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Posted: 18 years ago
i'm sorryy 😭 tak eur time cont u when u can
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Posted: 18 years ago
im going to continue this ff soon plz no one els continue 😊
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Sorri I haven't continued in so long and its March!!! So lets just pretend that in the story it is March 😊 , well the middlish So here it goes 😉 :

Mera Pyar- PART 4

Kripa ran up the stairs as fast and quick as she could. She ran down the hall and flew open her bedroom door. She walked over to her closet to take out her clothes and noticed the humongous smile on her face. She looked at herself smiling in the mirror and her smile grew larger. She lightly hit herself on her head and opened her closet and pulled something comfortable out as she wanted to dress casual but look good at the same time. She took out a baggy rocawear shirt and an extremely baggy enyce sweater, and then she grabbed some denim capris and walked over to her bathroom. She walked into her shower and turned the water on cold. "That feels so good" Kripa thought. She closed her eyes and let the water just sink into her. A few minutes later she turned the water a little hotter and washed her hair and herself. She came out of the shower, and pulled on her clothes. Since her hair was wet, she quickly put some mousse on and left her bangs to the side as usually. Her hair was naturally silky straight, so she didn't ever need to straighten it unless it became bendy. She put a few hair ties onto her wrists and put a clip on her shirt. She walked out of her bathroom, added a clear coat of lip gloss to her rosy lips and put on some ankle socks and her white Nike air forces. She turned to her closet and got her pink on black rocawear string bag. She looked towards her desk and saw her ipods she chose to take her blue one today. She put it in her pocket and stepped outside looking like a gorgeous beauty.



She stepped into her 2006 Lamborghini and rode next door to the Khanna mansion. She had to admit it was really nice, possible nicer than the Sharma Mansion. She parked her car in front of a red beauty (red car) and looked up at the house. She rang the doorbell of the house and stood there in front of the door and waited for someone to open.

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"Auntyji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Josh exclaimed." Whats the problem hun?" she said. "Someones at the door", he responded. "Maybe its Alliya, usse maa ki ab yaad aie." She smiled and walked over to the door. She opened the door only to find a smiling Kripa. "KRIPA! Omg beta! How are you? When did you come?" "Last night." Kripa said as she smiled her cute smile. "What brings you here?" Meera asked Kripa. " I'm here to pick up your daughter, she was over last night and well, we woke up and found out that Sami's at the airport, but that bundar won't hurry up" Kripa said as she laughed. Meera too laughed and asked her to come sit down. Kripa was walking it to the house noticing how beautiful it was. She was absolutely awed. The French dcor, the beautiful tiling was absolutely aweing. She looked at Meera and smiled and noticed she looked kinda pale. "Aunty, did you have your medication this morning?" Kripa asked in a motherly way with her hands on her hips. Josh observed her from the sofa and noticed her concern. "No….." Meera was cut off by Kripa. "I knew it, if i'm not here for one day people don't take care of you. I'll deal with Alliaya and Anita later and if you don't take your blood pressure medicine form now on I will be very mad." Kripa told Meera. Meera smiled and said, " Acha baba, I'll get it now." "No said Kripa, "You sit let me go get it." Kripa walked into the kitchen as Meera took a seat beside Josh. She watched Kripa mix and make the medicine. She smiled her way and said, "That's a wonderful sister that you have, you should be proud. She takes so much pride into her work. She a little naughty but deep down her heart is made of pure gold, but bechari….." Meera was cut off by Kripa. "Now drink this, it will make you feel better and then after take this." Josh saw the sweetness in Kripa and smiled. The clock struck 10:00 and josh was surprised. "See you later aunty, I have to go wake up Angad or I'm going to be late and fail because of him this year again….." "Exactly like you two have for the past 3 years." Meera completed. He smiled and walked towards the stairs.

Josh was going up the stairs with a bucket of ice and water when he saw Alliaya coming down the stairs all jolly in beautiful pair of jeans and top than complemented her thin yet full figure. He was mesmerized by her beauty. "Sup, josh" she said. Before he could reply she gone down the stairs. "Kripa, hurry up! Let's go!" Kripa bid Farwell to Meera and walked towards Alliaya and yelled, " ME! Look at yourself, you hurry up." Kripa walked out the front door and went and sat into her car. Alliaya looked at Josh, "Sorry, I'm not coming to school today. See you later tonight." She turned around and left. Josh also turned around and walked up his stairs. "What a girl!" he thought and walked towards Angad's room with his bucket.

