ArShi Drabble: Heir of Darkness|Part 16|4/12/17|

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Janhavi singh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Amazing update , :)

Waiting for next

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Shalvikamathur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

superb...!!! all the emotions are perfectly described... continue soon..😊

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I am reading this in the bus and tried really hard not to cry... It's so emotional 😭
Poor khushi... Hope she remains strong

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Aishu136
Absolutely splendid!
So beautifully described:)
Its so poetic gal!:)))
Lovely I could very well feel that you have put your heart and soul while writing this..
So beautifully it turned out.
Continue, waiting to read more::)

Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
The helplessness of Khushi is very aptly analyzed. Also you've got all the loose threads of Pratyusha's case very properly in.

That pregnancy one was totally a random shot as I wanted to show her as a mother! Love you Bhabhi!

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: love2sarun
Such a beautiful update !
Words fail me here to express how beautifully you've written it Behena !👏
Is this inspired by Pratyusha?

Yes, it is inspired by Pratyusha and this whole drabble is dedicated to her. Thanks re!

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: varsha2KD
I am reading this in the bus and tried really hard not to cry... It's so emotional 😭
Poor khushi... Hope she remains strong

OMG, thank you so much for such a sweet comment! Love you!