FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 69

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Hi dear...awesome updates...thanks for the pm
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I am so happy that you liked that episode...even I liked the episode a lot...spl the way Rajveer looked at Naina and his singing as well...but tumhari antakshari original one se bhi jyada achi thi...and plz don't thank me dear...dosti me no sorry and so thank you!!!


Love you loads! 😳 Glad you liked my antakshari part too 😊
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Hi dear...awesome updates...thanks for the pm

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Closing the door behind him, Bunty gets into the room after Captain Rajveer. Captain Rajveer, unlocks his cupboard and unlocks the locker inside his cupboard with the help of a key which he brings out of a flower jar, kept on the side table. Bunty helps him with the light. Unlocking the cupboard, he brings out a red box. Opening the box he reveals a small golden colored key.

Looking at it, he thinks for sometime, then picks it up and unlocks the drawer of the right side of the cupboard and brings out a box. As he opens the box, it reveals seven triggers. Bunty looks into the box in awe! "Triggers!" "Ye koi aise-waise triggers nahi hai Bunty, ye duniya ke saat (7) behtareen triggers hain" "Aur yein...", he points towards each bullet placed under each trigger, "ye hain wo bullets jo inn mein use kiye jaate hain". Then walking forward, he explains, "inko sub soldiers pana chahte hain!" "To Sir kya wo khareed nahi sakte?" Shaking his head, Captain Rajveer explains, "Nahi Bunty! Inhe khareedne ke liye aur apne paas rakhne ke liye special permission ki zarurat hoti hai, jo subko nahi di jaati" "Fir apke paas ye kaise?" Smiling, Captain Rajveer says, "Brigadier Chandok ne diye hain, bohot bharosa karke mujh par" "Maine to apko unse iss barey mein baat karte hue nahi suna kabhi!" "Hum iss barey mein ek dusre se baat nahi karte. I mean at least verbally nahi" "To fir?" He hands over Bunty, a sheet. "Ye to khali hai". Smiling he says, "dhyan se dekho". He tries again to read it, failing to read it again, he says, "Haan Sir kuch nahi likha". Smiling Captain Rajveer brings out a blue laser light and flashes on it, now everything becomes clearly visible. It reads :

"Captain iss box mein seven toffees hain. Each has a unique taste. Handle and use it with care"

"Hmm... toffees yani triggers! Right?" remarks Bunty with a smile on his face. Smiling, as a gesture of 'yes', Captain Rajveer takes the paper and the light back from him and place them safely back into the red box. "Exactly!" "Hmm... Chaliye Sir main apse baad mein baat karta hun, Brigadier Chandok keh rahe the kuch kaam hai, maine kaha tha thodi der mein aata hun. To ab chalta hun main". Nodding, Captain Rajveer says, "Theek hai!"

After he leaves, Captain Rajveer was about to leave the room too, when Naina comes to his room. Due to darkness, she is not fully visible, but for Rajveer, light isn't required to recognize Naina, especially when the first meeting with her was in the same circumstances. "Cadet Singh, aap yahan?" "Ahmm... aap wahan subke saath nahi the, to socha dekhun aap kahan ho" "Kyun kuch baat karni thi?" he asks to tease her. "Ahmm... actually haan". Not expecting such an answer from her, makes him to crease his brows, "haan bolo, kya baat hai?" "Sir actually wo..." as she was about to continue, she asks, "Pehle aap please kisi tarah thoda light flash kar sakte hain? I mean candle or something?" "Yes sure".

He goes towards a corner table, searching candle and match box. Placing the candle on the center table, around the sitting area, he ignites it, and asks while igniting it, "par candle kyun?" He smiles and says simultaneously, "aap aise bhi to bol sakti hain" then he whispers, "tab bhi to bola tha!" Understanding what he means, she looks at him who is busy collecting candle and matchbox and blushes. "Taki main apke expressions dekh sakun! Apke reactions!" as she ends up saying this, they both stare each other, together, in the candle light. (Rajveer-Naina tune starts). "Alright Naina dekho mere expressions ko!", smiles Rajveer. Naina lowers her eyes out of shyness. Looking elsewhere, feeling shy himself Rajveer says, "I... mean... batao kya baat karni hai tumhe?"

