#6:ArshiSS:Inciting Desires2/COMLETED:Ch17-18&Epilogue/NOTEPg131

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Rrpdxb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Congrats on the new thread.

Eagerly waiting for the next update. Such an interesting teaser

Edited by Rrpdxb - 9 years ago

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Congratzz on new thread di🤗

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Sorry my dearest friend...actually m fed up telling you sorry...your one of the most irregular reader...actually lots of issues keeping me busy and all...m too troubled in my self...

Today i got little bit time and catch up missed updates...m too irregular in IF so my presence as well... sorry again for late...

read all chapter 9-16...

huge twist and turn about the story already done...

i loved the mandir scene of arshi...

it was purely lovable...

arnav gifted khushi bangles and it reminds me our lovely IPK...

payal's engagement was so grand...

arshi spend lovely time before separation...

now come to the issues...

first of all arnav's family mishap...

it was really heart wrenching...

Thakur bloody bas***d ...

arnav's family undoubtedly suffered a lot...

now here little bit confuse...thakur's part already end??? but i think more left😕

then the most tragic separation...

arnav was too rude in his misconception...

he brutally hurt khushi...

my heart pained for khushi...

arnav's way of protecting khushi is just idiotic...

aww poor khushi met with an accident...

but arnav saved her...

khushi knew arnav loves her still...

but the hurt is not easy to heal...

Mr gupta have unbreakable trust in arnav...

he handled the situation very well...👏

i've one question in mind...

lots of things happened between arshi...

didn't anjali and nani questioned even once arnav?

they knows the love blooming between arshi...

then how come they kept mum???

oh khushi letter was so touchy...

i loved your skill on writing that letter...👍🏼

after that arnav realized his grave mistake...

adi a true friend and bro-in-law indeed...

i just love him the way he supported arshi...

then khushi and arnav in newyork...

here starts the main game winning back khushi...

khushi loves arnav more than anything else...

khushi's past really tragic too...

jpolo's act was a lovesick puppy...

he killed khushi's father ...made her orphan...

arnav got the whole truth out...

and met him...

Jpolo realized his mistake and repented...

his part now finish...

on the play arshi got married right? or just act...

every event evolves to reunite arshi...

so lovely that fights...

i loved their intimate moments...😳

waiting for their whole romance...😉

oh poor khushi so jealous of lavanya...

khushi is right...

arnav needs guts to claim her...and yes a proper confession from arnav...

mojo i love him always...

mrs gupta and payal so supportive towards khushi...

just enjoyed a lot while reading the updates...

m really sorry dear couldn't reply your scraps...really sorry dear...😭

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Hiii Faiqa! Been so long, but finally I have been able to comment!

Now, before I start in the story...congratulations on the new thread! You absolutely deserve it🥳

Now, I am so sorry I haven't been able to comment on the previous chapters, work has been hectic, and had missed so much, but I just could resist any longer.

The story has come so far, and so much has happened, but I am so glad it all turned out positive in the end with Arnav and Khushi.

I must say, you have given so much weight to every little detail, everything connecting their pasts and the present.

I was so glad that Arnav was finally able to take his revenge, but it broke my heart to see Khushi's state and when the six month leap came in, I was just so excited.

The office romance has been so lovely, and their encounters made me blush, it was all so cute!

Khushi's past does come as a big surprise, everything about her father and the don, JPalo, but so happy that her love was able to give her the strength to overcome the worst phase of her life, and start afresh!

The play was an amazing idea, and jealous Khushi, all too pleasing!

Now, looking forward for the Mr and Mrs Raizada romances desperately😉

The teaser was great too! Update soon!😳