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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pink sky

awesome up till now, you should have made the night a bit more romantic (The apartment where kripa and angad slept for one night) it was very stagnate just like a normal scene

didn't get what does 18er mean

the spelling of few words:

lave-leave

khannah-khanna

noi-no

ahvent-have not

I am sorry if you are hurt in any way

thanks for the suggestions and theres no need to be sorry id prefer u tell me my mistakes u no on the comp i type really fast so i normally miss out letters and anotha thing i use alot of slang like l8ers means later and another bad thing i neva proofcheck😕but ill try my best to proofcheck and use less slang in the next part😛and thanks for ur comment

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mitali_s

awsum part 😛 😛 😛
very funny.superstar driving a taxi... 😉

thanks😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

awsome part shaz! u rocked 😛 👏 👏

thanks laiba😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏

thanks😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 6

sorry for the delay

angad starts driving,on the way kripa is feeling sleepy and her head is paining abit,angad switches on the cassette blast volume

The song came

dil deewana kehta hai tu pyar kar

ja kisi ladki ke jakkar izhar kar……………..

angad-old but its ok

he puts it on louder

kripa-angad can u switch it off I got a blimin headache

angad-so

kripa-ahh(touches her head)ok (calmer)angad pls tape band karo pls

angad-(makes a face)tik hai(angry)

kripa starts laughing

angad-tum mughpar kyon hasri ho

kripa-ur so cute when ure angry

angad-really

kripa-yes really

angad-well lets see how cute u are when ure angry

he kisses her so she gets angry but also for his satisfacation,he doesn't know why but he had a weir urge to kiss kripa and he got the best excuse to kiss her too,while angad aparts kripa is fuming in anger

kripa-ANGAD KHANNAH HOW DARE YOU….

angad-(pulls her cheeks)ure so cute when ure angry

kripa looks at him annoyingly,angad has a weird challenge in his head to make kripa smile

angad-so kripa u not gonna laugh,ure gonna laugh,do is ee a smile,a smile, comeon kripa ok imagine me as a clown

kripa cudnt help but break in to a wide smile thinking of angd as a clown,like that the journey goes on ad in the evening the car stops(surprise surprise lol)

kripa-kya hua

angad-looks like petrols finished ill go check if theres any in da back

he goes and cums back

angad-kripa theres no petrol

kripa-crap ab kya

angad-looks like well have to stay in the car

kripa-no ways and u call this a car it's a taxi im not staying in da car all night lok theres a house there well go ask them for help

angad-ok as u say

they go to the large house and nock on the door an old lady opens the door

oldlady-jee

kripa-aunty hamari gari kharab hogayi,cud u let us stay here tonigh cuz we cant get petrol at this time of night from anywere

oldlady-sure u can,r u the actors off the tv

kripa/angad-yeah

oldlady-omg I luv u 2 ok cum in both of u

they go in and see a whole family there,a dada ,a dadi,nana ,nani theyre whole bunch

dada-angad khannah and kripa shara wow I ehard bout u two in the magazine ure oing out right

kripa-vo vo

aunty-obviuosly I don't let tat many people in but In the magazine everyones saying that they luv eachother but cant be together cuz theyre mom and dad wont agree and me a true believer in love cant le them suffer,if it was anyone else I wudnt let them cum in my house,but these 2 r in love right

angad/kripa-ha

uncle-so tum dono kya apne ma baap se bhag kar aye ho

angad-ha

kripa-na

uncle-huh

angad-well weve runaway but her family is aware of it so technecially we didn't run away

kripa-(confused)ha vahi jo angad ne kaha

auntie-well u two have cm at te right time tomorrow is my sons engagement

angad-lekin auntie hum dono ko kal nikalna hai

aunty-no excuses tum aunty bulata ho aur aunty ki baat nahi manoge tum kaha no kripa angad se

kripa-ha boldo angad

angad-tik hai

auntie-vaah yehi ko kehte hai pyar

the auntie gives them both a separate room

12.00 midnight

angad sroom is next to kripas so he sneaks in,he taps kripa,she gets up with a startle and is about to scream when angad covers her mouth

angad—shhhh its me angad

kripa-(puts her lamp on)angad what the hell u doing here

angad-kripa wta r we gonna do

kripa-wat do u mean

angad-we need to go

kripa-why

angad-matlab u wanna stay for the engagement

kripa-of course aunty asked so nicely

angad-fine vaise kripa ure looking really cute can I get a kiss

kripa-angad get out

angad-a peck

kripa-out!

angad-ok shh can I have a hug

kripa-angad khannah get the hell outta here

angad-fine(quickly pecks her cheeks and runs off)

kripa-(thinks)stupid duffer but hes so cute omg I so did not say that gosh mein bhi na kya anab sharab kehti rehti hoon

the next morning kripa akes up to find girls crowded round her

kripa-wat the hell

the girls give her a lehena and chuck her in the bathroom and tell her to get dressed,same thing happen to angad they force him to wear a sherwarni,ak r confused but think tis for the engagement

they cum to the engagement

Angads wearing this

kripas wearing this

anagd cant stop looking at kripa

auntie-ladies and gentlemen today si my son nishant kapoor and kanan virani soon to be mrs kanan kapoor engagement so will they pls cum here

kanan and nishant both go to there auntie,they exchange rings everyone claps

auntie-angad aur kirpa tum dono yaha ao

angad-hum

kripa-u sure

uncle-jao bache

the auntie hands them a ring each

kripa-auntie yeh sab

auntie-yesterday nishant went to put petrol in te car and u mustve dropeed ur shadddi ka joda there

kripa-oh yea

auntie-and then I realised that u two haven't rn away to be together but to get married so I thought why not I fulfil ur dream 4 u

kripa-wat no

auntie-I knew ud say no need tot ake the hassle but consider u like a beti so comeon pls

angad-auntie hum kaise

uncle-comeon bache log pls

will angad and kripa get engaged?????????????????????

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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part shaz😃 rocking poor angu nd krips 😆 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!! will they get engage...hmm....hell ya 😆 ..lol...cont soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
hahaha shaz sis that was amazing...poor ur angad n kripa!!cont soon

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