Shanav-COLLAB SS YEH DOSTI HUM NAHI TODENGE (PART17 pg72) - Page 58

Originally posted by: ice-cold

Well written.👏⭐️

I miss BDSAH soo much

Oh accha,phir toh I'm waiting😃

Part 26. Gaffur Bhai visits sunshine colony

@ next day...

Gaffur Bhai enters colony disguised as sabji bechne wala...

Gaffur Bhai- lelo...lelo..hari bhari sabji lelo...dhaniya ..tamatar .aloo..Gobi...phoolgobi..

Hemant and Sharad and other colonywomen gather in garden...

Lajo- areee Bhai aapko toh Yaha pehli baar dekha hai...

Gaffur Bhai- Haan. Bhabhiji..Woh kal hi gaav se aaya hoon..sabji bechne Yaha...

Bhavna aunty- koi Nahi ..sabji..taaza lagti hai...Acha yeh tamatar ..kitne ke diye...

Gaffur Bhai- ji...20 rs..ke 500gm...

Bhavna Aunty- areee wwaah saste hai...dedo .Bhai...1kg

Hemant- uncle ..Aapke pass phoolgobi hai??

Gaffur Bhai- Haan Hain na..bolo kitne ki doon?20 RS ke 40 RS ke?

Hemant- hmmm mujeh 1 phoolgobi do uncle..

Gaffur Bhai hands him one cauliflower...

Hemant- nai nai uncle yeh nahi...

Gaffur Bhai- acha acha aapko 40 RS ke chahiye barabar?

Hemant-nai ..uncle...mujeh yeh 20rs ke 5rs mein dijiye...

Gaffur Bhai- Kya??? Beta itne saste mein nahi de sakta mein phoolgabi...itni tagdi bargain toh mein ne bhi nahi ki...

Hemant- uncle mein kaha bark kar raha Hoon ..

Gaffur bhai- nai nai bark nahi bargain...bargain hota hai..

Hemant- nai nai uncle bargain matalb toh bar again matalb ki 12 ko phir se bulaao...

Gaffur Bhai-kya??? Nai beta aap galat bol rahe ho bark matalb matalb Jo kutta bhow bhow karta hai woh aur bargain matalb ki Jo hum nahi karte ki bhaiya 10 mein nahi 5 mein de do woh.

Hemant- nai uncle..aap galat bol rahe hai..mein sahi Hoon...aap galat ho

Bhairavi-- haan bhaisahab aap galat bol rahe hai Mera Bhai hemant galat nahi hota ..lagta hai aapko baa .ki bimaari lag gayi..hai..aap naldi jaake apna dimaag ka check up karvaaye

Gaffur Bhai- nai mein sahi Hoon aap galat ho dono aap confuse ho rahe ho...

Hemant -haeww aapne bhairavi Didi ko galat bola

Hemant starts doing hafu hafu ..

Gaffur Bhai - (scared) acha..acha thik hai aap sahi mein galat...

Bhairavi -thik thik hai. Bhaisahab Mera Bhai barkining kar raha hai... aap woh waali phoolgobi 10 mein dijiye..

Gaffur Bhai- Kya??? 40 ka 10 mein ..nai nai mein nahi doonga mujeh nuksaan hoga...

Hemant- nai uncle aapka nuksaan nahi hoga...

Bhavna aunty- oh Bhai tu kaha yeh Bhai behen ki Jodi ki saath dimaag kharab Kar ne baith Gaya..

Gaffur Bhai- are mataji mein toh sirf puch raha Hoon in dono ki baat samjh nahi aayi..

Bhavna aunty- ae haal haal lajo abhi yeh timepaas karenge Tino..(to gaffur Bhai) ooo Bhai meinnwoh saamne waale Ghar mein rehti Hoon jab aap Tino ki baat chit hojaaye toh waha Ghar see paise le Lena...

Bhavna aunty and lajo leaves...

Gaffur Bhai- bhahbhiji mujeh yeh samjh nahi aaya ki mein yeh 20rs ki phoolgobi 5 mein kaise Doon.

Bhairavi- aap samajhe bhaisahab yeh 20 waali Gobi hai usse aap 5 rs mein yeh ek 1 phoolgobi dijiye..na

Hemant- aur yeh waali 1 phoolgobi ke 10 RS mein dijiye..

Gaffur bhai- ek min..tumhare kehna matalb yeh hai ki yeh ek phoolgobi ke bhaag ka 5 rs.. mein Doon?

Bhairavi- haan aahi samjhe bhaiya...ab samjhe ki yeh phoolgobi ke ek bhaag ko 5rs mein bechenge toh agar aapko Puri phoolgobi 20rs mein bechni hogi na...

Gaffur- are par phoolgobi leni hai toh Puri lijiye yeh aadhi phoolgobi see Kya hoga...yeh itne chotte phoolgobi se sabji kaha banegi...

Bhairavi- nai nai..sabji nahi bouquet banana hai bhaisahab issliye toh aise chotte phoolgobi maang rahe woh bouquet mein set karna hai na...

Gaffur Bhai laughs ..

Gaffur bhai- (laughing) areee bhahbhiji..woh phool hota hai..phool..aurnaahi phoolgobi.bouquet mein phool matalb flower aata hai phoolgabi nahi lagta...

Bhairavi--bhaisahab hame patah hai ki phoolgobi Kya hai aur flower Kya hai...

Gaffur bhai stops laughing and looks them with surprise...

Hemant-haan uncle hame patah hai ..hame bouquet banana ke liye chahiye...

Gaffur Bhai- .. phoolgobi ka bouquet???thoda ajeeb nahi hoga

Bhairavi- bhaisahab kaha ajeeb hogaa aakhir phoolgobi bhi phool hai..na

Gaffur Bhai- phoolgobi phool nahi ek prakaar ki sabji..hai..

Hemant- nai nai uncle woh phool hai..aur ab jaldi dijiye na mujeh bahut kaam hai

Gaffur Bhai-(in mind) hey bhagwaan yeh subha subha kaha fasaa Diya...Kya jodi hai..ab patah Chala woh mataji ne Kyu aisa bola tha...

