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DEAR ALL

I M GOOD STALKER OF THIS FORUM BUT NOW I PLAN TO POST MY STORY ,

I WILL UPDATE WHEN LIKELY TO DO BUT I PROMISED TO FINISH THIS STORY SOON,AND I M NOT GOOD IN ENGLISH SO KINDLY POINT OUT ALL MY ERROR ,IT WILL HELP ME TO IMPROVE MY SELF SO PLZ GIVE UR HONEST OPINION

IF U FIND MY WORK INSPIRATION OF SOMEONE ,PLZ LET ME TO KNOW ,I WILL CHANGE MY STYLE



MY FIRST STORY TEARS & SMILE BASED ON THE CONCEPT OF THERE IS LIFE AFTER EVERY LOVE FAILURE ,AT THE SAME TIME THERE IS A LOVE AFTER EVERY LIFE FAILURE

IT WILL CONFUSE A LITTLE BUT HOPE U ALL UNDERSTAND MY TAKE

WITH LOVE

VEDA(MAHI)

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Tears&Smile PART-I


"See Raj u r not a kid like Darshana,I hope u understand how much this project important to me coz for the first time I m making a ad for an international brand "
'I know Naline ,I m not asking u stay with me i told u to once come here ,coz Buji(darshana's nickname) missing u even she didn't see ur face past 6 month, u know Rambhai went to his village due to his daughter ill health ,now I m the only one who took care of our kid ,I looking for a maid, but it will take some time, that's why I ask u to stay with us"
Nalini give a big breath and said,"Listen Raj u can ask the help from Madhur uncle's neighbor to find a maid if not, then put an ad in paper ,surely u will get a lot of response,its very simple to find a maid, then why u worried for a every little issue Raj"
Raj little shock and angrily said,"not just a maid ,the person need to be very loyal like Rambhai coz they are going to take care of our buji,so I can pick with caution, well u spend lot of time in party I saw the pic in FB ,if u reduced such a things then surely u will have time for our ur child "
Nalini furious but doesn't show it in her words,"Raj plz such parties are necessary to get new order, for whom I earn money? only for me ?no...only for our child.Raj u were promised me to be a supporting husband throughout our journey then why keep upsetting me for every little things plz be in sense "
Raj listen her without utter a word coz he knows whatever he said she will never going to accept it,Nalini continued further,'ok Raj find a servant as much as possible ,I call u back ,take care of u and darshna...bye Love u"
Nalini cut the call and start working on her laptop. Raj throw the mobile on the bed and turn his head towards his daughter who still asleep on his shoulder,her both arms tightly hold her Dads neck.he put his lips on her head ,'he thinks Gods is not such unfair to me that's why he gave u' then he himself lay on the bed ,both dad and daughter fall asleep on the tight embrace of each other.
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few weeks back Raj Transferred to this small town that is very near Bhopal , with in few days People of this small town know him as a good and kind person, always ready to help. After his joining this branch, many new loans were sanctioned and all admired his good work. He used to be very, friendly and nicely spoke with client especially youngster who aspire to start business , Enthusiasm is a kind of fire that is easily spread from one person to another. Raj usually encourage the people by his soft words and his cute smile coz he always thought' we cant provide the money for all their needs, but we can give our good words to them'. that's why people attract by this simple attitude of Raj, In fact this nature of Raj highly inspired by his 2 yrs old daughter ,Darshana. He might feeling lonely since his wife in Mumbai. But his daughter make everything is possible, of course like every daughter she too pappa's princess. he was given top position in the branch. He had a small apartment of his distant uncle Madhurbhai staying in abroad which was vacant. They wanted him to use their apartment so that it is maintained properly. He moved to the apartment along with rambhai&darshana. It was really a nice apartment in good locality with great amenities, but very next day his servant Rambhai got the message abt his daughter ill health for her treatment he sent Rambhai to his native village.
Once he started staying there, he found it difficult to maintain the big apartment and also found it difficult to cook or even make snacks and tea, Though he good at cooking, coz his daughter darshana who always want to be in her dad's arm.she will happy only when her dad around her.so Raj was in search of some good servant,he plan to implement one of the suggestion of nalini ,so knock the door of his neighbor ,he informed to neighbors that he is relative of madhurbhai,they were very happy to meet as they have a good relationship with madhurbhai.

Then Raj informed abt his searching for good servant ,they assured for a maid soon
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after 3 days

The house wife next door buzzed his door bell. She invited him to her house.Raj went there,there is new comer along with Raj neighbours, they introduced a person Mr&Mrs.Deepak

they said about his query regarding servant-Raj listening all their speech without saying any word now Mr Deepak start to speak he said he about to going USA with family for three yrs project He told to Raj that they are worried about their house maid, whom they have brought from near town, They were unable to take her with them and also not wanted to leave her here alone, due to some family problems of her, They asked him, if he want to keep her with him as house maid and They praised her work and her character a lot ,Raj surprising to see their concern for their servant at the same time he appreciate their generous heart ,after hearing all these Raj eyes also eager to see their servant.

Raj said "all right I accept ur offer coz I unable maintain my home with my baby so I need a servant , but let me to know the details of about her salary and everything" Mrs.Deepak said no issue Raj we need a safe place for her ,u don't need to give more money "Raj reluctantly shake his head and said "then ok I will ask her abt it"Mrs.Deepak Further continued she will come to ur home on tomorrow ,Today we brought her to introduced u she is in car I ll call her"Raj nodded

Within few minutes Mrs.deepak entered the room with a girl Raj unable to see her face coz Mrs D partly hide her ,first introduce to Mr.Madhur who sit opposite side sofa ,that girl bow her head touch Mr madhur feet ,he blessed her,then Mrs Deepak said ,"Lata beta this is Raj ur new master' Lata look over him & fold her two hands and said NAMASTE"with a cute innocent smile.

now Raj smiling face slightly changed into vigorous he gets up, he stared Lata with shock,his eyes like he saw something that ishe don't like to see, he don't reciprocated her but looked at her, his eyes became red,Mr.Madhur said what raj why don't speak anything? Raj understand the situation he restlessly said "now I have to go see u tomorrow".Raj move out immediately. Lata chuckles Towards Mrs Deepak.

(To be continued)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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gr8 story
i m looking forward to see how Lata take care of Raj and his kid
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avontara

wonderful story
loved it



thank u so much😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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mahi u dark horse, didn't know u have hidden talent 🤗 😆
glad u shared it with us 👍🏼 very interesting FF. keep up. please try to update as often as possible and don't leave it half way.
(I'm still waiting after 2 years for upila to finish her FF on Raj/Lata)
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Lata reminds Raj of his wife hence he was shocked in anger!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.S.K.

mahi u dark horse, didn't know u have hidden talent 🤗 😆

glad u shared it with us 👍🏼 very interesting FF. keep up. please try to update as often as possible and don't leave it half way.
(I'm still waiting after 2 years for upila to finish her FF on Raj/Lata)
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Lata reminds Raj of his wife hence he was shocked in anger!!!!!!!!!!!



thanks shobhi
i will finish this soon coz its very short mximum 4 or 5 only


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it cant waiti for more
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Originally posted by: 2016



thanks shobhi
i will finish this soon coz its very short mximum 4 or 5 only



hope u didn't mind me calling u dark horse. I meant it as a compliment 🤗 here we say it jokingly when someone springs a surprises of their skills, abilities etc
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very very beautiful story
keep update
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Originally posted by: 143.Samrata

Loved it cant waiti for more



thank u so much

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