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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for updating.😛

Jenny you have beautifully divided the update into 3 short stories simultaneously.👏

Lavanya is realising her follies & definitely repenting about it, but now its too late. Slowly she is overcoming her past & thinking about her future without Arnav in it.

I am happy for Khushi's sister... Her life is taking a good turn.

Coming back to favourite Arnav-Khushi, its too short. Jenny please next time I want a lengthier part on Arnav-Khushi.

Arnav-Khushi are in bliss but at the same time, Khushi is a bit worried about Arnav's career. She wants Arnav to get back on track, once they return to US. With Khushi's love, Arnav will overcome any obstacle.

Please update quickly. Waiting for Arnav-Khushi's honeymoon❤️ & reception in US.

PS: Jenny please include Arnav-Khushi becoming parents in epilogue.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Subsequent thoughts...first thoughts on page 60

A moving on Chapter for Anita, Lavanya and...
...it's hearth and home for Arnav with his Khushi, in each other's arms forever...

... ..

Beautiful Chapter has left me a little woebegone. ❤️

More to say...later. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
So , you updated. Yayyy
Thank you thank you thank you.

Though, we didn't get too much of Arshi, but the things we got instead , is very much needed too.

Well, I guess the conversation with a stranger (Arian) , helped Anita to get a closure. The same things when told by her sister or brother figure like Arnav, she felt , they were saying those in order to cheer her up as they are concerned for her. But, without making anything obvious, the way Arian spoke, it certainly spoke about his maturity & also brought some kind of peace in Anita's heart. Hope they meet again & really hope, this should not be an end to Anita - Arian's meeting.

Lavanya , I felt really very sorry for her. Some wise person says you have to bear the consequences of your own actions. Whatever Lavanya is feeling is because of her past actions. But thanks to friends like Nevile, that she has come to a point of self-criticism. Definitely she needs more time, to get over her guilt feeling to bring some acceptance to a new relation for a new person. But, on a serious note, the way she says, she needs to do something, to release the burden from her chest - I believe, she should take responsibility of her actions & have a talk with Arnav & Khushi first - asking for an apology whole heartedly. Then she should also talk to her own father & sister Manya & admit in details about her wrong doing & take Manya along with her to talk to Khushi's parents & ask for their forgiveness . I guess these actions can release the burden settled on her chest.

Arshi conversation was quite light hearted. But, since things were getting settled down a bit, I really want Arnav to get back to his work & want him to settle down professionally too
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanx for such a beautiful story I can't believe its been 2years since I started reading this amazing story n now only 2 chapters are left well i must say a very unusual story n the way you wrote it just amazing, i do hope that you will come back wiyh a new story soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
This update was really good, and I'm looking forward to read about Arian being an astronaut.
Hope there will be a closure to Lavanya's story by next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Jenny, this update was just fabulous !! Can't tell you how much I enjoy your writing and have loved this story. 😳 It is so nice to see Arnav and khushi finally together and blissfully happy... They so deserve it !! Anita's story was also wonderful. She seemed to be at crossroads as to what she wanted to do next in her life ... pursue her dream of becoming an astronaut, giving herself a chance to enjoy another man's company !! Glad that Anita's co-passenger was so nice and kept her mind diverted from thinking about her heartbreak with Aman !! Lavanya's portion in the update was awesome as she realized that how wrong she had been with Arnav !! Hope she finds happiness !! Looking forward to the next update !! ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brilliant update! I just loved the Anita's part. Started talking to a stranger and went deep till her kindergarten memories. But I was devastated when he said good buy to herWill they ever meet again? Never mind they can always search on Fb right
Lavanya finally had realised what she had done in her life. Im not that humble person to forgive her misdoings, I still abhors her to the fullest of my heart.
Finally our sweeties... So romantic and sweet... Wish to see more scenes with this pair.
Worth waiting... Lovely.

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Posted: 9 years ago
A beautiful chapter Jen.
Loved how you are making Anita and Lavanya overcome their emotions. Khushi's sentence about how Arnav will never be able to hide anything conveys so much hope for their future.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Jenny
Such a sweet episode.More relations are on the way promising hope and some relations are bonding nicely and life is going on.
Love
Anna😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I really loved the update.. It's a chapter of moving ons...
What nono sf can't end... Nahiii :(

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