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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

this one was quite depressing but loved the end...

you write beautiful!

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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surjyotapa

@surjyotapa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

You are an extremely talented writer!

When the first one gave me relief at the end, this one made me cry as I simply can't imagine them as dead.

Both the stories are great, but I am a bit partial to the first one as it is more intense and has a happy ending...

Thanks for the PM 😃

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surjyotapa

@surjyotapa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

You are an extremely talented writer!

When the first one gave me relief at the end, this one made me cry as I simply can't imagine them as dead.

Both the stories are great, but I am a bit partial to the first one as it is more intense and has a happy ending...

Thanks for the PM 😃

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: SGROVER_WINGET
Your way of writing is just fabulous out of the world
I really felt like i am watching a mini movie infront of me n all the characters all the feelings emotions n all the scenes are performing by actors itself
It's just Wowww
But i really felt that if u would have added more of AR side story i mean ridhima last breath scenes
Armaan scenes etc
It would have turned into one of the most awesomest o's
But still i love this
Keep writing more
Take care

Thank you humera for the kind words and suggestions. Even I realized that AR scene were very little and I should have added more for them, that's why my next OS will be completely based on AR with their feelings and emotions. Thanks again for all the support you have given to me.

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: surjyotapa
You are an extremely talented writer!
When the first one gave me relief at the end, this one made me cry as I simply can't imagine them as dead.
Both the stories are great, but I am a bit partial to the first one as it is more intense and has a happy ending...
Thanks for the PM 😃

Thank you very much surjotapa. I really appreciate your Views. I know this one was kinda sad maybe because my exams are around and I am really upset because of that. Everyone loves happy ending.

Anyways thank you once again for the support. I am really grateful for all the kind words.

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divya

@kajenlife

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

meine blog mein padhi amazing concept loved it

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Humera

@ITSABOUT_DMG

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: phoo_honey

Thank you humera for the kind words and suggestions. Even I realized that AR scene were very little and I should have added more for them, that's why my next OS will be completely based on AR with their feelings and emotions. Thanks again for all the support you have given to me.

Wowww another o's on the way

Eagerly waiting yaar

Post soon 😃

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Mysticriver nilusoni megbans prizi urvisaini

Thanks a lot guys for all the support. Thank you for your comments. I really appreciate it.

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sara

@phoo_honey

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: kajenlife
meine blog mein padhi amazing concept loved it

Thank you for your support. I post Longest hours OS on very Sunday on blog and repost it on Fridays on IF.

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palak sharma

@lashyyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

aww this is awesome one
you are a brilliant writer yaar
I loved the concept
sorry but hate the ending...
the first one i can attach fully but this one is like I can't connect to it
but may be next time I love ur story yaar
don't mind yaar
ur awesome