Hemant- uncle dijiye ..na phoolgobi mujeh uss par phir colour bhi karna hai..

Gaffur Bhai -(drops cauliflower from hand) Kya ... phoolgobi ko colour bhi karna hai???

Hemant- haan woh khaane Wala color aata hai na woh...

Sharad comes out and sees hemant with gaffur Bhai...he calls out hemant...

Hemant- heeein chacha ..chacha jaldi aaye dekhiye kitni achi achi phoolgobi hai..

Sharad comes and sees cauliflower...

Sharad - areee waah yeh ppp sabji hai megha ko bahut pasand aayegi..bhaiya ji aap ye phoolgobi dedijye ...

Gaffur Bhai- (pointing towards hemant) aap inke chacha hai??

Sharad- haan..

Gaffur Bhai- acha hua aap aagye mein yeh hemant beta ko kitni der SE samjha raha Hoon ki phoolgobi ka 5 rs mein nahi milti aur phoolgobi ka nahi phool ka bouquet banta...

Sharad- sabji bechne waale bhaiyaji mein need hi hemant SE kaha hai ki woh phoolgobi le aaye yeh Mera idea hai ..toh aap de dijiye...na phoolgobi...

Gaffur Bhai-(surprised) aapka??? Par Kyu??

Sharad-(starts lehraana) yayyayayya yayayayaya..

Gaffur Bhai is confused as Sharad starts doing his lehraana...

Gaffur Bhai- aap...aap thik hai na...ooo. Bhayaji...aap thik hai na..aap yeh yayaya Kyu Kar rahe hai..

Sharad-yayaya?? Yayayayaya...!!! Yayya!! Yayayyaa

Hemant starts giving company to Sharad...

Gaffur Bhai- are baapre ab inhe Kya hua..yeh dono Kyu lehra rahe hai bhahbhiji??? Kahi inhe daura pada hai.,Aap inke Ghar waalo ko bulaaye

Bhairavi-nai nai bhaiyaji..yeh Sharad Sharma raha hai.aur hemant company de raha hai...

Gaffur Bhai- yeh aisa Kyu sharama rahe ?

Bhairavi-yeh toh Sharad ka style hai..aur woh Sharma issliye raha hai kyuki aapne isse puccha na ki usse phoolgobi Kyu chahiye ..issliye..

Gaffur Bhai- haan toh iss mein sharmaana kaha see aaya ??

Bhairavi--bhaisahab aapko kitne questions puchne hai??? Kitna confusion hai aapko lagta hai baa ki bimaari fail Rahi hai ab iss seher mein...

Sharad gets normal...

Sharad-(blushing) mein samjhata Hoon..bhaiyaji... Woh Kya hai na mein phoolgobi ka bouquet banake megha ko propose karunga ..

Gaffur Bhai- ooo Deva...lekin propose to flower deke karte hai aapko nahi patah??

Sharad- patah hai lekin mein thoda kuch unique karna chahta Hoon na...ab aap jaldi dijiye..mein aapko iske pure paise doonga...

Gaffur Bhai still tries to make understand Sharad and hemant ...but he gets unsuccessful ...in making them understand...

Bhavna aunty comes...

Bhavna aunty- tu abhi Tak yaha hai??

Gaffur bhai-haan mataji dekhiye na mein kabse bol raha Hoon ki 5rs mein ek phoolgobi nahi de sakta ...phir bhi maan rahe hai aur toh aur ...

Bhavna aunty cuts in...

Bhavna aunty - areee waah chakudi Kya bargaining ki hai tune ek phoolgobi sirf 5rupee mein??

Gaffur Bhai- mataji Puri baat yeh sunniye Puri phoolgobi nahi sirf ek chotta sa phoolgobi ka tukda kharidne ki baat Kar rahe hai..aur jab mein need pucha tih keh rahe hai ki phoolgobi ka bouquet banna na hai issliye ek tukda maanga hai.. please aap samjhaye ..inn sabko...mein kabse samjhaane ki koshish Kar raha hoon

Bhavna aunty laughs...

Gaffur Bhai- areee aap has Rahi hai?? Mein Sach keh raha Hoon..yaha mein thak Gaya Hoon samjhate samjhate

Bhavna aunty stops laughing

Bhavna aunty- Kya??? Ek tukda ?? Bhairau,ghotala putra aur logical ghotala Kya hai yeh sab

Sharad- Bhavna aunty woh mein megha ko propose Kar raha thoda alag style se mein na insaani ..style..

Bhavna aunty coughs ...Sharad changes his words..

Sharad-Mera..matalb hai ki thoda unique propose Kar raha Hoon..toh uss mein bura Kya hai ..

Bhavna aunty- haan woh toh bahut unique style hai par ab chalta hai ..(to gaffur Bhai) ooo bhaiyaji ab dedo na ..acha ek kaam karo dono phoolgobi de do aur pire paise lelo..in logo ko kitni phoolgobi chahiye hogi le lenge.. aur jitni bachegi phoolgobi usko sabji banna lenge...

Bhairavi - agar aisa hai toh bhaiyaji ek aur Puri phoolgobi de dijiye...

Bhavna aunty- Kyu bhairavi ?? Humne toh li hai phoolgobi phir Kyu le Rahi hai extra??

Bhairavi-areee baa hum phoolgobi ke ek tude kaha sabji banayenge..issliye...toh nayi phoolgobi let rahi Hoon
Aur Jo phoolgobi ki aap baat Kar rahe hai usse toh mein ne murli Kaka ke sar pe maara ..jor SE maara toh woh thoda behosh hogaye hai..aur phoolgobi jaake sofa ke niche chali gayi hai..

Gaffur Bhai- Kya??? Aap ne phoolgobi Kyu maara...

Bhavna aunty-haan chakudi aisa Kyu Kiya??

Bhairavi- baa woh ohja uncle ne hi kaha that ki maar Gujarati bahuraani maar maareh sar pe yeh phoolgobi hi maar jor SE...toh issliye ..mein ne maar Diya

Bhavna aunty- haaye haaye unhone kaha aur tune maar bhi Diya...

Bhairavi - Haas toh Wadi..baa aapne hi kaha hai ki bade Jo baat kahe woh karna chahiye...

