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Posted: 18 years ago
Are you Planning to make me cry??ahh that was so nice of kripa...but sad that "Tia" had been as bad soul in Anu...lol..but it was good as it was ending up on goood side...love it...Keep It Up!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

omg rani!!!! 😭 that was sooo sad i feel terrible for Kripa!! really really bad!!! there is ntuhign i can say or hope that might change anything liek i mean what could possibly happen that make eveyhting perfact what can give Kripa her love? i mean i dont think there is possible way!! btu still i have that little tiny winnii feeling that u'll find some way to mkae them happen... atleast i hope u do!!!
lol there is 1 thing u gotta know lol ur stpry is really gotta be sumthign i mean my bestfrind actully read an entire part of urs lol!! i was soo schocked cus the screenw as open and she was sitting by me and i didnt relise she was reaind and i changed it and shes like wat the hell i was reaidn that and im liek WATT!! lol seriolsly thats sumthing BGI i eman navi HATES stories espcailly fan-fics she thinks they r the gayest things ever lol!!! and i was soo schocled when shes likie i was reaidnt hat i mean ur story is soo good that navi acctulyl read it!!! wow!! lol
hahaha
contiune soon!!!!

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LOL well i guess thats good news for me! haha..i hope your friend reads my fanfic again and the ones im gonna write in the future! even though kyph is over i dont think the a-k jodi will ever be forgotten. atleast in not my fanfics =)

luv rani

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amber0802

Are you Planning to make me cry??ahh that was so nice of kripa...but sad that "Tia" had been as bad soul in Anu...lol..but it was good as it was ending up on goood side...love it...Keep It Up!!! šŸ‘

lol yes. it was a good thing. but lemme just clear something. Anu wasnt seeing Tia's soul. Her imagination made her believe that Tia was alive and she was making her believe that angad was hurting her.

luv rani

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

i wish his true love hes talking of is kripa
grt part

thanks! well the end is not that far away so just have some patience. but you know..sometimes some fanfics need a sad ending to make it more powerful..
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was INTENSE!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!! šŸ‘ i ALMOST cried!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 i LOVED it, continue soon!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter 15

Before I knew two months had passed. Things had gotten better around here. Anushka was a lot better now and the doctors had said that with medication, she would be back to normal in no time. That had made everyone happy around here. Ofcourse Angad and Prince were happy but I had seen some happiness in Sam and Sim as well. I understood why Sam was happy now. He loved Anu too after all. But Sim. I was somewhat proud of her. She had gone from the most uncaring woman on Earth to a really great girl who was more considerate now. I mean sometimes I seriously doubted her relationship with Angad and whether it had gone back to normalcy and then there were times when I saw them hugging and it convinced me of their love.

I took a deep breath and picked up the phone. It was almost 6 months now and I had to confirm when my mother was coming back. For a few days I wanted to never go back into my mother's happy life. But now that I see this happy, united family here, I felt like I didnt belong. I mean, Anu and Prince were happy together. Sim and Angad had seemed to resolve their differences. Ronnie and Josh had started to talk to me all of a sudden and Sam..well, he was Angad's best friend. He didnt need a reason to feel like family. I did.

I picked up the phone and sat down right next to it. I looked at my mother's phone number and then thought about it for a moment. Then not waiting for another moment, I dialed the numbers.

"Hello. Mittal Mansion. How may I help you?" I remained silent for a moment. "Hello?!??!"

"Yes, Can I speak to Ms..I mean Mrs. Sneha..Mittal?"

"Madam is not here today. Is there a message?"

"No..when is she coming back? I came about 6 months ago and you said she was gonna come back around this time and.."

"wait hold on. you are the one that came a while ago..youre madam's friends daughter right?" happy that he recognized me, I smiled. "Yes, thats me. can you tell me when she'll be back?"

"She's going to be back this weekend and there's going to be this huge party for her grandson's homecoming. so that would be the right time Ma'am. If you want, I can connect you to Mrs. Mittal right now and you can speak to her. Do you want me to do that?"

"NO!!" I yelled, almost scared that he was going to do it. I didnt want to just surprise her like that. "I mean..not today. I..I'll just come by on saturday."

"Ok ma'am. but can I please have your name?"

"Kripa Sharma."

"And your mother?" I didnt know if I should say it or not so I just hung up.

