Longest hours-Armaan Riddhima OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET

Your way of writing is just fabulous out of the world

I really felt like i am watching a mini movie infront of me n all the characters all the feelings emotions n all the scenes are performing by actors itself

It's just Wowww

But i really felt that if u would have added more of AR side story i mean ridhima last breath scenes

Armaan scenes etc

It would have turned into one of the most awesomest o's

But still i love this

Keep writing more

Take care

Originally posted by: surjyotapa

You are an extremely talented writer!

When the first one gave me relief at the end, this one made me cry as I simply can't imagine them as dead.

Both the stories are great, but I am a bit partial to the first one as it is more intense and has a happy ending...

Thanks for the PM 😃

Originally posted by: phoo_honey

Thank you humera for the kind words and suggestions. Even I realized that AR scene were very little and I should have added more for them, that's why my next OS will be completely based on AR with their feelings and emotions. Thanks again for all the support you have given to me.

Originally posted by: kajenlife

meine blog mein padhi amazing concept loved it