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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: beyonddarkness
So sorry for such a late comment
Last ch 18 is good as always
Epilogue is amazing, you practically covered every minute detail of arnav-khushi's life and all the people related to them
Overall it was a nice experience reading this lovely story 😊

Thnx4 pm dear :)

Thnx dear😊

Thnx for the pink 😊

Happy seeing you enjoying this story very much.I had fun reading you views and intriguing thoughts.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: tmowla
just awesome...
superb story... dont have words to describe what i feel for the story
you are a wonderful writer and hope you will continue to gift us such wonderful stories...
thanks again for everything and waiting for new ones ;)

Thn tmowla😊

u liked it...and that makes my day as always

I am humbled by your beautiful words...Thnx

Originally posted by: nisso
very beautiful epilog!🥳
thank you for this history!
expect from you a new love story

thnx nisso dear😊

glad u liked the past of Khushi and all...see u soon

Originally posted by: kowsiRa
Such a beautiful story

thank you dear😊

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: .anjali.
Superb epilogue👏👏
The starting scene..arnav drinking milk for khushi😳haye😳
Wow...the whole arshi room scene was ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️..i haveno words.....i will be reading it once more...it seriously was love❤️superbly written👏
The gupta family-nani convo was luvv😃
And sukhi ji is soo cuutee😳 😳jaan of the party😃along with O'conner😊
Aadi-payal..😳my cutie pies😳 😳

Epilogue 2 was soo nycc😃 😃
The whole marriage ceremony-reception part written perfectly dear😳😳
Akashs gift was soo nyc...the scene well written😳
Mojo..i luvv u❤️Munda kukkad kamal da😆 😆perfect song😛
Yess.atlast arun-anjali are goin to get married😃 😃
Bidai was soo emotional😭 😭luvvd it
The arshi scene was😳 ❤️
5 yrs later😃second honeymoon...kya baat hai😛 😆 😆
Adhira and aadarsh...lovely names for luvly kids..😳
But aadis comment😆 😆 nautanki he is😆 😆
Hoping Jpalo is able to live peacefully😊😊

Very nycc ending to a superb story...will be waiting for your next one😃

THANK YOU

GLAD U ENJOYED IT AS MUCH AS i PENNED IT DOWN.

AADI IS MY MOST FAV CRATED CHARACTER...IF U ASK AMONG ALL...

JOVIAL AND RESPONSIBLE

ANJALI , I LOVED HAVING THIS JOURNEY WITH U AND GLAD U ALL HAD FUN WITH ME ALL THIS TIME

ALWAYS EYES SEARCHED FOR UR RESPONSE AND U NEVER DISAPPOINTED ME...ALWAYS BROUGHT A SMILE OVER MY FACE...

STORY IS NOTHING WITHOUT READERS AND i AM SO HAPPY TO HAVE U ALL ...WITH ME ALL ALONG

LOVE ND HUGS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#814

Hello Everyone❤️ 🤗

Thank you everyone for your time and for giving this bitter/sweet story a chance. This story came to live for my friend's real life story who is very close to my heart... She read your thoughts and I am conveying her regards to you.Among all the chapters ,she liked😲epilogue.Really...😡I will take care of her later for this.😉

Life is not a fairytale,well, we all know that ,but some have faced it way earlier in their lives.Inciting desires is not a mere love story for me,it was a story of not two ppl who fell in love and had all sorts of emotions for each other.It was a story of layering LOVE among every level.Adopted Parents, friends, neighbors, relatives, servants ...all these hold some room in our lives.Now humans re the most beautiful creation of God and we have been gifted a most beautiful organ "Heart" which can spread smile instantly and hold LOVE beyond imagination

and an organ "a tongue" with words...this second organ is the worst of all in your body which hurts the most and what it hurts the most

The "Heart" where God lives.

These days, I think we humans have forgotten how mere words and actions of ours can hurt someone badly beyond repair...

Bul-e- Shah's words in Punjabi ,but I am just putting translation

Break whatever u want to break,but don't break anyone's heart as God lives there.meaning you actually hurt God through this process...

Yes this is sufiism and very few know the true meaning of things...and especially those who actually closed their hearts for others then the love reduced to some shape which basically we see among many and around these days.Blood relations /this and that ...yes those are inseparable,but it doesn't mean close ur hearts for others.My friend was lucky that she had found among those who have big hearts for others.

Honestly speaking, I'm in deep thoughts sometimes that this thought/attitude is gripping in our society and over our decisions,and still we have these rooted worms squirming around us as ppl don't think sometimes their words and action hurt others immensely.I am happy seeing her which makes my belief stronger that still somewhere humanity prevails.

It makes me really happy that you not only liked the story but also the characters especially Aadi, Mojo,Sukhi Uncle,O'Conner,and all .Some of you got into the skin of them too. This story was about Arnav and Khushi, two people, who were tied in together in such a relationship which had no meaning but still they both couldn't stay away from each other regardless of their circumstances or assumptions especially Khushi Who left knowing his real dilemma and Arnav who had no idea of the depth of her nightmares.

During writing stories back and forth,I actually came to know many things about ppl here.Good or bad aside, the only thing which made me disappointed was some know me for a very long time.They are not new ones over this virtual world and they have shown me a different side of them which I can't connect with.Whatever the reason they hold ,I would say only one thing.If I have ever hurt anyone unconsciously, I apologize from the bottom of my heart.

Life is unpredictable and inconsistent, but we are what we made of and that matters the most.. because we hold the power to change and I want to sleep with a clear conscious.Period!

Thank you all for your support. 🤗 and Love❤️
Thanks to each one of you who took time and read and commented . Silent Readers , I salute you always for showing your voice by clicking LIKE...and those who read without showing their presence by any means...and especially those who left sweet words instead of "Res" ...I am touched as a lot of writers complain about that and I have no complaint in this matter.So sweet of you all.

Thank you to Stalkers through profile😆 Trust me you can find stuff without going to ppl's profile as I do.It takes quick span of time to find out what is happening here.

One thing which I want to clear...folks ,I have a job which I adore, writing is not a permanent job...a demanding one yet full of fun...writing is my stress buster and I will keep it that way.I don't chat much ,but I answer all of u no matter what and u know that.

I know ,I ramble a lot😆...Sorry...

but THANK YOU to ALL>>🤗

I've replied to all of you on Previous pages ...didn't leave anyone and If I did , just scrap me...please...

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For Sticking with me all the way to the end .These are who never leave a chance to click their presence and at the top some rewarded me with beautiful comments ever over this FF world...Thank You Dil see...

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#815

Thank you All dil se