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nandrajogdivya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

heartouching best ff i ever read superb really dear outstanding

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dhonisingh

@dhonisingh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Very emotional.. Khushi's helpness in this plot..the way u described ..kudos..👏 just want to see her happiness..eager waiting to see how u unfold this to arnav..

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crazy_sweeto

@crazy_sweeto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

It was heart wrenching painful. Its so hard to understand what a girl goes through when she's put into the circumstances like this. Very well written.

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

who the hell is culprit.. he or she never deserves to live...

they shud be given painful death... noone deserves this..

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

I cried while reading this part
Poor Khushi
Feeling bad for her
Awesome update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

The way you wrote the chapter, brilliantly written, was crying whilst reading, poor Khushi. Whoever played this game wantthem to be punished badly.
Arnav is going to break down badly when he finds out what Khushi has gone through, hope he heals her.
Eager for the next part.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Painful chapter...I am feeling sorry for Khushi, but wondering who had instructed Mohan to take her to the brothel instead of orphanage home. You have wirtten Khushi's feelings, frustrations, sadness and helplessness beautifully...it seems I'm watching a movie. Than god Arnav realised that there is something behind her cold behaviour. I thought Anjali will help her but no she as same as the other person in that brothel.

Continue soon dear.

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

It's so painful yar... Poor khushi has gone through much...

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 9 years ago

#429

😭 that was soo emotional andheart wtenching.
pooor khushi.
feel sooo bad for her.
whoever was behind this which i guess is arnav's mom should not be spared.
continue sooonish

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Piya rai

@Itspiyalovely

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#430

Thanks for the update dear. I didn't expected this type of update but I think it was inevitable to come up sooner or later as it is required in the story line.it was the scariest update of this series.

I won't lie to u but I just roamed over it as quickly as possible as I didn't have the courage to read it. Thanks for the warning u gave in the beginning. It really helped me. Not much of the present scenerio was mentioned but I am hopeful to see ASR questioning himself. At least now he will take logical steps. Dont know what's the truth and how it will change their lives again??

Even if ASR come to know khushi 's innocence I don't think so khushi will realise ASR 's truth that like her he too was fooled and is innocent.

Please post soon.