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Hi I have one another story below I am posting Prologue and character sketch let me know whether to continue or drop down idea???

Prologue
Taani lost her anger when she come to know her co-actor who is taking care of her on each and every step is not because he is in love with her but it is because his father have told him to take care of her just because their pair have been given back to back hit movie and he will be king of box office one day with her charm's help and she scream on him that he can't play with her feeling just to hit the box-office with super-hit movie and from now on she won't work with him not even in the movie in which they are working right now.

Character sketch

Taani Arrora:

An actress and bubbly girl and innicent and childish by heart Only child of her divorced parents her mother is former failure actress and her father is former director who have given few hit movie but due to divorce he stop making movies and he is against idea of making his daughter an actress because he know his daughter not the one who can survive there.

Sabeer Khan:

Son of Sameer khan who is famous actor of his time. Sabeer has hiked box-office with his co-actress Taani Arrora.

Sharon Raiprakash:

A journalist who lost her only sibling Sara few year back.

Swayam Shekhawat:

A psychiatrist.

Reyansh Singhaniya:

A director and producer.

Vishesh Singhaniya:

Rey's brother and a MLA

Kria Singhaniya:

Vishesh's wife.

Edited by ShaYam_Taarey - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting character sketch
something diff.
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesng concept nd thnks to Kriyesh Pair... now she won't come between taarey... Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept
love it
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice character sketch
Continue soon and do pm me pls
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Thanks 😊😊😊 Every one for your replies is really means so much to me and I am sorry for not able to reply your comments individually due to post limit...🥱 again big big big sorry for not replying individually... And below I am posting first chapter...

PART ONE

Taani is going back to her green room after completing her shot but when she crossed Sabeer's green room path she think of meet him for few minutes so she move towards his room but before she can knock on the door Sabeer's voice reach her ears which says

Sabeer: Dad I am fed from her and this so called love. Now I can't do this love drama with her any more. 😒

Sabeer dad: Beta you know that audience like your pair and in past you hiked box-office with her but last three movie of yours without her went miserably fail so you need her to be success so continue this all and moreover she is natural beauty why you do not pay attention there??? 😳

Sabeer: Dad no benefit she is quite traditional by thought she do not believing in enjoying present moment but you are right I'll adjust with her so called love for success...😉😉😉

Taani feel disgust after listening this all she do not have more guts to listen further conversation of duo so she left to her room broken and shattered. 💔🥺 But somehow she handled herself and after few minutes she lost her anger 😡😡 because now she come to know her co-actor who is taking care of her on each and every step is not because he is in love with her but it is because his father have told him to take care of her just because their pair have been given back to back hit movie and he will be king of box office one day with her charm's help.

After few minutes she march towards Sabeer's green room and enter like a storm and she scream on him that he can't play with her feeling just to hit the box-office with super-hit movie and from now on she won't work with him not even in the movie in which they are working right now.

Sabeer is shocked at her statement and try to sooth her by his sugarcoated words and he speak

Sabeer: Baby what happen why is you angry on me??? Did anyone say any bad about us??? What happen tell me??? I can't see you like this my baby... (With fake concern)

After listening his sugarcoated words with fake concern for a moment she forget what she heard before and hugged him tightly but the same time Sabeer's father entered in room and she come to her senses and push him far and told him everything she listened and again declared her decision and left the room leaving two poor shocked soul behind.

So how was the first part???



Edited by ShaYam_Taarey - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon first update
Prologue interesting

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting update
Waiting rey entry
Update soon please do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sprb
awesome yr
really loved it alot
sabeer & his fathers convo
taani ka gussa
masha- alaah yr
bt firse becharj behek gai nd usko hug kiya
pr thank god usko hosh a gya
nd usk apna faisla suna diya
update soon dearrr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
waiting for TR
continue soon

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