TaaRey FF:The Game Of Temptation.Chap 1 Pg-7/15th oct!

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Sona_loveVD
awesome updt
loved the chapter
updt soon

Thanks! Glad that you loved it :)

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: bluesky10
Awesome update dear
Taani splash cold water on his face
Awesome
Like how you showed their point of view
Thanks for the pm dear

POV was necessary here and my story will have POV of both the characters. Thanks tho 🤗

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Priyanka.saha
Great!!! what a full of MUs wala first meet
and there Taani insulted Rey
really Amazing work
now the asli game will begin

Hehe thanks. Game toh suru hua hai ;)

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: TR_lovebirds
Superb start...
Their first meet was not good...
This misunderstanding lead something big...
Well written...
Update soon...

Thank you so much. 😃

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Superb update
Taarey pov was awesome
Rey is something else lol he win three awards for cheating his way through class ;)
Oh no! Taani misunderstanding of Rey and throwing the drink in his face will cause her
I'm kinda scared for her now...

Cheating in A-level exams is Impossible but i don't know why I wrote that 🤣 I am scared for her too LOL Thanks alot Natasha 😳🤗

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Sneha2000
Awesome story 👏
First taarey meet wo nhi fighting wali
Taani was checking him
Awww she splashed juice on his face
Rey is scholar by cheating and bribing
Wooh Rey was lost seeing her like at first sigh or I should say love at first sight
Bechara Rey he didn't even got chance to prove himself innocent
By the way I loved that taani's dialogue "oye kamine"😆
Do send pms

Thanks 😆 Will send ;)