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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ramya06
Oye! Mujhe pm kyun nahi kiya? 😒
Anyways Res.. . 😛

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Vaah! Vaah! Very interesting start. Accha toh mere arya abhi aaye hain!😳 Thank god he is not the khadoos boss! 😆And kunti thinking of marriage already? Hmm, interesting. Waiting for next part eagerly. 😳 😉

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Samrajya Laxmi Wati

@Dabangg_Sam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Okay meri Aanvi beta first thing ! Tu ne mujhe iss story k liye pm nahi kiya tha . 😡

Tu ne mujhe iss pm account me message kiya . Don do that re ! I barely check this account 😆

Anyways bae Congo for this story re ! Lots of ArDi hugs ❤️

The title is beautiful . Jalte Diye ! Hai re

Now coming to the story . A good start I must say . Loved the prologue . It was more like Draulicious .

And Srithni is her sister ? Okay . Aree Dhruv toh famous ho Gaya ! Yaha bhi Dhrist ka Dhruv hai . 🤣

The first update is beautifully written . The title of the chap is 'Train of life' or 'teain of life ' ? Make it correct babes .

Now Kunti and family off to the station to pick up MR special . Uh huh . Totally I can think *Arjun* na .

I can totally see the scenario . And Dharma is Yudhi ?😕

Arjun gives a lot of tension to his Ma . Hai . Typical beta the part where Kunti says he is the reason of her death was so funny🤣

I can totally imagine the women from Shaheer 's new show playing his mother as Kunti 😆

And Draupadi is in total mess . Dhruv taunting her ! Sweet and bitter you know what I love journalism .

So Draupadi is gonna meet Arjun baba na !

Aree update soon na please . It's like four months since you updated .

You better update soon otherwise I will encircle you with fire like Drau does to Arjun 🤣

Love

Sam

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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ramya06
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Vaah! Vaah! Very interesting start. Accha toh mere arya abhi aaye hain!😳 Thank god he is not the khadoos boss! 😆And kunti thinking of marriage already? Hmm, interesting. Waiting for next part eagerly. 😳 😉

Thank u soo much for ur comment!!😳 yeah... thank god! I cant see my arya khadoos... but saru chalega...😆 aage agge dekho... hota hai kya!😉

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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice update Aanvi😃

Thanks nonie di!!😳

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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Dabangg_Sam
Okay meri Aanvi beta first thing ! Tu ne mujhe iss story k liye pm nahi kiya tha . 😡
Tu ne mujhe iss pm account me message kiya . Don do that re ! I barely check this account 😆
Anyways bae Congo for this story re ! Lots of ArDi hugs ❤️
The title is beautiful . Jalte Diye ! Hai re
Now coming to the story . A good start I must say . Loved the prologue . It was more like Draulicious .
And Srithni is her sister ? Okay . Aree Dhruv toh famous ho Gaya ! Yaha bhi Dhrist ka Dhruv hai . 🤣
The first update is beautifully written . The title of the chap is 'Train of life' or 'teain of life ' ? Make it correct babes .
Now Kunti and family off to the station to pick up MR special . Uh huh . Totally I can think *Arjun* na .
I can totally see the scenario . And Dharma is Yudhi ?😕
Arjun gives a lot of tension to his Ma . Hai . Typical beta the part where Kunti says he is the reason of her death was so funny🤣
I can totally imagine the women from Shaheer 's new show playing his mother as Kunti 😆
And Draupadi is in total mess . Dhruv taunting her ! Sweet and bitter you know what I love journalism .
So Draupadi is gonna meet Arjun baba na !
Aree update soon na please . It's like four months since you updated .
You better update soon otherwise I will encircle you with fire like Drau does to Arjun 🤣
Love
Sam

Okay sam beta now first thing... thank u soo much for this long comment!!😃 tera aur mera comment karne ka style same hai...😆

Nd woh pm wala prob... i had a prib tht tym so pm didnt go to all... sorry for tht... aagey se yeh prob IF na kare tohi behetar hai...😆

Nd tht prologue... lol... i tried to keep my arya under my pallu... *lol* jokes apart, this is gonna be a lottle mysteriois... so be cateful baby..😆

Arre baba no proof check... thts why soo much mistakes... 😆

Yeh... dhruv is indeed famous cuz we dont get ny synonym for dhrisht's name...😆

Yeah... it became sumthing lyk dev...😆 but bta dun yeh maine krpkab ke start se bohot pehele likkha tha... bta nhi kyun main dekh rhi hun jo kuch bhi main sochti hun koi na koi tv serial usse chura leti hai...🤢

Really tht part was funny? I never thoight... well sarcasm sumtimes becomes funny baby...

I tried to make drau a simple girl just lyk others... donno whether be able to do justice or not...

Lol u dont need to encircle me update is coming...😆

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aanvi

@aanvi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

~~Chapter two~~

Plays of fate

Arjun stood there still with those blur memories of his heart. The same jerks of train, The same soil,The same station, where they both had parted away. He had forgotten her, maybe she had also; but did he really remove her from his heart! Some raindrops of his eyes rolled down on his cheeks. He never knew that someone could make him dumb in such extend. As the smell of the know place came, he drowned himself in the ocean of memories.

''Arjun? Bhai? Are u in this world?'' Jeet shook him from behind and his webs wept away.

"no no... nothing...lets go! ''

''now can we go?? Donno from which age all r waiting for us...'' jeet was too much excited to see his family again and his fiancee of course.

