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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to another story of yours ..shyam is a good Guy?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so glad you're back! wonderfully confused start to this story. can't wait to figure out the mystery about the broken engagement, the history between arnav and khushi, and the link you've made to the actual scenes from the show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations on Arnav and Khushi's return. I didn't have the chance before so doing it now 😳 Firstly, I've missed your 'notes'. Life's brutally 'robbed' me of the chance to read ypur stories but I never miss your 'notes' 😛

And no Rasgulla ji I am not going to miss this story for anything 😆 My last ditch I assume.

I know you write good. I've read some too but this, angst from you? This was amazing 😃 I dont know what to tell. It's been quite a while since I've reviewed any stories in detail so excuse me if I am not up to the mark 😳

SP ji, I like the way you bring out emotions: so real, so potent 😳 One gets to feel them literally and trust me not many have that touch in their writing (No offense to any writers out there 😆 I am a harmless soulwa don't bash me)

Coming to the plot, you say it's an AU, but the contents are very similar to that of the show. 😕 Shyaam's a nice man and is related or a friend to Khushi ? And our ever misunderstanding tycoon did something miserable amd I know very well to what extent Arnav Singh Raizada can get nasty when he does that *narraws eyes

One thinks, he's fool to leave the lady who could have been 'his' which is right. While the other thinks that she's been a fool to fall in love with the 'laad governor' tje 'rakshas' tje 'shaitaan'. Who's the biggest 'fool' is the biggest foolish kostin ? 😛

He broke his engagement with Khushi? 'Gave her false hopes..' only points out to that 😕 Boy! Am I disliking Arnav Singh Raizada already 🥱 But then humme bharosa hai, Rasgulla par, Rasgulla ji ke pyaar par (on me ) 😆

This is all I understood from Chapter 1, everything else is blurred. Am eager to read more about ' A fool' 😉 Sounds promising: the title 😆

There I found something... 😆


Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Tq tq tq so much
Oh I can't express how happy I am
The chp was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Hi dear
Thank u thank u thank u for the new story
I was eagerly waiting for a story from u
So bring it on.
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Thank u so much for finally deciding to write again.
Yes it's a miracle that arshi is back... N so are u.
I don't even have the slightest of doubts that u can't write angst. You have done a marvelous job.
They say... Well begun is half done! 😉
Waiting for the next update. I'm highly curious
U seem to have given a major twist to the terrace scene.
Wanna know what is it??
😊 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing start loved it can.t wait for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Oh Iam late
Arhi is back - Saiyu is back
What more can I ask for
Great start Saiyu -
Nothing is impossible for u Saiyu - nothing and everything is ur genre
Iam very happy to have u back Saiyu
Priya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting
why did Arnav married khushi?
and they are living together or seperated?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back girl.. That is some start.. I can't wait for more.. I love your and lazy's work and it was amazing to see an email from lazy

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