Gaffur Bhai- areee baapre..aapne sahi mein mataji ki baat maanli ..areee woh uncle ko hospital lejaaye...

Bhavna aunty- daffor !!! Chakudi mein ne aisa nahi kaha tha...chod...kaha apna dimaag lagaa rahi Hoon..ooo Bhai ab jaraa de de na...aur ghotala family yeh phir ohja house aao...Haal haal chakudi...tu bhi Kya karti hai..aose koi phoolgobi maarta hai . .

Bhavna aunty leaves with bhairavi ...

Gaffur Bhai- ( in mind) thode khiskela lageta hai ya log lekin ache hai..(to Sharad) nai nai aap ke liye free mein de raha Hoon ..pyaar ka mamla hai toh paise nahi loonga mein...

Sharad- nai nai mein pure paise doonga...

Gaffur Bhai- are nai mein aapse ask paise nahi loonga...pyaar ka mamla hai..agar aap paise denge toh mein bura maan jaaunga...

Sharad- thik hai lekin agli baar aapko paise lene honge...

Sharad and hemant leaves...

@ park

Manav- Shruti kitni baar Yaad dilaaogi...yr...

Shruti- hazaar baar..Yaad dilaaungi... Ki Tumhe Woh kuku ki itni si bhi help Nahi Karni hai.

Manav- Acha Baba thik hai...

Shruti-nai thik Nahi hai.. tum promise karo ki tum kuku ki help nahi karoge...aur yeh baat tumhe 100 baar iss note book mein loku ke Deni hai ki tum kuku nahi karoge

Manav- yeh Kya baat Hui..100 baar likhne ko Kyu de Rahi ho mein chintu ..ya pintoo jitna chotta nahi Hoon Shruti yeh Kya bachpanaa hai...

Shruti - tum like ke de rahe ho ya mein jaau

Manav- okay teacher mein like ke de doonga and mein Sachi mein unki saamne see help nahi Karne jaata

Shruti- thik hai thik hai lekin Tumheh..mujeh dairy milk khilaani hogi..mujeh abhi

Manav- kyu ????

Shruti- kyuki pehli baat tum late aaye ho.dusra ki tum mujeh itne Dino baad mil rahe ho..aur tisra Mera mood off.. hai kuku ki wajah se

Manav- areee ...yeh kya baat hui..chalo maana ki tumhara mood off hai lekin mein late aaya toh Mera reason tha ...toh ..

Shruti- toh ..Woh mein kuch Nahi jaanti mujeh Tumhe..( shruti bumps with bench) ouch ouch...

Manav- Shruti..you okay..dekha bolne mein tumhara itna. Dhyan hota hai ki dekhti bhi nahi ki kaha jaa rahi ho..Dekhao kaha lagaa hai ..

Shruti stands up

Shruti- kuch nahi hua..ab itni bhi zyada chot Nahi lagi hai..waise bhi mujeh lagta hai aajkal mere rahu ,Ketu, mangal aur jitne bhi Grah hai ek dusre ke Saath war kar rahe hai...

Mashru sits on near by bench ..

Manav laughs ...

Manav- Haan Woh toh hai .. kyuki tumhare grah aur nakshatra tumhari Tarah hi pagal hai..aur Dekh Kar apne orbit mein nahi rotate karte na issliye...Woh ek dusre ke Saath war hai ... issliye tumhare saath aisa hota hai

Shruti hits manav on shoulder...

Shruti- ha ha ha.very funny..manav but seriously aajkal mere saath bahut hi ajeeb ajeeb chizz Hoti hai..abhi pichle hafte mein market gayi thi do insaan patah nahi kaha dekh ke chal rahe the aur mere saath takraaye aur Ulta un mein se ek toh mujeh se badi batmeezi baat ki...aur mein unki achi Khabar look usse pehle Woh dono yaha se chale Gaye...

Manav- (teasingly) Shruti tumhare dar ki wajah se bichare bhaag Gaye...lagta hai

Shruti- tumhe bade mazze as rahe hai manav...jaao mein nahi baat karti tumse ..jaa rahi hoon mein bye...

Shruti gets up and starts walking ...

Manav - Acha sorry..areee sorry yr...Shruti ...Shruti sorry yr..Dekho abhi mujeh wapas jaana hai...mazzak Kar raha that..sunno toh sorry...

Shruti-kya kaha ?? Kuch sunnai Nahi diya... Mein jaa rahi hoon ya toh mujeh treat do warna Tata Tata bye bye... See you ...

Manav stops Shruti...

He stands in front of her..blocking her way..

Shruti-(acting like sad) kya hai?? Jaane do mujeh ..Tum toh hamesha Mera saath mazak karte ho ...hato...

Manav again stops..Shruti..

Manav-(in mind) lagaata hai sach mein Bura maan gayi ..kya yr manav tum bhi hamesha usse pareshan karte ho..kya zaroorat thi itna pareshan karne MaManav

Manav - (holding ears) sorry..sorry mein toh bas aise Tumhe pareshan kar Raha tha...I m sorry...

Shruti- rehne do sorry kehki zaroorat Nahi hai mein bhi Tumhe Pareshan kar rahi thi ...tum sorry mat bolo ..Acha chalo ab yeh sorry sorry game baad mein continue karenge pehle treat ...

Manav -(smiles) chalo..(forwards his hands) Shruti holds his hands ..

They purchase some ice cream and chocolate...

Manav handsover the dariymilk to her...

Shruti takes a bite...

Shruti- yeh lo(offers dairy milk)

Manav - kyu?? Tumhe Nahi khaana dairy milk? Yeh tumhaari fav hai..

Shruti- fav..hue toh kya hua..mein itni bhi pagal Nahi hoon ki tumhare saamne baith ke Pura Akela kaahunga...(offers her dairy milk) lo...chalo ab jaldi se bite warna chocolate phighal jaayegi...

Manav takes the bites..He remembers something and smiles sadly...

Shruti- (waving hand in front of manav ) kya hua..kaha dhyaan..hai ..mein kabse kuch puch rahi hoon..

Manav- huh...kya hua ?

Shruti-kuch Nahi mein yeh puch rahi thi ki tum kuch important issue din kehne waale the na..bolo kya bol rahe...the..