"Kripa?" I turned around and saw Anu standing behind me. "You okay?" I realized I was sweating profusely and she had noticed it. "Yea..I'm just a little nervous about meeting my mother."

"Your mother? I understand. Prince told me about..about whatever is happening. I feel for you Kripa. I dont have a mother either. Never knew one. You're lucky. Atleast you found yours." I smiled and hugged her instantly.

"I know I am. And that is why I'm going to spend my last two days here as happily as I can." She let go of me. "What do you mean last days?" She looked into my eyes with that genuine question and it made me less confident about my future. "Anu. I have to go. I've waited for my mother for the past 23 years. I cant wait any longer."

She nodded her head and held my hand. "And what about Angad?" What about him? He would be happy with Sim and that was my plan. So what else now?

"What do you mean?" I continued to smile like it didnt affect me. "I mean..I thought you two were.."

"NO! Who said that? We're just friends. you know..friends.." She didnt buy it but didnt pressurize me either. "Kripa I still think you should stay. i mean youre like family now.."

"No im not, Anu. no.." I just got up and left and I guess Anu felt weird because she didnt come back to talk to me or anything.

I sat on the front porch in the cold as I tried to keep myself calm. Today was my last day at the house and everyone knew it. I pulled my shawl together and tried not to cry but the tears came down and froze on my cheeks at the same time. "Need a smoke?" I turned around and saw Sim standing in front of me. "Umm..no thanks.."

"ok." She nodded and sat down. "Do you mind if I.." She pointed at the cigarette. "no..go ahead.." She smiled and lit her cigarette. I just sat there, thinking about my departure tomorrow.

"So youre leaving huh?" I smirked. "Yea..tomorrow." She couldnt be happier, I thought. She always hated me. And I cant deny that I always disliked her as well.

Silence. Why was she here? Not another trick I hoped. I mean I was leaving tomorrow. What else could she want? "Kripa I..." She started to speak.

"I just wanted to apologize for whatever I have done to you. I didnt want you to leave without sorting everything out." I smiled and nodded my head. "Youre right. And I forgive you." She nodded her head and looked away. I couldnt help but notice the awkward silence and lack of communication between us.

"Umm..Kripa I just wanted to thank you for whatever you have done for Angad and me. I cant.."

"Oh please, Sim. I just want you two to be happy. and I hope you two will remain together forever."

"I wish. I just dont feel the same with him anymore. Its..really different. He doesnt love me. does he?" I just stared at her for a few seconds. "Ofcourse he does. He told me this." I wasnt lying. She just smiled and nodded. "I hope you get the person you love as well Kripa. Good luck in life." She suddenly hugged me and walked away.

Something felt different today. It was my last day and a memorable one. I hadnt gotten so many apologies. First it was Ronnie that gave me a hug and told me that he would miss me. Josh made breakfast for me. Anu told me that she would always be there for me. Prince sang for me. Sim hugged me, which was odd, but nice. Now, the only person I hadnt seen or talked to in the entire day was Angad. I was frustrated about that but I guess it was better for me if I didnt see him more often.

I got up and started to walk back into the house to spend my last night here when I heard the rustling of the leaves. "Kripa.." I stopped. It was his voice. The voice I could recognize anywhere. I stood there for a second and then turned around. "Hi angad..."

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ok guys heres a short part. tomorrow will be the last part of this fanfic. i know, im sad too. well just to let you know i will be starting a new ff. im still workng on the concept of it and i have it pretty much set. its prolly gonna be another short ones like this. they are better than the longer ones, in my opinion. so lets see how fast i can start!

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Posted: 18 years ago
yay i am the first one to comment šŸ˜› ... i cnt w8 4 2morrow... u literally got my heartbeats racing really fast by the end of story... i dont think i am goin 2 sleep 2day, will keep thinkin abt ther cumin up convo...hope its sumthing real gud 😳
and i suddenly started liking sim too though not much ...

ofcourse the part was fabulous šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey oh my god....u r finishing it......gosh it looks like u can write 50 parts.......omg....but it was the best one among all of ur fanfics till date......................i hoep the next one will be as good as this at least...................it looks like it'll be better as every fanfic which yu wrote was very good and the latest one...this one, was awesome....as i read it from the beginning to end.......i hope the next part wud be very long........i just don't want to stop reading it..............i just love it............................thx for the fanfics
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh gosh... tht was kewl.. cant wait for the next part.. n i hope to c a happy ending...

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