Arshi fanfiction ||Desolate|| Teaser for Ch-1 [pg-18] - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: pup03

interesting prologue.. but do continue.. best wishes and happy writing Desolate 😃

thanks for pm 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for all the comments <3

Teaser for Chapter-1

"Payal, I can't bear to see Khushi in pain. I will kill that loser Paras!" Shyam said in anger. "Bhai calm down. The worst part is Khushi isn't showing any sign of sadness. She is suppressing her emotions for the sake of mom and dad." Payal said sadly.

"But I'm glad that Khushi told them everything before hand and because of that we got to see their real faces." Shyam said and signed in exasperation. He couldn't stand the fact that these outsiders had the audacity to taunt his baby sister. "Trust me Payal! I won't leave them so easily. I'll ask dad to cancel all of our deals with them." Shyam hit the wall with his fist.

Payal placed her hand on his shoulder and said, "But before that we need to send Khushi somewhere else. Maybe for a small vacation? Let us three go somewhere for a week? In that way we can divert her mind."

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Aye Hayye! Kya Mast Teaser Hai! I loved it. Vacation Kahin Kisi Ke Liye Honeymoon Na Bann Jaye. I mean for Arnav-Khushi of course.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Sounds interesting
Please continue soon
'll be eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Loved the teaser for the first part 👏
Eager for the chapter 😃
Thank you for the pm 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Amazing Teaser ...
Continue Soon ...
Thanks for the PM ... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
intetesting teaser...waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Nice teaser
Update soon !!

Thnxx for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow superb teaser loved it can't wait for the update thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That's a very interesting prologue. Shyam is her brother here! Waiting to know how and why she is barren. Thanks for the pm.

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