Forgive Me- A Three Shot on Karna and Bhanumati

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FlauntPesimism

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
very emotional.
n beautifully written

Thankyou dear, the more I am writing this ff, the more I feel the pain of Bhanumati. Although a very ignored character, she might have suffered a lot during

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Very beautiful! Loved how you explained Bhanumati's despair!

Thanks dear. I never liked the portrayal of Dury and team celebrating the death of Abhimanyu in the TV series. May be his death had made them happy but both he and Dushy lost their (perhaps) only sons that day, I am pretty sure they would not have celebrated.

Here I took the scene from the TV series imagining that the team was actually celebrating that day and no one but only Vrihsena came to share her pain(Creative liberty😉😉)

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GEETHA KRISHNAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice update. The bond between Vrishasena and Bhanumati was very nice. Please update soon.

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amritat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This is very emotional...

The loss of children is probably the biggest loss of all...

Please continue...😊

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FlauntPesimism

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Originally posted by: amritat
This is very emotional...
The loss of children is probably the biggest loss of all...
Please continue...😊

Thanks dear. I really think as why do we only pay importance to death of Pandava kids. The children of Dury, Dushy, Karna etc. were equally innocent

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FlauntPesimism

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: KURT15
Nice update. The bond between Vrishasena and Bhanumati was very nice. Please update soon.

Thanks for liking it dear😊. I always imagine how you manage to carve out such beautiful scenes

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Ramya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Shpreeta di, this is indeed touching and well written!👏 Emotions have been brought out beautifully! 😭

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey i read this sometime ago but just found time to comment. Its nice read and loved vrihasena and Bhanumati's bond you displayed. Please continue soon😊