Kis Kisko Pyaar Karoon? TS : Chapter 3 Pg 9 - Page 2

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Interesting prologue
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Chapter 1

It was a beautiful Sunday morning, Gunjan woke up as the sun rays woke her up,she smiled and covered her naked body with a piece of cloth and she walked towards the window and smiled,Samrat her husband came back of her and hugged her,pecked her shoulder and said


"Baby I love you,and I am deeply in love with you and I don't love anyone besides you ". Gunjan smirked " I am happy you told me everything on the day of our wedding that how many girls you flirted with ,but you didn't tell me how many girls your cousin brother Shravan flirted with".
Samrat was stunned "Baby, what are you saying!!,why u should I know about that guy". Gunjan looked at him angrily " Don't forget,your cousin was my first college crush and he told me everything on our reception yesterday that you had many girls in your life that's why I asked you the question on our suhaagraat." Gunjan started to cry she thinks about the wedding reception
Flashback
Gunjan was sitting on the dinning table waiting eagerly for her newly wedded husband to arrive" ,a young charming good looking man approached her,he was adjusting his tie and taking his hand and combing his hair a bit to look attractive "Hello Mrs Shergil ,now you my sister in law before you were my GF right during our college days ,but since when you started wearing spectacles, my interest on you only went " Shravan told his feelings out in one breath ,Gunjan became irritated,Shravan noticed Gunjan becoming upset "Hey girl,I didn't mean to hurt, don't cry if Samrat sees you crying, then he will bash me up saying that " Ki dekho ,nayi dulhan ko ,hi patane chala he dulhe ka bhai" Gunjan did a "O" shape mouth "How dare you ?mein tumhari bhabhi hoon"
Shravan replies "Chill,yaar itna kyun gussa ,this not any 3rd world war that Jhansi Ki Rani is awakened to kill her enemies ,I was just trying to flirt, waise chasmish bena chasmish ke Ek damm Preity lagthi ho" Gunjan smiles "You mean to say Preity Zinta,Kal Ho Na Ho wali na " .Shravan denies "no,I mean that fat lady in pink saree and that glasses on her cute eyes and that funny teeth ,looking PREITY ugly I mean " .This was it to make Gunjan go angry and she left the dinning table and was in search for her husband,but a hand stopped her "My jaaneman,my sanam you are my soniya ,I want to tell you something I LOVE YOU " suddenly Shravan and Gunjan hear a loud voice and a slap"Pari ke dad,inspite of having me as your wife you are flirting with your own sister in law ,no shame in you ,she slapped him,good your brother is gone to the toilet otherwise if he would have seen your this bad activities ,I don't know what he might do".


Shravan jokingly replies " How did you know, that Samrat is gone to toilet did you also go along with him or what".Tara got pissed off "Actually, I saw him going towards the washroom, but it doesn't have any connection to my question,today you just come home. I make you spill out all those girls names ,whom you flirted with" Shravan was a bit tensed and he just tried to calm his sister in law,so she doesn't take any charge on his brother "
Shravan and Samrat meet,Shravan tells him to be alert "Bhai,tu to bach ke rehena,Teri biwi ,pehli hi night mein clean bowled.Have a swag night beta ,have a swag wali pehli raat" Shravan made him a tension warning.
Flashback Ends
Tara comes dragging Shravan with his collar and Samrat and Gunjan were shocked to see him beaten black and blue .Tara cries "My life is only spoilt being with him,now I can't enjoy parties because I got a child and I need to take care of her,and you also think Gunjan ,now you also are married ,now you also have responsibilities and now all your enjoyment is stopped " .
Gunjan makes Tara to calm down "But why did you do this to Shravan" ,Tara gets more angry "Why did I do this Shravan ? Ask me the question Why I didn't teach more good lesson? ,I would have murdered him "
Gunjan thinks about a solution "How about making these 2 boys repent their mistakes by making them forcefully say sorry to all the girls whom they flirted with and ditched them and the girls will do the right job " Tara smiled evily "And Gunjan,we both will have party ,and Chill and relax and they both will do the household chores"
Gunjan smiled and Samrat and Shravan looked at each other "Sad,what life do we have".Gunjan and Tara looks at each other " Look at these men,still they won't change their attitude ".Gunjan and Shravan pushes Shravan and Samrat out of the house and Samrat and Shravan like a homeless creatures they were wondering what to do,suddenly Shravan remembered his ex girlfriend Dr.Suvarna name and she is working in Sanjeevni Hospital.
Shravan asks Samrat " Bhai,you just punch me and act as if I am badly injured and take me to the hospital " Samrat was stunned and asks Shravan "Shravan,tu pagal toh nahi hogaya.Here I am thinking how to get into St Mark school to meet my ex girlfriend Sarojini aur tujhe hospital ki padhi hai" .


Shravan smirks and replies "Toh meri beti hai na,take her and go as if you are asking for admission for her .But before that punch me ,because my ex girlfriend is a doctor". Samrat thinks it's a good idea and he then does according to what Shravan says and punches him.



Shravan replies in pain " Abbe,itna hard punch dene ko nahi bola" Samrat innocently asks him "you only said to punch you,now my hand is only so strong ,you can't blame me " Shravan calls him a crazy guy and Shravan goes to the Sanjeevni hospital and Samrat takes Pari and goes to the school.
Samrat and Pari was called in the Principal's cabin ,the Principal asked Samrat that where is Pari's mom and Samrat replies in a witty way "My wife is working in your school only mamm,but we both are separated and she is so bad that even after our divorce she didn't care about our daughter, she ditched me for another guy and now I wanted admission for my child as she is growing big and needs to study."
The Principal felt so bad for the father of the child and asked Samrat "What's your wife name ? I will sue her right away for being so bad ." Samrat acts like a poor good soul "No Mamm,she is my wife,I mean was my wife, though she isn't my now but I still love her and i don't want her to face problems because of me and my child .My wife name is Sarojini
The principal immediately called Sarojini into the cabin and she replied " Mamm you called me ,any problem " the principal made actions to her,to make her understand to see who is sitting on the chair in front of her and she was shocked to see him "You here??"
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Shravan was admitted to the hospital, Dr.Suvarna was informed about a patient being admitted and she came to check him and suddenly her eyes became wide,her mouth became O shaped ,she gulped down her breath and in replied in irritated angry tone "You !!!!"

To be continued

Edited by -Dellz- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome TS.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago
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Loved the first part 👏
Thank you for the pm 😃
Eager for the next part 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amzng
loved it
so well written
very entertaining
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wow superb update loved it nice choice of pictures loved them all can't wait for next part thank you for pm.
Edited by ameena671 - 9 years ago

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