ARSHI TS: Forever,Together:Completed/Thnx NOTE pg 139

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

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+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

After continuous tiring lectures in uni, i just got back home and yours amazing start of this TS literally made me feel refresh and happy. It was so light hearted and i loved reading it from start till the end😉

Precap is wow⭐️⭐️⭐️ Update soon😳

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Shine07

@Shine07

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Hi Faiqa😊! How are you?

Firstly let me tell you that I totally loved the concept! You always bring in a fresh breath of air! Starting on such serious note with Arnav remembering about his Di and her miseries and babyloss because of Shyam and then his mind drifting to his mom, to finally end up on to finally meeting Khushi!

That was a funny encounter with Khushi self mumbling all the time even if arnav was hurt! and then the part about arnav being a 'karela wo bhi neem chadha'! LOL😆 Lifted my whole mood even if I'm down with a bad flu!

And I liked the banner it's really nice👍🏼!

Looking forward to the next part as you already have me hooked in! Take care ❤️

Edited by Shine07 - 9 years ago

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Loved the start.
Khushi called Arnav so many names.😆
But why did Dr. Balraj call her daughter while she called him uncle?
Waiting for the next part.

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

loved it.. totally loved it

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

I love it ❤️

I LOVE IT ❤️ ❤️

I LOVE IT❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Beautiful, the concept, new characters, the thrill is brill.Emotional and light hearted.

Sensitive and funny without crossing limits.👏⭐️👍🏼

and you said you can't write funny .This is hilarious.Only Khushi can think of the welfare of a dog in front of injured Lion like ASR.He was angry when she mentioned about his mother not giving him food and all ,but her carefree nature made him quiet and mesmerized by her beauty.

Little Neha is cute and so is Molly.I love dogs .My dog is Shepherd German .Big and giant the way ASR likes😆

Edited by RSanaya71 - 9 years ago