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Alliaya sat into Kripa's car and apologized for being late. Kripa smiled and put her car in reverse by accident and it hit the car behind them, "Uh-oh" Kripa turned red and zoomed away. "OMG! My bro is gunna freak! That's his car." Alliaya exclaimed. "Okay…….... ummmm……let me think……..at least he won't know that it was me. You won't tell will you?" Kripa asked in a worried tone. "Don't worry about me but he has like temper problems he is gunna freak out when he see's his favorite car crushed. Just leave it let's not bring it up." Kripa let out a sigh of relief and closed her eyes. "Don't close your eyes! You're driving for god sake!" Alliaya exclaimed. "Sorry…" Kripa replied. Alliaya laughed and Kripa hit her playfully on her arm and the kept driving over to the airport.

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Josh opened Angad's door and then he saw Angad sleeping peacefully in his bed, with his head buried in his pillow. "What a mess, his room is!" thought Josh. Josh walked over to Angad's bed and poured freezing cold water on him! "WTF! JOSH!" Angad screamed. "Sorry man, but I got to get to school, you hurry up. We gotta pass this year. We failed so many times we're in the same grade as Alliaya, also know as grade 12, and besides my dad will kill me if I fail this year. See you at school, now get up!" Josh kicked Angad in his as* and ran out. Angad got up and thought. "What a night, first a party, then the screaming. I finally fell asleep. I feel like I'm ruined. What will happen next?" Angad hit his head on his pillow. "GET UP!" Angad fell off his bed again and groaned. That was josh. He knew it.

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Kripa and Alliaya stopped at the pick up area at the airport. They got out of the car and went into the airport. They went to the information desk and asked about Sami. The lady pointed behind them. He barked, Kripa and Alliaya turned around. "OMG!!!!!!!!", screamed Kripa. The two of them ran over to Kripa's puppy and held it in there hands.



"Ma'am where should we put the dog's things?" asked Sami's escort. "Put, it in my car, its outside." Kripa handed him the keys. Alliaya looked at Sami's stuff. The dog sure had a lot. The escort then spoke. " Ma'am we have brought over your escalade, here are the keys." Kripa and Alliaya screamed. That car was Kripa's life. It was black from the outside but pink leather in the inside with a computer, ipod system, everything. The car was Kripa's life, as well as Sami's since he had his own cute little seat and everything. Kripa lifted up Sami from the ground and took him to the car.



They put sami in the seat and headed home. There was a moment of silence and then Alliaya broke it. "Kripa, there's this party tonight. It's like my brothers after party for his concert tonight. It's at some club. I'm going and you have to come!" "OMG! Yes, I love parties. Let's go shopping for some hot outfits. By the way, who's your brother? You said he's some kind of rockstar", said Kripa. "No, he's a superstar in his point of view and his names Angad, Angad Khanna." Kripa smiled, "cool, I'll be nice to meet you Mr. Khanna" Kripa smiled and Aliaya and Sami barked from the back. They all laughed and drove off the mall.

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Angad Khanna walked out of his house. He spun his keys around in his hand looking hawt as ever. Wearing something like this:



he was wearing his signature Bling. He walked over to his red beauty. " WTF? MY CAR!!!" He touched it. " Sorry baby….." he said to the car. "Could my days get any worse." He sat in his car a rode off.

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Angad stopped infront of Alexzander High and walked out. Everyone stopped and looked over to him. His budz Josh and Sujal Verma walked over to him. "Dude who messed up your car?" asked Josh. "You ask too many questions, Josh" said sujal. Josh was about to speak when Angad spoke. "Before you two get into a fight, don't worry it was a little accident. Anyways, my party's tonight and Casa club so you all have to be there. You too Sujal. You weren't there last night because you had your first date but be there tonight." Laughed Angad. Josh joined him in the laughing moment. " My first date was fine….thanks for asking but she said she didn't like me and Is it my fault I'm not a Mr. flirt like you too and instead im kinda shy." asked sujal. "No its not Mommy's boy" said Josh. Angad joined in with the laughter. "At least I have a mommy." Relpied sujal. Josh took a step towards sujal. "Stop it sujal and josh. We're going a little too far. Let's just drop it."

Angad walks into the cafeteria and the girls run over to him like flies near candy. Josh and Sujal are in the back. "Sorry, man I went a little too far and….." josh cut sujal off. He hugged him and said, " It's okay bro….. best friends don't fight." They smiled and turned towards Angad. "Look at these chipkalian on Angad." Said Josh. Josh and sujal laughed and high-fived on another. Then Angad spoke up. "Alright ladies, everyone is invited to my party at the Casa Club. So everyone be there, you're all invited." He said this, winked and walked away with Sujal and Josh. The girls let out a sigh and the boys were gone.