Manav - oh Haan.. Woh mein uss din yahi keh Raha tha ki mein ek baat hai Jo tumhe kehni thi Woh...Woh mein teacher Nahi hoon..

Shruti- (stops eating) tum ... Teacher Nahi toh tum kya kaam karte ho... Tum koi...

Manav- nai ..nai Mera Matalb hai ki .mein teacher hoon lekin temporary...

Shruti - manav agar tum temporary teacher ki job karte ho toh phir tumhari permanent job kya hai??

Manav- Shruti actually...mein..

Before manav could speak ..

Good afternoon. ..sir...

Mashru turns towards the voice..

Manav- . Aman ..good afternoon. everything alright?

Shruti is confused on sudden behaviour change of manav...

Aman- Yes, sir.. actually..Aapke liye Army headquaters se message hai mein Aapke Ghar hi jaa Raha tha par aapko Yaha dekha issliye yahi aagaya . Sir ,it's okay mein baad mein aata hoon

Manav gets tensed when he sees Shruti reaction ..he composes himself

Manav - no.. no.. it's alright ...(towards shruti) Shruti mein aata hoon..

Shruti nods

Manav and Aman leave

Precape- Manav's truth is out ..what will be Shruti reaction..jaane ke liye agla bhaag nahi niche ka part dekhe!!! 😉

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Part 27- ' A pending confession '

Shruti-(in mind) .manav army? Agar Manav army mein hai toh bataya kyu Nahi mujeh ?kya Manav yehi baat batana chahta tha?? Lekin kya uss ke baat par mein .

Yakin kar loon..no no Shruti Tu yeh kya soch rahi hai..manav aisa ladka Nahi hai I m sure jaroor uske paas koi wajah hogi...no no I can't doubt manav...Woh Acha ladka hai..in fact baat toh mein ne chupaai hai.. agar manav ko bhaiya ki sachai patah Chal gayi toh..will he accept it?

Mein manav ko jhut Nahi bol sakti..kya karu mein ???bhaiya Ka saath Nahi chod sakti unhe meri jaroorat hai... aur manav ko bhi chot Nahi pauncha sakti ...jhuth ki buniyaad pe ristha nahi rakh sakti mein...

Shruti is in dilemma on what to do next ...Shruti gets call from Samar ...

Shruti-(in tears) bhaiya...

Shruti remembers Samar words...

Shruti- (in mind) Shruti yaad rakh tere saath hai..ab Jo bhi faisla Lena hai woh tujeh Lena...tu manav se pyaar karti hai ..aur Jo bhi failsa legi won tujeh aur manav ko affect karegi...

Soon after some time manav and Aman comes back..Shruti is waiting for them..

. Manav- thank you Aman for the message..also I m sorry I forgot to introduce you both...Aman this Shruti..and Shruti this is Lt Aman mere unit mein hai..

Shruti- hello.. I m Shruti..mein little angels orphanage mein work karti hoon..

Aman- Hello mam.

Shruti- please you can call me Shruti...

Manav - yes Aman..it's okay abhi formal Nahi hone ki jaroorat hai

Aman--(laughs) okay sir .. I hope I haven't disturb you..

Shruti- no no it's okay ..you can join us ..

Aman- no ... It's okay mam..mein bas jaa Raha tha..

Shruti- no ..it's fine .bas mein bas jaa rahi thi mujeh orphanage mein kuch kaam hai..(smiles towards Aman) bye..have a nice day..

Manav is worried about Shruti ...and her reaction..

Manav- shruti..mein Tumhe drop kar deta hoon...

Shruti- no it's okay...Tumhe important work hoga .tum jaao...

Manav- nai it's okay mein tumhe drop Kar deta Hoon...

Aman - I must take your leave ...mujeh Rajveer sir, ko report karna hai...sir...

Aman salutes manav and takes his leave
Aman leaves...

Shruti leaves immediately ..

Manav -(tensed) Shruti.. Shruti ... Ruko please..Shruti...please meri ek baat baat sunlo

Shruti stops in her tracks..

Manav- shruti.. please ..ek baar meri baat sunlo please..

Shruti- bolo...

Manav- Shruti mein army mein hoon .yeh baat warden ko patah hai..aur ab tak mujeh yahi lagta tha ki yeh baat patah hogi ki mein army hoon..

lekin jab mujeh patah Chala ki tum yeh baat Nahi jaanti toh mujeh lagaa ki mein Tumhe batadoon..

Shruti-toh phir mujeh kuch batata kyu Nahi..

Manav- (in mind) I m so sorry Shruti mein tumhe ghotala family ke baare mein nahi Bata sakta..mein tumse yeh baat nahi chupaana chahta .mein...tumhe Sach batana chahtha Hoon par lekin khatra bahut hai ..aur ab ghotala family ke liye bhi bahut khatra bad Gaya hai ..huh...Kya karu mein...

(to Shruti) mein yeh baat kitne Dino se batana chahta..mein jab mission se wapas aaya tha ussi waqt mein batana chahta par mauka Nahi aur Aaj bhi.. Shruti mein hamare bich koi misunderstanding Nahi rehne dena chahta

Shruti- kyu? Manav kyu??

manav-(closes his eyes) kyuki tum mere liye dost se bhi zyada badhkar ho..shruti... I love you Shruti...

Shruti is surprised to hear that..she wondered if what she heard was correct or not..she immediately turns around and faces manav..

Shruti-(in tears) manav..Tumne abhi kya Kaha..?

Manav- mein yahi Kaha ki tum mere liye dost se bhi zyada badhkar ho ..Shruti trust me .mujeh... patah nahi Chala ki kab mujeh tumhare saath pyaar hogaya..

yes Shruti I love you..I really love you.. I don't know tum mere baare mein kya feel karti ho...

Shruti immediately hugs manav..

Shruti- I love you too manav... I love you...I love you..too manav..kitni Der kardi Tumne yeh baat batana mein..mein baat Tumhe kabse Kenna chahti this..

Manav first he is surprised .with sudden confession.but later on realized what Shruti said.. he hugs her back...

Manav- I ..love you ..Shruti..I love you..too..

