Arhi FF'Addicted to you' #2 COMPLETED FF - Note 25/10/16 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Vanhi.. This is such a beautiful story. I'm so glad i got to read this. I'm half of the way and still have to read 15 more chapters to reach the current track. I'm loving this..

I'm literally fangirling over your Miguel Arnav Salazar. Thanks for the beautiful love story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Finally I caught up with last couple of updates. Wow, it feels very good to see Shyam as an intelligent, sensible and doting brother to Kushi. Anjali and Shyam first encounter and their first phone conversation is very cute with war of words. They both are loving sister and brother to their respective cousins. I guess with this common interest they came together later? First time I am waiting for Anjali-Shyam story to unfold in arshi world 😆.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Well I had this very strange wish to see Anjali and Shyam's st!!y, the very moment I had read about Shyam.. you know my over active brain started linking both brother and sister (cousins)! So, this chapter gave the necessary first meet and Conversation.. this is a real new type of Anjali for me.. *sigh* your every character is new and interesting and has made a very special impact in my heart.. so all credits to you!!!

As such it was what? A clash of words? Whoa.. that was a bang on first conversation.. Okay I am.seriously looking forward for their story and progress.. hope to see them soon!!! Their love for their respective siblings will tie them together I guess.. I was the one who was bugging you about Anjali's role in the story.. now that you have started it.. I can't wait for more!


Addicted to your story,
$@dh!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such an amazing story..
looking forward to read further

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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go,, loved all the chapters so far,, looking forward to read more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyR

Shyam is the real hero of your story.. I hope its love with Anajli and not just a friendship !! he really went above and beyond for Khuhsi and Arnav ..



I love it when the secondary characters as much positive response and loving as the primary one does. That is the real treat for any writer!!! Thank you, Seeta Di, for such lovely words about Shyam. I find it difficulty in remembering that ATY is Arnav and Khushi and not Shyam and Anjali
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

I love this passionate Shyam.

Whether its his affection for his cousin sister or his love for agriculture or maintaining friendship, this guy does it with passion.

If Arnav is a very passionate guy in this story, Shyam's passion is a whole different kind.

Vannu, thanks for showing us the different faces of passion right in one story.


Did he and Anjali have a passionate love story too??? I hope they did and I want to read about them.


Such a passionate comment about types of passions!!!! You're one passionate reader, are you not, K?

I'm overwhelmed for being able to create a positive response for Shyam Babua. Poor soul must be rotting in hell for all the hatred we fangirls have for him. And I'm happy we're changing that equation with ATY. I'm Addicted to SJ, bas!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

Sibling bond has a funny way of protecting the bonds. If Shyam thought that he is the only one expressing and acting on those bonds, then he sure got a pleasant shock. Anjali turned out to be stronger ally for Arnav than Shyam had ever imagined and I should say, made him question himself.

But, more than his questions, his wandering thoughts is what caught my attention the most. Some thoughts are hard to stay away from all life. With the truce and phone exchange, looks like Shyam has added more things to his already busy mind.

And yes before I forget, what a convo between Vicky and Shyam! If only Vicky knew what's running in Shyam's busy head and that he'd fallen hard for a girl named Anjali. Obviously, the weeds were no match😉.

You know how to set our sights for the next😃. With the bomb of a call from Anjali, her accusations, and the desperation in her voice, Shyam is not the only one waiting anxiously for their meet at the gate.



Mind and heart do shake hands when it comes to love.. though these sort of moments are rare. For a man who loved his weeds, it's a pleasant shock to have finally meet his match... That's bound to happen, isn't it???

MD, I love your insights.. Did I ever mention you??? No??? Now, I did..

I just love you... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

Hey Vani,

I loved the way you presented the perception of teenage love by the members of family and society. How many take their emotions seriously ? Not lot of parents take them in a positive way. Most common is of Khushi's parents, sending their daughter away, or like Mr. Raizada, trying to protect but may be not really making them understand your point. But then, how many teenage lovers and certain about their affections as Khushi and Arnav are ? How will or can anyone differentiate them from those who stand on their emotion by naming it as love because they are being opposed, and all they want is to prove them wrong. I strongly liked Shyam's perception, not to judge them right or wrong, not to prove to anyone their love, but all he wanted was let time decide their extent of affection to themselves and other and make their career and life in the meantime, where they will be independent and in a position to tell parents of their choices and seek their blessings. I liked the way he took the initiative to explain Arnav the situation, not to make life difficult for himself and Khushi. Pining for each other and ignoring every one and everything would not take him anywhere.

As per Shyam and Anjali, I am looking forward to see what turn their meetings and working together for their cousins brought in their lives.



You summed up all the thoughts I had while working on this FF's plot. These were the very lines that I had, and wanted to have in this story. To show the depths of affection two teenagers had who accidentally stumped onto true love at a tender age and the differential opinions/perspectives of their families, of people same age and of the society and its influence. To have a friend, cousin like Shyam is a blessing. Those who are impassive to emotions are the very those who could love, understand and support within the depths of equal measure, isn't it?

Shyam and Anjali -- all I can say is for a man with a conscious mind, she is the perfect counterpart to bring in the fun side of life without never judging him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ah my Sunday is made!
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Your chutki can.be highly bad and ruthless.. I am.sorry for editing this late..it was not my intention..


Okay so now we really see how Anjali did play her role in this story of addiction. I am really glad. She had so much to do. Ah this looks so ajeeb. It reminded me of hrithik from Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Gham.. you know when he enters the Chandi Chowk Market.. kinda similar reaction..


But truthfully speaking,this is the first story, that has ever made me fall in love with Anjali and Shyam's story, equally. I loved this story to bits and I am really enjoying it...especially the sarcastic humor that is underlying in your writing.. like for example, you can speak you know.. I mean it is very difficult to write it.. but you carry it off seamlessly..


I am now moving on to the next chapter.


Teri,
Chutki
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