Arhi FF'Addicted to you' #2 COMPLETED FF - Note 25/10/16

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jasbin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

"I know. Now, give it some time for things to settle down, Arnav. And remember that you have to let go off the one you love. If she is meant to be, then she will always find a way to come back to you."

This lines took my breadth away

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john-angad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

arnav khushi sure went through hell and back to justify their teenage love!

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Today somehow I wished that Rohan understood Khushi like Shyam did too.

Did Arnav accept Shyam's request and go away?

Did Shyam and Anjali fall in love after meeting today?

Vannu, how much more of the flashback is left?

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

awesome glimpse into past

so it was shyam who gave the idea for Arnav to leave

n if they were made for each other they would come together again in future

where NO ONE could claim it wasn't love

loved how Shyams opinion n temperament changed when he saw Arnav he instantly knew Arnav was genuine

have feeling in present now that khushis father knows truth about how khushi feels about Arnav he should feel at least a bit sheepish for the past

poor Arnav wrecked his room at how angry he was

looking forward to next update

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

What a great confrontation between Arnav and Shyam. Shyam acted and talked wisely to him.

But my question is why Arnav took his time and in fact never tried to reunite with Khushi? Didn't he leave India to become empowered and independent in order to come back there for Khushi? Why it seems that he gave up on her completely until she sent her an e-mail to inform him about her upcoming trip to Spain?

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@ponderer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Vanhi dear ❤️..Its quite sad, isn't it? Everyone around them either trying to judge their feelings, make decisions on their behalf , get disappointed at them and what not without even hearing what they have to say. All this just because they are teenagers? It makes me ponder how i would react if my kids are in a situation like that😆, oh well.. there is a long time for me to worry about that but for now..I am glad that despite all the obstacles thrown their way, their love paved way for togetherness.
Like they say, Good things come to those who wait right?

P.S: If I were Khushi, I would want Arnav to show Karan his place. Yeah , I can be vindictive
😆😆😆

Edited by Wissensdurst - 10 years ago

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Oh my goodness!!! I have never read a story with such frenzy and eagerness to get through quickly till the end.. And all this while, how come I missed this story, is still a mystery for me!!! And I am still having a Khushi like O! And you know why? It is because I am sorry, but I am comparing Celestial Moon and Addicted to you! Not the genre or anything, but my love for both.. Like if you give me an option to choose between the both, then which one will I opt for? I am clueless! And I blame you for that!

So let me stop my rambling and get back to the finer details of this wonderful realistic tale.. Of course you have taken certain fiction liberties like all of us, but it still feels very realistic.. And I can surely imagine this happening to my friend and her lover! Or maybe to me, myself! I can see that your portrayal of Arnav and Khushi is very different and poignant.. We don't see that usually portrayed by Arshi.. There is something more to their characters.. It has many shades and layers.. And you are using it to your benefit by revealing that very slowly! I am giving full points to you for doing full justice to the plot and your characters.. And one thing I very keenly noticed was you have taken your story as a whole rather than the leads alone.. You have given equal importance to every character you have crafted.. And I love Shyam here.. he is such a positive influence for this story.. and not to forget Rohan! He does look like the bhaiyya everyone wants..yet I feel he has let her down most of the times, failing to understand her.. But I love his pair and I really like Lav..the friend I crave for! And Shashi reacted like every normal father... So I don't think there is much to blame him, except maybe even he didn't understand her in the later part of her life...

And I am still curious about Garima and Anjali... You haven't given much to ponder about them, except in few scenes.. Especially Anjali! I am looking forward for more...

And lastly I love how you have created a very beautiful story that has an intermix of the past and present without even confusing me.. And you made me look forward for both the present and past and ofc the future.. and yeah Karan doesn't seem as clever as he is.. And he is an arrogant foolish snob or so I feel!

Overall I am eager for more..!

Waiting to get addicted to intoxication,

$adh

Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

The backdrop story was the much needed input for us to tie some of the loose ends.

Shyam's attempt with Khushi might have backfired but I guess it turned out to be a blessing in disguise looking at the way matters ended with Arnav. For someone who went to give an earful, it's good to see he returned heart full. Good to see jo haal dil ka udhar ho raha tha, vo haal dil ka idhar bhee ho raha tha😃.

The brilliant Arnav/Shyam convo was the highlight of the chapter for me. The simple fact that love is nothing but infatuation that stands the test of time and situations, was wonderfully conveyed and looking at the end result, was correctly received. It was a revelation to know that Shyam could actually make Arnav see sense and also act sensibly on it. He could make Arnav acknowledge his love and convince him to fight for it rather than proving it others.

Overall, I think Shyam did what Rohan could not and that does explain the reason of things growing apart for Arnav and Rohan and also for Rohan and Khushi.

And thank you for your note of the next update being available only on September 28th. Please take care of what you need to and we shall wait patiently for the update Vanhi!!!🤗

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Diya Angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hey... am a dedicated reader of urs...loves every single piece of ur work... u are a blessed writer and nw this story is one of my fav... i have blookmarked this thread and checking for an update every timr i log in... pls update soon yaaraa

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akai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

today I read all the chapters dear. I'm really speechless or happy should be an understatement.

I don't what to say or what to write.

You have magic in your hand that bring people who are reading in to your story.

I thought it was a normal teenage love story but it is not all even near to normal.

Gosh, I love this arnav. I can't really see the torment in his eyes whenever he was hurt but he was managed to mask it in sarcastic way even in childhood.

Kushi can't blame her too. How much could a 15 yr old think beyond her parents.

Shyam is super cool here.

Lavanya and rohan is really a nice pair. Lavanya is a good friend to Kushi first.

I really loved when arnav bluntly made sure to show his world to her. She should know what his life is.

He is like this always not beating around bush.

It was really a sight to watch when arnav dad and sister was in door step of arnav apartment and the warning he throwed her way not to hurt is son.

Each character has its own place in this ff.

I'm just waiting for arnav and Kushi to come down to India to show the karan his place.

Waiting for the update.

I'm in really love with the story and writer too.