Shruti breaks the hug...

Manav- kya tum mujeh se naraaz ho?

Shruti- (wiping her tears) Nahi bilkul bhi Nahi kyuki tum apni Jagah pe Sahi ho manav ..tumhari Galti Nahi thi...aur tum yeh har baat mujeh sorry mat bolo...jab tumhari Galti Nahi Hoti tabhi tum sorry bolte ho...manav tum itna guilty Kyu hojaate hote ho

Manav - shruti ..mujeh lagaa ki tum naraaz aur gussa ho ki mein naaraz yeh sachaai tumse chupaai hai..issliye..

Shruti- Nahi manav , tum galat Nahi ho aur ek baat kahu tum yeh baar baar sorry mat bola karo galti mujeh se bhi hosakti hai aur Tum se bhi ..aur mein Nahi chahti ki hamare rishte mein koi ek hamesha jhukta rahe.. aur phir ghutuan mehsoos hone lage... okay promise (forward her hands)

Manav -(smiles) promise.

Manav is happy .he is happy with shruti's thought ..

Manav-shruti.. you know Aaj mein bahut Khush ...

He again hugs Shruti...Shruti hugs him back..

Shruti-mein bhi mein bata Nahi sakti ki mein kitni Khush hoon...

Shruti again hugs manav...manav hugs her back..

Manav breaks the hug...he looks at the watch..

Manav- shruti.. I m sorry ..mujeh abhi..jaana hoga..Woh kuch important mission se jaana hoga mujeh

Shruti grasps manav's hands...

Shruti- manav ek aur baat I know for you your duty is much more important ..aur mein Tumhe Kabhi bhi tumhari duty se alag Nahi karungi aur bich mein bhi nahi aaungi I promise...( smiles) .and mere baare Kabhi bhi chinta mat karna..okay?

Manav - (gives gulitywala look) Shruti..tum..

Shruti cuts in..

Shruti- phirse??? Kitni baar kahu ki guilty mat feel karo aur Meri chinta mat karo

Manav is about to speak but Shruti doesn't let him speak..

Shruti- aur meri baat khatam Nahi hui captain Sahab..!!(keeps hands on manav shoulders)
Ab aap meri Chinta chodiye Captain Manav Ohja..aur jaayi apni duty kijiye warna Aapke seniors ka toh patah nahi lekin mein aapki drill karavaaungi hi jaaye ab

Manav laughs ..he hugs her

Manav-(in tears) shruti tum bahut achi ho.. I ...I admire that..tum Nahi jaanti mein ne pyaar pe vishwas karna chod diya tha.

Lekin jabse tumse Mila hoon tabse pyaar pe vishwas karne lagaa hoon ...thank you ..thank you for coming in my life..thank you ki use din tum takraai thi mere saath ... Aur jhagda kiya tha..

He breaks the hug...

Shruti-(wipes her tears and smiles) ab itni taarif mat karo ...meri ..aur ab jaaye captain manav ..warna der hojaayegi

Manav- (laughs)(wipes his tears) okay...bye..

Manav is about to leave but again Shruti stops him..

Shruti- manav ek min... .. ..sorry sorry bas ek sec..

Manav - Shruti..kuch kaam hai toh bolo hestite mat karo mein manaa Nahi karunga...

Shruti immediately kisses manav on his cheeks..

Manav is shocked for a moment but immediately composes himself..

Manav - woh. ..mein mein..jaata Hoon bye...late ho raha hai..take care...

shruti- (blushing) all the .. best .. aur apna dhyan rakhna ..okay bye...

Shruti immediately leaves...

Manav leaves too

@ colony garden...

Shruti is happy and she is excited...

Megha is playing with pritesh and mitesh ...

Megha - pritesh mitesh yeh Shruti ko kya hh hua..woh aise Kyu Sharma Rahi hai?

Pritesh-(thinking) hmm megha Chachi aapki age mein sab log alien air insaan aise tab khush hote ya toh unhe achi job mili ho ya phir jab shehnaai bejne waali ho...aur mujeh jaha Tak lagta hai iss society mein jaldi hi do do Ghar mein shehnai bajegi...

Megha- areee par khush hope else air shehnaai bajne ka aur woh bhi do do Ghar mein uska Kya link..

Mitesh- link hai megha Chachi ... Aap jaaye Shruti Didi se baat kojiye Hume home work karna hai
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Megha meets Shruti...

Shruti- (hugs megha)megha!!! Megha ...!!!ooo megha aaj mein bahut khush Hoon..

Megha- Shruti...Kya hua...Bata toh sahi Teri Khushi ka karan.

Shruti-(blushes) yaha nahi...megha...lekin Kya batau mein bahut khush ki Kya boloon samjh hi nahi AA raha hai..

Megha- mere Ghar Chala hum waha baat karte hai...

@ ghotala house...

Varsha is serving snacks to shishir,hemant and grishma

Shruti - hiii varsha. Bhabhi...

Varsha - are Shruti acha hua abhi aayi mein bas baccjo ko naasta de rahi thi tum bhi aajao...

Shruti- abhi nahi varsha bhabhi baad mein pakka ..aabhi mujeh bahut hi important baat akrni hai megha se

Megha--haan bhabhi...Shruti kabse utaavali ho Rahi hai ...hum baad mein naasta kar lenge...

Megha and Shruti leaves...

After few min ...varsha hears Megha's scream...

Varsha - yeh megha chilaayi Kyu...??

Grishma- mummy Chachi ko kuch hua hai lagta hai?

Hemant- mummy kahi Chachi apne do sar waale Roop mein to nahi aagaye na???

Varsha-(scared) hemant!!! Shubh subh bol beta...

Hemant- eeeh subh subh...subh subh..

Varsha-hemant!!! Yeah Kya kar raha hai?time abhi pareshan mat kar..agar Shruti ne megha ka do sar Wala Roop dekh liya toh bahut hi gadbad hojaayegi

Shishir - mummy mein Papa aur chacha ko bulaakr laata Hoon. .

Hemant-- hawww mummy agar Shruti Didi be Chachi ka do sar Wala Roop dekh liya hai..to woh..niche alien alien chillate Kyu nahi aaye...

