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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Interesting and intense prologue dear...start soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Wow. That's all I can say right now. Your writing is really good. Wow, I'm jealous and a bit nervous cause you actually like my work. Weird, you shouldn't.
But really though, I like this one. It has caught my undivided attention as you can see. So you better continue this. I don't want to come up with any theories right now, of anything - whether he is the villain or not. As of now, I will just look forward to the upcoming chapters that will answer my questions. In other words, I loved it.

-Sanaya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Wonderful prologue.. loved it.. Khushi is in so much pain and why Arnav is behaving as if he loves only Khushi and there is nobody else for him.. and what is Khushi planning to do?? interesting.. do continue soon.. best wishes and happy writing One Last Time.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊




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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
wow ...
'i just loved it...
plz plz plzzz...update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
something different nice start update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
I personally love stories that have a dark sad starting with lots of hot romance and after reading the prologue, I guess I will be one of the regular readers of the story... update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Very very interesting my dear...
The concept is just awesome!
N arnav don't have a clue of y she might be upset?!
Is there any possible misunderstanding between them or someone playing this...?!
Too curious to read...
Plz make the updates twice a week n pm me for future updates plz...
I can't send buddy requests... So I just hope u do it n pm me for updates!
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
seems like arnav has no clue abt his marriage with lavanna...
looking forward..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Loved it..!! :-)
please pm me on update..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Very nice start dear...loved it

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