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Hiii ... 😊
Crazy me here with a concept either it will be two shot or one shot I exactly do not know... But Below I am posting plot read it and let me know whether to continue or not????


Plot
After an heated argument with her buaji Khushi left from home and started walking on random path after a while she stop and see her surrounding and she realize that she is standing in bus stop and she do not have any one near to burst out her anger and this is irritating her after a while she see empty place on bus and randomly she wrote on it
"Thinking back to old memories and wishing you could change the past... 😭"


Unaware of fact that a random thought of her on bus gonna change her life she leave from there to home so she can find peace of mind while making mountain of her favorite Jalebis...


So do you all like it???? Let me know whether I should continue it or not???? And yeah if any one wants to read it in another version then either PM me or scrap me regarding it... But please do not forget to give your feedback whether its positive or negative... And last but not least do not forget to hit like.. And if any one have title suggestion then let me know...

INDEX

Shot One:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133076620

Shot Two
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133998144
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for posting it...
I liked it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi buddies...

How many of you are angry on me for not updating???? Do not be angry buddies you all know my situation right??? BDW right now I am travelling so I thought of utilizing this time in doing some good task so I wrote this update and present to you all... (You know I updated it in bus... I am such a crazy na????) BDW Am I said I missed you all?????

No I did not owww that's really bad of me okay so BUDDIES I MISSED YOU ALL... And Jalpa, Aish, Moni di, Pinky di and Hina I missed you all so so so so much and Rivanah I do not miss you... Because we are meeting daily so and yeah this update is dedicate to you Jalpa, Aish, Moni di, Pinky di, Hina and Rivanah...

Okay enough of this all now see surprise below... (Hehe surprise though I told you that I am presenting update...)

SHOT ONE

Since few days Khushi keep herself lock in her room and she keep herself busy in sketching. After sketching she will write random thought which will come in her mind and then will stick that sketch on her room's wall.

If anyone from family member excluding Payal will try to communicate to her she will either brust out her anger on that person or will just leave from there without replying anything and in case of Payal she'll give only short one. And this behavior of her is now getting on every one's nerve but they try best to avoid being angry on her as they know her childhood best friend Karan whom she proposed have rejected her which have broken her heart so she is behaving like that.

But one morning Buaji loose her control on her anger as she asked Khushi to join them for breakfast but she refused saying she'll have it her later in her room and due to motherly care and concern Buaji bring breakfast dish in her room and

Buaji: Khushi bitiya see I've made your favorite Jalebi eat this beta...

Khushi: (Busy in sketching) hmmm...

Buaji: Titliya eat this now please...

Khushi: What Buaji???? I am no more a kid I'll eat whenever I feel like eating right now I am not hungry and even why you showing of your care for me I know you only like too feed Jiji only...

After hearing this from Khushi first Buaji stunned because never ever none of family member have treated Khushi in different way but soon Khushi's current situation come into her mind and she understood that she is blabbering such rubbish just because she is not in mood so she think of pacifying her mood and she come to Khushi and take her sketch book and pencil from her hand she keep it on bed and then she caresses Khushi's hair and took a piece of Jalebi and speak

Buaji: Aww that make my Shankadevi angry... Sorry bitiya now today I'll make my bitiya eats her Jalebi.

By saying so she tries to feed Khushi but this touch wrong nerve of Khushi and she lash out her anger she jerk Buaji's hand which is in front of her lips and she took dish from Buaji's hand and throw on floor and broken into small small pieces and this act of Khushi correctly touch Buaji's anger so directly slapped Khushi hard on her chick and goes out from there while saying

Buaji: I want this room spotless clean within twenty minutes which means even no rubbish sketches on wall.

After Buaji leave from there Khushi angrily remove each and every sketches from wall and torn them and later she hurriedly in anger tries to clean surface but at last a piece of glass pierce her leg which cause her pain but she choose to keep mum and after cleaning room she went down and come in front of Payal and speak

Khushi: Jiji I am going out... (But in loud tone so other person too can heard)

After completing her sentence she leaves from there before anyone can ask her anything and while living hall she bang living hall as hard as she taking out her anger on door.

Khushi left from home and started walking on random path after a while she stop and see her surrounding and she realize that she is standing in bus stop and she do not have any one near to burst out her anger and this is irritating her after a while she see empty place on bus and randomly she wrote on it

"Thinking back to old memories and wishing you could change the past... 😭"

Unaware of fact that a random thought of her on bus going to change her life she leave from there to another place where she can find peace of mind...

So buddies this one is first shot... Howz it???? Hope you all like it????

Please do leave your feedback whether positive or negative... And last but not least do not forget to hit like...

Argh again I forget ...

I forget to mention that next shot will be dedicated to first commenter and last commenter... Please you all do not forget to hit like and comment...

Edited by Princess_Pri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shock of life Lhushi di not eat Jalebi...
Amazing update...
Just loved thus version too and yu know If any couple have to perform on this then Arshi will be perfect one for first shot..
Update next part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shankadevi of even rejected Jalebi Omg too much of Khushi's shank...
And buaji rocks...
Nice update...
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Hiii...😊 Here is update... Hope this will justify Khushi's behavior little...

And Yeah this shot is dedicated to Krishna (First commenter) and MysticRiver (Last commenter)...

SHOT TWO

Almost haunting every possible place where she can find peace of mind which she did not find any which bubble up more anger in her mind and she come to home and she find no one at home so she asked servant kaka about every one

Kaka: Khushi beta sab log panditji se milne ashram gaye hai and Payal didi apne kamre me so rahi hai kuch kam h???

Khushi just hmmed to kaka and left to her room and settled herself in her favorite julla which is settled in balcony. And she stared at direction of Karan's home and it reminds her Karan rejection which lead to burst volcano of her anger on every breakable things in her room and first she pick up flower vase and throw it on floor and voice of it gain attention of Payal whose room is next to Khushi so she rushed to her room and sight in front of her eye astonished her because her baby sister who never liked violence and such thing today breaking things so she thought of helping her baby sister so first to gain her attention she speaks

Payal: Khushi Stop, that devi maiya's idol is Dadaji's last gift to you...

Seems like it work and Khushi put down that statue back to its place and settled on bed and slowly and carefully from glasses spread Payal make her way to bed and sit beside Khushi and speak

Payal: Khushi what happened??? Why are you behaving like this??? You now everyone in home is worried for you... And you know Khushi we all love you so much. You know Khushi if anything bothering you then you can share that with me just like we share our secrets before you find your best friend Karan.

Though mere mention of Karan's name angered her but soon she realized that for him she had ignored her di and her family from last few days which lead her feel guilty for her behavior in past few days like screaming on papa, avoiding talking to di, blaming mama, silly fight with buaji and make kaka ran for stupid things and after remembering that all she started crying now that again surprised Payal because according to her Karan name will lead to fight between them but here her baby sister is crying and after few seconds she hugged her and speak

Khushi: Di I am so sorry. I hurt you so much from few days and I ignored you because of that stupid Karan and you know Di he is no more my best friend...

But before Payal can reply her, Khushi's phone ring and screen showing caller identity "KARAN"

So howz update buddies????

Leave you comment whether positive or negative... And hit like plz...

And yeah again next part will be dedicated to first and last commenter... And next update in therwill be on 24th May...

Edited by Princess_Pri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PaShi bonding is so good...
And as I mention justification is pending yet according to me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so y is khushi so mean to her F*Ly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am not continuing this version...
😭

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