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8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#961

Hi Faiqa!

I am so sorry for delaying reading the story, but here I am, having read the whole of IF in one go.

What a beautiful end to a beautiful story.

When I read the 17th chapter, my heart was beating so fast...I absolutely loved the ArShi romance and the confessions, especially when he carried her info the apartment. It was just so amazing.

Also, chapter 18 and the rest of epilogue, part 1 and 2 were superbly written.

It was such a wonderful feeling go see their story grow together, and then the last chapters where their love blossoms, making them shine in the story.

I feel happy endings are the best parts to a story, and here we have so many coming together. Not just the couples, Payal-Aadi, Anjali-Arun and of course, ArShi but even JPalo, and the rest.

It was amazing to read the Epilogue after 5 years, where they have twins. It was beautifully done. Kudos to you for making ArShi so special!😳👏

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#962

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Wow dear...
Beautiful ending

Originally posted by: yoga123
Awesome epilogue...Beautiful story...thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: vandana1965
Lovely story and edits

Originally posted by: NPKN
Superb...beautiful ending

Thank you ALL for your appreciation😊🤗

Edited by Mysticaldivine - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#963

Originally posted by: dumas
Beautiful story very emotional full of love, anger intrigue well done loved how they held strong to their love for each other loved their teasing and the flirting amazing ending loved that he brought her to er mother home tanks for the pms and for understanding my missed comments.

Hey dumus😊

Always good to see you

Thnx for remembering me

glad u liked it and awww lovely pic of their union.😳

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#964

Originally posted by: 8520NK
Hi Faiqa!
I am so sorry for delaying reading the story, but here I am, having read the whole of IF in one go.
What a beautiful end to a beautiful story.
When I read the 17th chapter, my heart was beating so fast...I absolutely loved the ArShi romance and the confessions, especially when he carried her info the apartment. It was just so amazing.
Also, chapter 18 and the rest of epilogue, part 1 and 2 were superbly written.
It was such a wonderful feeling go see their story grow together, and then the last chapters where their love blossoms, making them shine in the story.
I feel happy endings are the best parts to a story, and here we have so many coming together. Not just the couples, Payal-Aadi, Anjali-Arun and of course, ArShi but even JPalo, and the rest.
It was amazing to read the Epilogue after 5 years, where they have twins. It was beautifully done. Kudos to you for making ArShi so special!😳👏

Hey Navika dear, so good to see you.🤗

Happy to see you enjoying the story after its completion.Sometimes it gives you a different flavor.

Their blossoming love was their strength and they came over all obstacles to be with each other.After killing all demons of their lives ,they found love and care from all across and within.

Epilogues are my fav part too,

Really appreciate for taking time ,reading and commenting such a beautiful comment.

Love&Hugs

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christi002

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Posted: 9 years ago

#965

Beautiful ending.. Loved the epilogue dear... 😊

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just4this

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Posted: 9 years ago

#966

Hello

Got hooked to this story, some days back. Read it back to back .

Loved it, very beautiful story.

Enjoyed reading it.

I know I am late, none the less, I wanted to convey my thanks and want u to know ,I enjoyed each and every chapter.

Thank u .

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: neha_shah
😊

Thnx dear

Originally posted by: christi002
Beautiful ending.. Loved the epilogue dear... 😊

Thnx christi😊 Ths story is very close to me,happy seeing you sharing my joy.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#968

Originally posted by: just4this
Hello
Got hooked to this story, some days back. Read it back to back .
Loved it, very beautiful story.
Enjoyed reading it.
I know I am late, none the less, I wanted to convey my thanks and want u to know ,I enjoyed each and every chapter.
Thank u .

Thnx just4this😊

There is no time of reading at least in my book...so read and enjoy.

Really appreciate your warm words and above all your time...as my chapters are not small ,pretty much if u ask me it is around 30 if I wanted,but I write nd do what I want...dragging and other things are not my forte.

Please accept my humble and heartfelt "Shurukia..."😊 Thnx