahaan Abhi & Alya sigh, not understanding what to do...

ab kuch dhair baad we see kii Arjun enters khushi's room with a khane ka plate in his hand... Arjun dekhtha hai kii khushi bed par ro rahii hothi hai... Arjun goes & sits beside her & says...

Arjun:- khushi...

khushi does not answer & she turns her face the other side...

Arjun [smiles & says]:- khushi dekho papa tumhare liye khana laaye hai.. dekho sab tumhari mann-pasand cheezein hai.. chalo be a good girl aur khana kha lo chalo...

khushi:- [catching her teddy tightly says] nahii main bad girl hoon.. main khana nahii khaoongi...

Arjun:- bachcha aap se kis ne keh diya kii aap bad girl ho...

khushi:- mujhe pata hai main bad girl hoon.. agar main bad girl nahii hothi tho naina aunty mujhe chod kar nahii jaathi..

Arjun:- khushi aisi koi baat nahii hai, woh tumhari naina aunty iss liye yahaan se chali gayi kyunke unhe unke ghar kii yaad aa rahii thi..

khushi:- tho kya yeh unka ghar nahi..

Arjun:- bachcha yeh bhi tumhari naina aunty ka ghar hai.. lekin woh apne mummy papa ke pass jaane chahthi thi.. waise hii jaise aap papa ke bina nahii rehthe.. ussi tarah unhe bhi tho apne mummy papa ke pass jaana hii tha...

khushi:- [very sweetly asks] tho kya naina aunty apne mummy papa se milkar wapas aa jaayengi humare pass...

[Arjun ko patah nahii woh kya bole...when khushi nudges him & says] papa bolo na kya naina aunty wapas aa jaayengi mere pass.. papa aap naina aunty ko yahaan wapas le aaoge na.. aap unse kehna kii khushi unko bahut miss kar rahi hai... aap kahenge na papa...

Arjun:- haan main kahoonga.. lekin agar tum chahthi ho kii tumhari naina aunty wapas aa jaye tho tumhe yeh khana finish karna hoga...

khushi maan jaathi hai aur ab Arjun khushi ko khana khila raha hotha hai..after finishing her plate khushi starts jumping all around the room saying kii ab naina aunty wapas aa jaayengi... naina aunty wapas aa jaayengi... Arjun kii aankhon me assoo aa jaathe hai listening to khushi & he just hugs khushi... Abhi & Alya joh room ke darwaaze pe khade hokar sab dekh rahe hothe hai.. yeh sab dekh kar unki aankhon mein bhii assoo aa jaathe hai.....

Edited by varallika - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part. too emotional. Pls try to cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey dear thnx for dpm............n thanx for updating also............it was very sad part.. bt very beautifully n well written............bt y ur making story so suspicious......now a another twsit .........now i av to run horses in mind again 😆😆😆 2 open this new knot like d earlier one😉.bt its difficult to understand y naina's parents didn't accept her😕😕..............plzzz continue soon............continue soon means plz continue soon........😉😉😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
will post on monday 4 sure
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was nice but i could not understand wat happen after naina had gone 2 paris n how had her dad allowed her 2 go n y had arjun kidnapped naina pliz do continue soon pliz
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Posted: 16 years ago

part 21


next day

ek bhut hi shandar office hota hai jaha sare log apne kam me masroof hote hai...here camera focuses on a door jispe MD ka board laga hota hai...ander koi phone pe bat kar raha hota hai...

Person: tumse ek kam nahi hota kya...teen din ho gaye maine tumhe Naine ke pariwar ke bare me pata lagane ke liye bola tha...

Other person: thora waqt lagta hai...wo larki ek sal se lapata thi...aise me its very difficult to track her family...

Person: mujhe excuses nahi sunne...agar tumse kuch ho sakta hai to karo nahi to mere pas aur bhi log hai...

Other person:- are sir ap naraz kyou ho rhe hai aj maine puri information ke sath phone kiya hai...uske pariwar me 4 log hai...uska bap Sameer Bishwas ek mamuli sa teacher hai...school aur tuitions se apna pariwar chalata hai...uski ma Indira seedhi sadi housewife hai... magar jyadatar beemar rehti hai...bachi uski behen Rea to wo abhi apne final year me hai...kafi kabil larki hai...lekin jo sabse interesting bat hai wo yeh hai ki uska bhai Aatish Bishwas...apke hi news channel me kam karta hai...

Person:[keeps down the phone nd smiles wickedly] lagta hai isbar meri kismat mere sath hai... [piyush dials some no] ha Purva...humare media deptt me Mr.Aatish Bishwas honge unhe ander bhejo and sath hi humare purane employees ke records me se Miss Naina Bishwas ki file bhi bhejo...

Thori der bad Aatish Piyush ke cabin me ata hai

Aatish: may I come in sir

Piyush: oh aatish...ya come in

Aatish: air apne mujhe bulaya

Piyush: ha actually maine tumhare seniors se tumhari kafi tariff suni hai...mai bhi kafi time se tumse milna chahta tha lekin kam me itna masroof tha ki waqt hi nahi mila...aj fursat thi to socha chalo tumse mil hi liya jaye...