''Haan haan! Your family is waiting verry eagerly for you to put on varmala on your neck!''

''what the hell satya!!'' Jeet gave a blood shot look at satya and the whole compartment bursted out in laugher.

''Uffo you all... why are you all after this poor being!!'' Arjun gave another taunt which left the whole crew staring at him. After all Mr. Major was too humble for not digesting or vomiting any taunt!! That scene was rarest of rares.

''beta arjun, let your time come, we will see who is the ' bichara' . Lagi shart!"

''We will se... thats never gonna happen. I dont trust any girl. Aur bata nehi isse kya mil gaya har din biwi ke pallu mein bandhne ke liye uchal kud karta reheta hai!!'' And again the whole crew laughed out. Their life was like that only. Sometimes cracking jokes, and whole time take your life in hands... they had decided, life gives them anything or not, they'll not let them suffer in their normal life. Their life was not at all normal. Nor going to be normal in their weekend vacation also.

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'Bhaia, pLease go quickly na!!''

Draupadi impatiently wringled her hands sitting in the traffic continously looking at the road and praying to the Lord so that the jam gets clear.

''Madam, what can i do!! See, there is a long traffic!! Who dares to cross them in India!!''

"Then take a shortcut na!'' Sweat was completly visible on her forehead . She continoisly wept her sweats which were dropping down in anxiety

''We can't move the rickshaw in middle!''

''then you should have thought it before!!'' Draupadi yelled. Their voices were going only on high pitch that everyone was looking at both of them. And from the other side chitra panicked and shook draupadi beside her.

''Draus! We'll surely lose our job! Only ten minutes left and we're still stuck here! Boss is gonna kill us... '' she bit her nails thinking about the possible resilts ad busy in imagining the results.

''Aree go by any way!! Meri job chali jayegi! Uske baad kya tum aake mujhe job doge!!!'' Draupadi again became restless and started yelling at the driver.

''Draus, can u hear e! Stop fighting! We can try by going on foot na! After all people would go only by legs before!!''

''By foot, my foot! Are you mad! Do we have wings that we can go by 10 mins? No! by god 7 mins! If you can go, go!'' Draupadi again and looked at the clock and at her one reply chitra kept herself mum.

''Stupid traffic!!'' Draupadi murmured under breath and looked around to see any way by which she can go.

'' I think you are i trouble, may i help you?'' Suddenly a voice came from a bike and draupadi's jaw dropped.

Tbc...

I know its very small... but kare kya... exams chal rhe hai na!! I hope i can give u all a bigger update in some days!!😃

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Edited by aanvi98 - 9 years ago

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Res first!
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Ye kya, arya and drau had a past? And they broke up or something? 😲 Ya phir koi aur ladki thi vo? Lekin if she is drau toh bahut bada dhamaka hone wala hai bahut jald. 😛 🤣
Drau stuck in traffic. Oh late na ho jaye. Running drau, aur ye kabab mein haddi koun hai yaar? Ye bike wala??
So many questions yaar, i must say you are able to keep up the suspense elements well. ⭐️But kitna short update diya hai. Kaan khol kar sun le agli baar mujge long update chahiye varna main bhi lazy hun, long comment nahi dungi. 😛 😈
Awesome update, this one and update next part soon!

Edited by ramya06 - 9 years ago

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Reswaa !

Unres .

So happy you updated Aanvi ! 🤪 Today I really wanted to read something on ArDi re. Thanks for updating . Par update Kya tha ? You tell this small update . No I call this teaser ! 😡

Exams meh hi toh likhne ka maja hai 🤣 think about all those theoretical and mathematical derivations and think about our ArDi ! Hai ! 😆 Which is more interesting huh ?😆

Now coming to update . Finally Hamara Arjun baba agaya ! Yeah 🥳 he is a major 😲 how old he is ? 😕 30 above ?

Major Arjun sounds so good . Kya hai woh Arjun Kanungo ? 😆 *oh it's nothing jus a singer's name which is Arjun Kanungo . * 😉

Arjun is missing someone . Who ? Draupadi . But with *she* possibilities such as Subhadra come too . But in your ff . No ways .🤣

Draupadi in traffic jam ! 🤣And she is running off now . Aww I can imagine our Pooja cutely running and hurrying up through the crowd

And who is in Bike ? Defiantly not Arjun cause he is still in train !

Salley suspense meh chodna achi baat nahi hai 🤣

Update soon .

Like really soon with a long nice one .

Love

Sam

Edited by PanchaliKaArjun - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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saishree

@Saishree97

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Kitne Dino baad Teri update me darshan hue yaar...exam khtam hone ke baad I want a biiiggg update! Samaji! Damki hai avaihi mat Lena!

Comment pe aate hai...
Yeh arjun kise yaad kiye ro rha thaa? Aww! No crying arya...bata mat drau aur arjun ka past me breakup-shecup ho gya thaa...

Jeet kon hai? Bheem ya nakul? Kya hai yeh iss exam ke chhakkar-shakkar me memory loss ho gyi...lol

Drau ko late mat karwa! Prince charming se milna hai usse! Am I right?

Aur yeh kon bikewala? Mere ardi me beech ka kaata-vaata toh nhi hai na?

Update soon...

Kehna bhul gyi... 😆 awesome update! 😃

Edited by -Saishree- - 9 years ago