ArHi SS - A Trip Gone Wrong ::Chap.4:Pg.41:25/06::

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Awesome start 👍🏼

loved the first update

waiting for the next part

thanks for the PM

Quote

kowshira9

@kowshira9

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Nice start,waiting to read more

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

awesome start..!!!
thanks for pm..!!

continue soon..!!!

Quote

anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Do continue, but please don't put each scene in both their POV, u shud mic it up, try to put as per ones POV.

Quote

lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Interesting start. She is a Mallick. Update soon

Quote

finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Hey...when are u planning to continue

Quote

-BeYourSelf-

@-BeYourSelf-

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Awsm start it was.. Liked d concept...
Luking frwrd to read more..
Hp u ll continue dis story...

Quote

Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -cute_vampire-
Hai didu How do u manage to write to wonderfully? Pls tell me yaar. U know am jealous vampire. I can't write or edit anything. *pout* Thodi kala Hume bhi de dijiye Vampire didu. You expressed the emotions really well didu. Hats off.. Bow down. Salute.. You the best... Can't wait for tomorrow.
Love,
Yours,
Baccha

There's nothing special about it! I write what comes to my mind. Trust me, sometimes it can be carp too! 🤢 You just like praising me.. That's it. There's nothing new... 😛

Quote

Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.
Prologue was interesting and the first part was above that!
Loved this concept!
Arnav taking a break! And meeting his special someone during the trip!
While Khushi lost an important person of her life! And is lost, confused and sad with the hapennings in her life!
Really good Sravya!

Nisha Di..

Thank you so much! And serial mein bhi bechara kaam karta hi rehta hain. Subha kaam, shaam ko kaam, ghar mein kaam, ghar se bhaar kaam. I got fed up.. isliye ASR ko break dediya.. 😆

Quote

Sravya/Sravs

@...Champ...

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Sweety012345
Great update
Loved to know Khushi perspective
But
It feels like I am just reading something that I have already read. I would prefer if you stick with only one persons perspective or if added extra update along with the second perspective.
However please stick to the way you imagined to write this story if giving only one perspective will change the essence of the story.

Thanks for the honest remark. I'll see to not let the same happen again. It was just for the first chapter and nothing more.. 😊 I'll keep in mind your suggestion when writing and posting the second chapter of the SS.. 😳