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Posted: 19 years ago
thats nice if you want i can continue for you
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Posted: 19 years ago
jus read the fanfic!!!!!

AWESOME!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: angadandme

thats nice if you want i can continue for you

thanx

just read it😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

jus read the fanfic!!!!!

AWESOME!!!!!!!! 😳

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After breakfastAA-K set out to go to the nursery. When they go they r overwhelmed with joy to see lots oflil kids holding hands and doing a dance. Angad gos over to a boy who's sitting in the corner, alone.

Angad: Kya hua? um akele kyu?
Boy: I miss my mom
Angad: Aur woh kaha hai?
Boy: Pata nahin

Angad figured that he was also orphaned.

Angad: Koi baat nahin, mai tumhara saath khelunga
Boy: Ok the boy said happily

While they played Kripa went to see Jiya, the girl she sees everyday.


that's all
sorry it was short
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice continue soon it was short
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks for con. and it was awsome part con. soon 😛
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you're welocme but please con. soon 😆
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Jiya is happy to see Kripa.

Kripa: Kaise ho?

Jiya: Theek hu

Kripa gives Jiya chocolates and is happy to see Jiya happy. Angad and Kripa stay there for an hour and then leave. On the way Kripa goes to a room. A doctor is sitting there. She asks Agnad to wait outside and asks the doctor abt some things.

Kripa: Hi can u tell me where jiya was born?

Doctor: Well is there any reasong u wud like to know?

kripa: Well there is. I was thinking of adopting Jiya

Doctor: Well in that case i can give u a portfolio abt her

Kripa: Sure

The doctor goes over to a cabinet and takes out a folder. he hands it to Kripa. Kripa looks at it.

Description:

Jiya

birthplace: Mumbai

hospital: Khushi Hospital (i cudn't think of anything else, lol)

birthdate: 7/13

parents: unknown

places lived: Mary Orphanage

After she was done, she handed it to the doctor. She went outside to Angad, tears in ther eyes.

Angad: Y r u crying Kripa?

Kripa: Angad......Jiya.......

Angad: Ha? Jiya kaun?

Kripa: Woh choti ladki.....

Angad: Ha

Kripa: Woh humhari beti hai (quietly)

Angad is shocked to hear that.

Angad: Really Kripa? U mean it? (crying)

Kripa: Ha Angad (crying too)

Kripa: Come with me

She leads Angad back to the room they were in. She points to a girl wearing a white shirt and pink skirt, with a ponytail. She tells him that's their daughter. Angad smiles and hugs her.

Kripa: Hum usse ghar le ja sakti . We'll take her home Angad

They go to the doctor and take Jiya home.

In the car:

Jiya: Aunty hum kaha ja rehi hai?

Kripa: Beta......mai tumhari mom hu

Jiya: Aap meri mom hai? (surpised)

Kripa: Ha (crying)

Jiya: To aap mujhe chor kar kyu gayi thi?

Kripa: Woh beta mai.....

She cries and hugs Jiya. Angad looks at them and cries too.

When they arrive home dadi is surprised to find Jiya.

Dadi: yeh kaun hai?

Angad: Dadi......yeh humhari beti hai

Dadi: Kya??? Saach???

Angad: Ha

Dadi goes over, bends down, and hugs her granddaughter. Jiya hugs her back. Then Kripa and Angad show Jiya her room. It's all decorated with lots of stuffed animals and dolls. She thanks Angad and Kripa and hugs them. A-K hug her back.

End of ep.

-Marz

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Posted: 19 years ago

Today's ep:

Next day A-K take Jiya to a carnival. They go on rides and then eat cotton candy on the way home.

Kripa: Kaise thi beta?

Jiya: Bohot aache thi

In the car:

Kripa and Jiya r talking a lot and laughing. Angad is driving. When they stop at the red light, Angad looks out the window. There's a big traffic jam, and he suddenly notices Naina. She's in the car infront of him. He sees her through the mirror.

He gets irritated and puts his head bak in, hoping Naina doesn't see him.

Kripa: Kya hua Angad?

Angad: Kuch nehi

Kripa: Batao na

Angad: Nehi kuch nehi

Kripa: Theek hai

When they reach home they find Naina sitting on the couch, talking to dadi.

Angad: Aap yaha kya kar rehi hai?

Naina: Woh beta......

Angad: Wat r u doing here? Jao! Abhi! (shouting)

Naina: Woh beta mai tum dono se maafi magne aayi hu

Angad: Kyu? Aab maafi kyu?

Naina: I'm sorry beta, woh mai kripa ko bohot dard pauchaaya. I'm sorry Kripa. Mujhe maaf karo

Kripa: Woh....

Angad: Nehi

Sorry that's all for now.

-Marz

Edited by PopPrincess - 19 years ago

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