Varsha - hemant- to kuch bhi mat bol daraa mat...

Shishir cuts in...

Shishir- mummy aap upar jaaye mein Papa aur chacha ko bulaakr laata Hoon...

Varsha-hooon...



Precape- why did megha scream?? Is ghotalas truth out???stay tuned to know more

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Part 28 - "Hum khatarnaak nahi hai "

@ ghotala house ...

Varsha runs up to Megha's room

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Varsha - (in mind) hey Patharwale bhagwan bacha Lena (varsha enters and she is constantly praying to God..her eyes are closed)..Shruti...Shruti...dekho please hamari baat.sunlo pehle .please..hum khatarnaak ...Nahi hai..hum na sirf Yaha shanti se

Shruti-konsi baat varsha bhabhi..aur aap aisa kyu bol rahi hai ki aap khatarnaak Nahi hai

Varsha opens her eyes and sees megha and Shruti staring at her

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Varsha- megha... Tu thik hai? Heeein...(checks megha) tu thik hai

Megha- bhabhi mein thik Hoon Kya hua aap ghabaraye hue Kyu hai?

Varsha-(whisper) kuch nahi megha mujeh laga tu apne do sar waale Roop mein toh nahi aa gayi na..issliye mein yaha aa gayai..

Shruti- Kya hua varsha bhabhi aap it I tensed Kyu hai aur yeh aap khatarnaak Kya bol rahi thi?aur konsi baat varsha bhabhi

Varsha- wooohhj kuch nahi Shruti ..woh toh bas unhi kaha ..mein ne..woh ..woh mujeh lagaa ki upar crocoroch hai...hogaye hai yaha bahut saare..

Shruti-Kya crocoroch ??? (Gets scarred and jumps on bed)

Megha - are Shruti daro mat crocroch ko bhagaa Diya hai humne...

Varsha-haan...lekin jab upar see chillane ke awaaz aayi you mujeh lagaa ki woh crocoroch phir SE aagaya..

Megha - haan issliulye toh bhabhi ne kaha ki hum log khatarnaak nahi hai bhale hi hamare Ghar mein crocoroch.ho

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Shruti starts laughing...

Varsha-(whisper) isse Kya hua megha..??

Megha- (whisper) patah nahi bhabhi...Shruti...tum has Kyu rahi ho?

Shruti-kuch kuch nahi aap log bahut sweet hai

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Varsha- megha par tu chilaayi Kyu ?

Megha- are baat hi aisi hai...bhabhi ki aap bhi sunno ge toh aap bhi khsuhi ke maare chilaaoge..Shruti Bata na bhabhi ko

Shruti -(blushes) woh Kya hai na bhabhi..ki aaj...

Here Sharad tells vasant and Jacky about his plan for propsing megha...for marriage

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Shishir meets them on way and asks them to come home immediately..all are tensed

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@ ghotala house main hall

Vasant- hemant mummy kaha hai?

Hemant- Papa mummy upar dekhne Gaye hai ki Chachi apne do sar waale alien Roop mein aayi hai ya nahi..

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Vasant- aaj toh pakka lagta hai hamara bhanda phut jaayega

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Sharad- bhaiya..relax relax chill chill..kuch nahi hoga

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Just then they here varsha ,megha loud voice..

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Vasant-sharad..aaj toh pakka patah chal Gaya..agar hamari wajah see manav aur Shruti ka rista toot Gaya toh bahit bura hoga...

Sharad--bhaiya kaise rista tootega.?

Vasant-- ooo hemantchacha dimaag lagaa thoda agar Shruti ko Sach patah lagaa toh sab batana hoga na

Sharad-haan bhaiya...ab toh patherwale bhagwaan hi hame bachayenge

All are scared and they immediately go upstairs in megha's room .

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Vasant sharad jacky shishir relived to see that no one has come in their original roop

Sharad- bhaiya yaha toh bhabhi aur minto khush lag rahe hai..logically aur koi daraa hua nahi hai..

Hemant-(whispers) papa mein daraa ke aau?

Hemant is about to scare them but sharda and vsant stops him

Vasant- (whispers) ruk ruk kya kar rah hai hame daraana nahi hai hemant...

Sharad- bhaiya par yeh log khush kis baat ke liye hai..?

Vasant patah nahi Sharad ..!! par Teri bhabhi aur megha mujeh kabhi na kabhi insaani heart attack dene waale hai ...

Sharad-haan bhaiya ..sahi kaha mujeh bhi insaani heart attack aane Wala tha

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Shruti ..varsha and megha sees them. On door step..

Varsha- vasant...acha hua aap aa gaye .. mein abhi aapkko hi call karne waale thi...

Vasant- haan..par tum dono chilaaye kyun hame lagaa ki kuch hogaya hai tumhe ...

Varsha- oh sorry sorry vasant par baat hi kuch aisi hai aapko..

Sharad- aisi kya baat hai ki aap sabko chillana pada.

Shruti gets a call and she has to leave for orphanage...

Sharad- aree par baat toh batau toh sahi kya hai...

Megha - sharad mein tumhe sab bataungi baad mein... and shruti I m so happy for you... (she hugs shruti)

Shruti leaves...

@ orphanage Church

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Shruti - (lights candles) thank you...god...ma Papa aap jaha kahi bhi hai.. I hope you are fine... Ma Papa aaj mein ne manav se apne Dil ki baat keh di..and he loves me too.. ..I know mein ne mein ne kuch baat chupaayi hai ..bhaiya ke alien hone ka Sach lek lekin waqt aane par sab Sach kahungi usse...bas mujeh aap sab ki blessings chahiye..

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Shruti gets call from Samar...she picks up the call

Samar starts to sing the song..

Samar- mehndi hai rachne waali ..haatho mein gehri laali...der saari khushiya ab toh Milne waali hai..tere Mann ko ...jivan ko...

Shruti-(blushes) bhaiya!!!!..Kya aap Bhi !!kaha Meri Shaadi fix Hui hai

Samar- tension mat le behna woh bhi jaldi hojaayegi aur phir manav ban jaayega Mera jijaji aur mein uska saala

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Shruti- bas haan bas bhaiya bahut hua chidhana ..aap batayae aap kaha hai? Aur aapko kuch nahi khabar mili ??