Aatish: thankyou sir....

[Tabi peon Naina ki file leke ata hai and piyush usko table par rakh ke jane ke liye keta hai....aatish ki nazar usfile pe jati hai aur won am dekh ke chahuk jata hai...] sir ye file....

Piyush: ha Naina Bishwas ki hai humari kafi kabil employee thi...ek sal pehle official work se paris gai thi tab se lapata hai..lekin kuch din pehle maine use city mall me apne ex boss ke sath dekha..i want our channel to investigate this case and cover a report on this...tumko yaha bulane ki wajah bhi yahi thi main chata hu ki humare channel ke liye ye story tum karo....

Aatish:sorry sir magar main ye nahi kar sakta

Piyush: Nahi kar sakta hatiab? Tum jante ho ki tum kya keh rahe ho?this is once in a life time opportunity for you...

Aatish: I know sir lekin main ye story nahi kar sakta am really sorry

Piyush:Magar kyou

aatish: wo meri bari behen hai sir ...

Piyush: wht I don't believe it ..tum Naina ke bhai ho...I mean I can't believe this..tum Naina..ke..oh god this world is so small...[after a pause]but this doesn't effect my offer...infact ye to aur bhi acha hai ki tum Naina ke bhai ho aise you will be able to handle the situation more sensibly...[looking at Aatish]Aatish tum karo na karo ye report to ban ke rahogi as ye management ka decision gai and main isse badla nahi sakta...to bahar hai ki ise tum hi cover karo kyoki kisi aur ne kiya to...you know how things world in our industry...[Aatish Nods]waise bhi tum nahi chahte ki tumhari behen kaha hai kisi hai ye pata chale?

Aatish: shez back home sir

Piyush: what? Kab?

Aatish: kal..

Piyush: kuch bataya usne?

Aatish tells him the whole story that Naina had told them...

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now the scene is like ke banish ho rahi hota hai and Aatish is walking his way back home after coming out of Piyush's cabin...but Piyush's words keep repeating in his mind....

Flash

Piyush:meri samajh nai Aa raha ki ye sabkuch jane ke bad bhi tumlog chup kaise baith ho...i mean come on yar you ought to do some thing aise chup nahi baith sakte

Aatish: lekin sir humlogo kya kar sakte hai Arjun garewal is a big name...we can't win against him

Piyush: I don't believe it...ye tum keh rahe ho? Humara channel jo dusro ke hak ke liye khara hota hai uska reporter khud apnI behen ke hak ke liye larne se ghabra raha hai...

Present:

he halts and with a determination on his face he turns back to opposite direction and starts running....

Two days later.....in garewal house....

Sare log lunch pe Arjun ka wait kar rahe hote hai...magar wo abhi tak nai aya hota hai...

Abhi: intezar karna bekar hai ye nahi ayega...

Alya: lekin....

Abhi: lekin kya Alya...jab se Naina gai hai tab se hum intezar hi kar rahe hai na isko ana hota to abhi tak a jata...

[Tabhi Arjun comes there but before anyone could say anything the door bell rings...Alya goes to open the door...it was the postman ]

Postman: Arjun garewal ke name ki registry hai...

Arjun comes and gets his letter and opens it...he takes a few minutes to read the contents...then smiles and turns towards his study....when Abhi stops him

Abhi: kya hai isme..

Arjun looks at him gives him the letter and goes to his study...Abhi gets shocked reading the content of the letter....

Alya: Abhi kya hua...kya likha hai isme?

Abhi: Naina....

Alya: Naina kya? Abhi plzzz bolo kya hua Naina ko...

Abhi: Naina ne Arjun ke against case file kiya hai...kidnapping and abduction?

Alya: wht?

[ Before Alya could say anything Abhi rushes to the study...]

Abhi: Arjun ye ...case ye ...[Arjun nods] kaha tha na maine tujhe mat kar ye sab..koi nahi samjhega...anyways mail papers banwa leta hu...ye aise bhi koi jyada bara case nahi hai..do hearings me I'll get it dismissed....

Arjun: I don't want to defend myself Abhi....

Abhi: what have you gone mad? Tu khud ek lawyer hai..ye kidnapping ye abduction... iski saza janta hai na tu...aur saza to chor teri zindagi Tera career tab barbad ho jayega

Arjun kuch nai bolta hai and chup chap kaha se uthne chala jata hai....

Edited by varallika - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part...............................plz con't soon............................ur story is superb...................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome FF. I hav read it recently. Thnx 4 continuing.

I am really worried abt Arjun. I hope nothing bad happens to him. Y doesnt Naina understand him ???? My poor baby!!! Wo toh khud ko defence tak karna nahi chahta.😔 PLS UD SOON. I really wanna read wats gonna happen next.

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