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Alliaya and Kripa sat exhausted in the food court. It was 5:30 pm and they were shopping for a long time! They were eating ice-cream, it was kripa's favourite so they were enjoying a small chat. Alliaya got up to go to the bathroom and Kripa sat there alone. She started to think. " Six months….. it'll be all over…….. why……….why………" Kripa started crying uncontrollably. Alliaya came running and sat beside Kripa. " Awwwww…. Hunni, don't cry please baby. Don't worry. It'll all be okay. Believe in god. Let's just pray", Said Alliaya trying to console Kripa. " Praying doesn't work, it just doesn't" Kripa got up and hugged Alliaya. Kripa stood there hugging Alliaya and crying.


That's the part. 😛 It was really long. I'm so sorry for not continuing but life has its ups and downs and we have to fix them before moving on. 😊 I'll try to continue next weekend since it's a 4 day weekend because of Easter I have Friday, Saturday and Monday but not Sunday cuz its my birthday. 😃 😃 But i still need around 15 comments not less maybe more to continue or else im not 😳 So anyways……what's wrong with Kripa? 😕 😊

To find out keep reading Mera Pyar. 😳

Kanwer 😳



Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMGGG!!! u continued, FINALLY!!!!! 😆
i havent read it yet, but will read nd edit it!!! 😛

*edit*

ok.. i read it nd, OMG!! AWESUM prt!! 👏
i TOTALLY loved it!!! 😳 it was funny too!!!
i was 🤣 when i was reading it!!! nd Sami's a dog!!!! OMG!!! 2222 GUD!!
i am not a big fan of dogs, but i can tell tht Krips nd Ali r!!!! lol!!! 🤣
anywzzz, AWESUM once again, nd continue soon!!!! 😛
Edited by berkeleygirl818 - 18 years ago
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Edited by hello64 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMGGG!!! u continued, FINALLY!!!!! 😆
i havent read it yet, but will read nd edit it!!! 😛



okiee dokiee smokey 😉 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

OMGGG!!! u continued, FINALLY!!!!! 😆
i havent read it yet, but will read nd edit it!!! 😛

*edit*

ok.. i read it nd, OMG!! AWESUM prt!! 👏
i TOTALLY loved it!!! 😳 it was funny too!!!
i was 🤣 when i was reading it!!! nd Sami's a dog!!!! OMG!!! 2222 GUD!!
i am not a big fan of dogs, but i can tell tht Krips nd Ali r!!!! lol!!! 🤣
anywzzz, AWESUM once again, nd continue soon!!!! 😛



thanx for relpying 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
yipeeeeeeeeee u cont'd!! kk, first off, i have to tell u this: plz empty your pm box cuz i got your pms and couldnt reply since u have exceeded the limit of messages u can have in their or something...

Next...you'er killing me man!! i cant wait till a-k meet 😳 luvd the part!! it was fab!! i really like how u describe it all, like the clothing and stuff every time, so i can picture it in my mind!! and sami is a dog!! lol 😆 he is shoo adorableeeee... i dont know who i expected it to be 😳 anywayzz... cant wait till the next part and the partyyyy... and kripa hit angad's car and angad was talking to his car, that was funny 😆

k, so cont soon, cuz i have spring break and i wanna spend it readinggg ffs.. lol 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

omgsh amazing part! haha angads gonna get mad when he finds out that kripa did that to his car!! anyways take your time in continuing.... but not too long!😳

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Originally posted by: erier101

yipeeeeeeeeee u cont'd!! kk, first off, i have to tell u this: plz empty your pm box cuz i got your pms and couldnt reply since u have exceeded the limit of messages u can have in their or something...

Next...you'er killing me man!! i cant wait till a-k meet 😳 luvd the part!! it was fab!! i really like how u describe it all, like the clothing and stuff every time, so i can picture it in my mind!! and sami is a dog!! lol 😆 he is shoo adorableeeee... i dont know who i expected it to be 😳 anywayzz... cant wait till the next part and the partyyyy... and kripa hit angad's car and angad was talking to his car, that was funny 😆

k, so cont soon, cuz i have spring break and i wanna spend it readinggg ffs.. lol 😳 👏



i emptied my dabba 😉

angad loves his car i read it then i was thinking to myself what a loser 😆

i know sami is so cute my dog lookz juss like that and his name is cuddlez but i don't want to use her cuz sehz a gurl and samiz a boii 😳

and thank you soo much i actually enoy writing this ff and using all the pictures its like im going through my own wordrobe 😉 😆

Ak will meet soon not like officially meet next part but maybe the part after that 😉

kanwer

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