***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 10

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome update 👏

thanks buddy 😊

Originally posted by: agm1998

I really liked it

It's a nyc and different concept

I guess d girl is naina

Y didn't navin recognise her

thanks dear
well u will knw soon whose that girl
y Naveen is not recognise her

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

naina ka ek ajnabi rishta Naveen k saath bt kaese?
Kya wo uski behen hai..?
Kya wo loug ek dusrey ko jantey hai..?

I too blv toofani raat mai kuch na kuch hota hai bt kya wo wait krna padta hai...
Naina ki aesi haalat.. Poor she.. Bt Raj ko kuch feel q nahi huwa.. Kya unka ek ajnabi rishta abhi nhi judegaa..

Wow brigadier Chandook ladkiyo ki izat ki baat kr rahey hai lolz..
Gundey Army walo ko chakoo dikha rahey thei rofl.. Bachu wo pass out hai..

Major NAir kabhi nhi sudrega..
Waiting for next..
Bt seriously ek pal k lye lga Navina bolega wo meri behen hai bt usney sach kaha

thanks shahSAIR
wo naina h bhi ya nhi ...
Naveen ka usse kuch rishta h bhi ya nhi yeh toh aane wale update he bta sakte h 😉

lagta h abhimanyu ka kuch jada he asar hua h tumpe tufani raat me kuch nhi hota h ghar me dhul jarur ghas jati h aur subha ache se saaf safi karni padti h mjhe 😆
raj naina ke love me abhi toh time h dear
bc toh sudhar gaya but mc ka kuch pta nhi kab sudhrega ...

Originally posted by: Vtak123

Waoii awsm awsmm fanfic luv d conceptt. Plz plz plz do add me to ur pm list nd update soon . Eagerly waiting for d update totally different concepttt . Luv it

thanks buddy
i will pm u surely

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

amazing update. naveen is soo caring fr dat gal. major nair annoying.

thanks kajal 😊
yuuppp...he is caring guy

Originally posted by: RNgirl

LOVED IT!!!LOVED IT!!!LOVED IT!!!!

Absolutely addicting

Every scene felt so real,

but what was happening with the girl, who I assumed was Naina.

Who were those goons and why were they after her?

Looking forward to more chapters

Love

Misha

thank u thank u thank u Misha
well lets see whose that girl...
u will knw about her n gooms soon...

Originally posted by: gargy4u

Amizng updt dear...pura power pack story line...waiting eagerly fr the next Dhansu part...

thanks gargy 😃
hope tum sach kah rahi ho ki story itni he achi h jitna tum kah rahi ho

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Brilliant start

Pl cont soon
Don't forget to PM me.

Love and prayer
Yogini

thanks yogini
i will pm u dear

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

dont know wt to say..

first of all thanks 4 PM dear

update was just superb n amazing..👏

naveen n ladki k beech ajnabi rishta??

knhi wo naveen ki bichdi hui bahan naina to nahi😉

waiting 4 d next part

pls update soon

thanks dear 😃
don't knw what to say ...don't u like the update ...???
Ajnabi Rishta kis kia ke bech h jaldi je pata chal jayega 😉
bichdi behen Ka toh pta nhi par kuch toh gadbad h daya (CID ) 😉

Superb superb superb n thanx for pm