Samar- nai abhi Tak toh nahi mili lekin mujeh 1313 ka shayad insaani Roop patah chal Gaya hai...I m not sure Shruti par shayad Woh 1313 ho sakta hai

Shruti- what?? Are you sure bhaiya??

Samar- I m not sure Shruti lekin mujeh yaha Pune ke jail mein sE information mili hai ki ek khukhaar kaidi ko unhone yaha Pune ke jail mein rakha hai..aur phir jab ussi kaidi ke jaisa dekhne Wala insaan ko jab unlogo ne Mumbai mein dekha..toh wohPune ke thaane waalo ko lagaa ki woh waha see bhaag Gaya hai..par aisa Sach mein nahi hua tha...toh woh police waalo ko Shaq hua ki kahi mein woh kaidi se Mila hoo. Aur with log mujeh pakdne ke liye aaye par mein ne unki yeh memory mita di ki mein unse Mila tha

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Shruti-oh my God ...phir... Ab aap kaha hai

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Samar-shruti mein abhi raigadh jaa raha hoon ...mein ne net pe search Kiya Shruti woh kaidi ke jaise dekhne waale aur 4 log hai.. .un mein sE ek Mumbai mein hai ..aur dusra humshakal Rajasthan mein hain aur tisra khatarnaak terrorist hai Jo sarhad par Pakistan mein rehta hai.. so mein abhi bas Rajasthan jaa Raha hoon aur phir wapas Mumbai aaunga.

Shruti-okay cool bhaiya aap mujeh woh kaidi ki photo aur uske humshakal ki details bhejiye mein use yaha dhoodhti Hoon

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Samar -thik hai par dhyan rakhna tum aur Shruti mere pass aur ek achi news hai

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Shruti-kaiei news bhaiya ..jaldi bataye

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Samar- Shruti mere bag se weak signals mere grah pe jaa raha hai

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Shruti- matalb???

Samar-matalb ki Shruti mere bag mein Jo mein ne battery daali thi so uski wajah see bahut hi weak signals jaa rahe hai

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Shruti-wow bhaiya yeh toh bahut acha progress hai aap unse contact kariye na

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Samar- mein wohi try Kar raha Hoon Shruti...Mera bag bigad Gaya tha toh battery daalne ke kaaran default mode pe chali gayi hai... So mere grah pe contact ke signals jaayenge par woh detect Karne mein bahut hi muskil hogi

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Shruti- bhaiya aap try karte rahe hai..shayad woh log detect Kar Le

Samar--haan Shruti bas ab insaano ke ishwar ab jald see jald mujeh mere parivaar see Mila de wohi Meri iccha hai

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Shruti- Samar bhaiya ..aap tension mat lo Meri hod ke saath bahut achi banti hai..mein aapki request unke yaha urgent department mein pauncha doongi aur phir dekhna woh aapko ek jhatke mein aapke parivaar see Mila denege...acha Chalo mein rakhti mujeh bahaar jaana hai kaam se

Samar-(laughs) kaam se ya phir manav se milne

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Shruti - offo ho bhaiya bas abhi haan...acha okay bye

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Samar- bye...behna

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Shruti downloads the pic of kaidi and humshakal (PS : the pic is of 1313.. and the humshakals are look alike of 1313)

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Shruti - hmm. Toh chalo Mr humshakal Tumhe dhoondte hai ..

prcape- with new leads will samar shruti come to know about 1313...

stay tuned to know more...

sorry i have kept you all wait.. i have been a bit a lazy and audits the job pe so i was busy..

but i have been kept writing in between work so almost mein ne do se tin part likh diya hai .. so i will upload next part after this part .

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Part 29- "Insaani boyfriend"

After few days...

@ colony garden.

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Manav is doing pushups..pritesh is chatting with him..

Pritesh sees Shruti and about to say hi...when Shruti hints to stay quiet.

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Pritesh- manav..bhaiya abhi mein aapki back pe baitha ta hoon phir aap pushups kijiye ..

Manav- okay ..pritesh ..lekin dhyan se baithna

Pritesh- (waves to Shruti to come and sit).. Haan okay manav bhaiya

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Shruti sits on manav back and asks pritesh to speak..

Pritesh-(controlling his laugh) okay manav bhaiya mein baitha..Gaya

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Manav-okay pritesh Dekho steady rehna okay.

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Manav slowly starts doing push-ups..he is feeling heavy

Manav- areee pritesh tum dekhte toh ho itne chotte par tum itne bhaari..ho patah nahi tha mujeh

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Shruti and pritesh are controlling their laugh..

Pritesh- Haan..Woh ab mein bada ho Raha hoon toh wazan bhi badega na manav bhaiya

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Manav- Haan par itna wazan ...acahank se.

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Pritesh- Haan Aaj Woh heavy nasta kiya hai na ...mummy ne heavy breakfast banaya tha iss liye wazan bhad Gaya Mera.

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Manav- oh. Lagta hai bhairavi Didi se puchna hoga ki kya khilaate ho aap.pritesh ki .

Shruti does isshaara to pritesh to ask about her.

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Pritesh- Haan Puch Lena..lekin aap mujeh yeh bataye ki aap Shruti Didi ko kab Yaha laa rahe hai ?

Manav - Yaha laa rahe ho matalb??Shruti toh Yaha haroz aati hai

Pritesh-of ho Mere bhole manav bhaiya aap matalb samjha Gaye bas ignore kar rahe hai

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Manav understands his meaning but tries to ignore

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Manav -(coughs) matalb pritesh mein kuch samjha Nahi ..

Shruti does isshaara to pritesh but he misunderstands Shruti

Pritesh- sharmaaye mat manav bhaiya Acha chalo mein simply karta hoon..Mera matalb hai ki aap Shruti ko Yaha aapki dulh..

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Shruti blushes and blurts out

Shruti-(shsss ) pritesh !!! Shaadi nahi date pe kab lejaayega woh pucho

Pritesh face palms him

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Manav -shruti!!!

Shruti-(bites her tongue) oh shit!!

Pritesh smiles devilish and bends and waves goodbye to manav..

