ArShi Drabble: Heir of Darkness|Part 16|4/12/17| - Page 6

Amazing update , :)

Waiting for next

superb...!!! all the emotions are perfectly described... continue soon..😊

I am reading this in the bus and tried really hard not to cry... It's so emotional 😭
Poor khushi... Hope she remains strong

Originally posted by: Aishu136

Absolutely splendid!

So beautifully described:)

Its so poetic gal!:)))

Lovely I could very well feel that you have put your heart and soul while writing this..

So beautifully it turned out.

Continue, waiting to read more::)

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

The helplessness of Khushi is very aptly analyzed. Also you've got all the loose threads of Pratyusha's case very properly in.

That pregnancy one was totally a random shot as I wanted to show her as a mother! Love you Bhabhi!

Originally posted by: love2sarun

Such a beautiful update !

Words fail me here to express how beautifully you've written it Behena !👏

Is this inspired by Pratyusha?

Yes, it is inspired by Pratyusha and this whole drabble is dedicated to her. Thanks re!

Originally posted by: varsha2KD

I am reading this in the bus and tried really hard not to cry... It's so emotional 😭
Poor khushi... Hope she remains strong

OMG, thank you so much for such a sweet comment! Love you!

Nice start

Amazing update👏

That was amazing yagya.. :) continue soon!!