Manav - Shruti!!

Manav tries to see Shruti gets imbalanced
And falls down

Shruti- ouch...ouch

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shruti - manav warning toh deni this dekhne SE pehle ..dekho mein gir gayi

Manav- sorry Shruti... Tumhe kehna toh tha ki tum baithi ho...dekho ab kitni chot lag gayi tumhe

Shruti sits up dusts off the dirt from her clothes.,she is rubbing her head...

Shruti- ouch...ouch .Mera sar

Manav immediately sits beside Shruti and starts to rub her head.

mashru realizes they are too close ..both focuses on ground and try to avoid eye contact.....

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Manav- woh.. woh... tumhe zyada chot toh nahi lagaa na?? Dizzyness toh feel nahi ho raha na?

Shruti- nai...par tumhe warning toh deni thi...dekhne SE pehle

Manav laughs

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Shruti glares at him..

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Manav - (stops laughing) par tum baithi Kyu thi .tumhe patah hai yeh kitna dangerous hai

Shruti - woh..woh .. mein dekhna chahti ki tum kitna weight utha sakte ho aur yeh Jo dole shole bana rakhe hai woh bas ainway hi hai ya phir kuch sahi mein kaam ke hai

Manav-really ? so verdict Kya hai madam?

Shruti- - hmmm verdict ?? Verdict tumhara 50-50 hai..aur mehant karni hogi

Manav- hmm..karunga..philhal toh abhi mein soch raha tha ki kyu na chotti garden date pe chalte hai ..kyuki abhi ek chotti chidya ne aake mujeh khabar di hai ki unhe date pe jaana hai

Shruti- (excited) hmm toh tumne jawab diya woh chotti chidiya ko?

manav-haan de diya bas ab uske jawab ka intezaar hai(looks intentinally towards shruti)

shruti- mein kahoo kya jawab degi?

manav- kya jawab degi woh?

shruti- woh jawab degi ki woh bahut hi excited hai date pe jaane ke liye..

both laughs ..

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Manav- achhaa ...mein ready hoke aata hoon

Shruti- ek minute ready kyu?

Manav - areee hum garden jaa rahe hai na so change karke aata Hoon

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Shruti-nahi hum yahi apni garden date pe jaate hai na...bahaar nahi jaana

mujeh...

Manav - par yaha kaise garden date hogi Shruti

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Shruti-(hits head) huh!!! Manav..yaha hamare samane pura garden pada hai aur tum bahaar jaane ki baat Kar rahe ho

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Manav- par yaha koi disturb karega toh...issliye mein

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Shruti- areee koi disturb nahi karega ...aur dekho na weather kitna acha hai...hum yahi garden mein apni date karenge..Chalo

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Manav- okay but pehle thodi preparation karna toh hoga..na

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Shruti- okay Chalo tumhare Ghar mein chai banati Hoon...aaj tumhe Shruti ki haatho ki chai pilaati Hoon...

Manav - aur mere haatho ki sandwhich khake dekho...Mumbai ki best sandwhich

Shruti- hmm..cool .(links arms with manav) waise tumhara favorite hero Kon hai??

Mashru goes inside

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@ ghotala house...

Sharad is trying to talk to megha who is upset for some reason

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Megha-- Pluto pareshan mat karo...jaao..mujeh yaha SE

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Sharad- minto...sunno toh...areee batao toh sahi kya hua? Tum upset Kyu ho?

Megha- nahi batana mujeh ..jaao kaha na?

Sharad- areee megha...agar tum upset hogaye toh mein bhi upset hojaaunga.

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Megha-- haan toh hojaau upset mujeh bas kisi SE baat nahi karni jaao yaha SE...aur tum se toh bilkul bhi nahi

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Sharad is upset and starts to cry vasant ...Jacky and grishma... Consoles him... And ask him reason

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Sharad- (crying ) yayyaaa..Yaya

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Grishma- Sharad chachu Kya hua aaap. Kyu ro rahe hai

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Sharad- yayaya...(does isharaa's ) yayya...(cries) yayaya.

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Vasant- yeh Kya hai Sharad kuch samjh nahi AA raha hai..Rona bandh Kar aur wajah Bata rone ki...

Sharad- bhaiya...(cries) ...bhaiya..megha ...megha..mujhse naaraz hai..issliye mein sE o raha Hoon

Vasant- haan toh jaa usse jaake manna yaha Kyu baith ke ro raha hai ...

Sharad- areee bhaiya kabse mein manna hi raha Hoon par woh maan nahi rahi hai..issliye ton ro raha Hoon...

Sharad again starts crying loudly

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Vasant- (shuts his ears) areee ooo baniyan thoda dhire to..aur patah Kar apne powers se ki woh Kyu udaas hai

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Sharad- (stops crying).. yeh... Yeh toh Socha hi nahi main ne...

Vasant-haan toh soch aur contact Kar ..apne dimaag se. ..

Sharad contacts through his powers..

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Megha feels Sharad is trying to contact her

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Megha-(in kind) Pluto bhulkar bhi mera dimaag mat padna warna acha nahi hoga..
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Sharad- nai..nai megha mein toh bhabhi ko contact Kar raha tha woh bhul see cross connection lag Gaya ...hi hi hi..par tum upset Kyu ho.

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Megha- nai mein nahi bataunga..tumna bilkul would Insaani boyfriend ki tarah jisse kuch yaad nahi rehta ...huh.!!aur ab agar tumne dimaagi tarang SE contact Kiya you mein tumhe electric shock doongi..

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Sharad- Kya...??? Megha... Mein contact nahi karunga par tum reasons..toh...

Megha disconnects the call

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Sharad- hello!!!..megha..megha.

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Sharad goes here and there in order to connect megha but he is unable to do so

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Sharad again starts crying

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Vasant- phirse shuru hogaya iska ..ooo baniyan Rona bandh Kar aur Bata Kya kaha megha NE.

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Sharad- bhaiya ..megha NE kaha ki mein Insaani boyfriend ki tarah Hoon jisse kuch yaad nahi rehta...

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precape - no precape

guess karo sab sharad kya bhool gaya hai?

Niceee double updates 👏Eagerly waiting for the next part