Naina waits for sometime and thinks, should she ask or not. "Aap mujhse promise kijiye ki aap mana nahi karenge!" Creasing his brows, then relaxing,"Mera jawab tumhare sawaal par depend karega Naina. Pucho!" he says casually. Unable to resist any longer, she shoots, "Ye Point 1857 kya hai? Main uske barey mein janna chahti hun" Hearing 'Point 1857' from Naina's voice makes him go numb. Naina could feel the change in the temperature of the room, only she fails to understand is that, it isn't fear or terror that Rajveer is feeling, but blush and happiness, that brought the increase in the temperature of the room.

*****

"Point 1857? Ye tumne kahan suna?" asks Rajveer, all serious, looking into her eyes. "Bhaiya ki diary mein read kia tha" answers Naina, trying to judge his mood, by noticing his expression. "Kya hai ye Point 1857 Sir? Bhaiya ki diary mein itni baar ye mentioned hai, zarur kuch important hoga. Main itne dino se purey academy mein chaanbeen kar rahi hun, par kisi ko kuch pata hi nahi". Thinking about what she has read in the diary, she says, "Bhaiya ne likha tha 'it's a very nice place!' Well agar bhaiya ko pata tha, to I am sure apko bhi pata hoga. Ahmm... kya aap mujhey wahan le jayenge?" she asks feeling hesitant.

As she speaks the last line, he turns to look into her eyes. It wasn't anger in his eyes but something else! He stares her. "Please Sir! Mujhey jana hai", although nervous, but she asks him any how, with only a little smile on her lips. She tries to anticipate, which way will this request take his mood - left towards 'anger' or right towards 'fine' or slightly left towards 'I will think about it!' What she wants is, if not towards right, but at least towards 'slightly left', but definitely NOT towards 'left'.

Anyways, if not 'Rajveer' but 'Captain Rajveer' has already taken the decision. "Nahi! Main tumhe wahan lekar nahi jaunga. Tum wahan nahi ja sakti", he bends to blow the candle but Naina places her right hand over the candle flame, refraining him from doing so. "Lekin kyun Sir?" she asks, annoyed, creasing her brows. "Kaha na maine tumse, ki tum wahan nahi ja sakti!"he scolds her mildly. "Tumhe samjh nahi aata hai?" he pushes her hand away, saving her from getting hurt. "Lekin main wahan jana chahti hun Sir! Akhir wahan aisa kya hai?" Rajveer raises his voice, pointing his both hands, vertically towards her, and says, "Kyunki...". Then sighing and putting his hands down, he continues "Kyunki wo jagah bohot hi secret hai, bohot hi secret hai! Wahan ke apne kuch rules hain, kuch conditions hain, jo wahan jaane wale har Cadet ko puri karni padhti hai. So you see it's not, possible" he says it all in a single breath. "Main bhi to KMA ki Cadet hun! Main saari conditions puri karne ko tayar hun" says Naina, ever so sweetly, like a college girl, eager to follow all rules and conditions, if all that fulfill her motive to visit a place, she wants to visit.

Determined to challenge her, Rajveer says, with a pinch of anger in his voice "to theek hai suno..."

1. "Uss jagah par din mein nahi ja sakte"

2. "Wahan sirf raat mein, chaand niklne ke baad jaya jata hai"

Naina pays attention to his each word, her expression, all serious.
"So you see it's not possible" says Rajveer, although clearly, but somewhere deep inside his heart, he wants her to take up the challenge and fulfill all the conditions, not for herself, not for him, but for them! Waiting for a few seconds, he turns to leave, suddenly Naina says, "Okay Sir, fir hum light out se pehle chalenge! See you!" saying this she walks to leave, but Rajveer calls her from behind, "a listen!", she turns to reach him again. "Wahan kisi bhi naye Cadet ko jaane ke liye, ek dress code ko follow karna parhta hai. You just can't go like this. You got to dress up in something new! Koi nayi dress! Stylish si! Jo tumhare paas nahi hogi!" he says, creasing his brows while speaking the last line. He challenges her, then waits for her to react. He notices that she is thinking, and is a little bit disheartened. He adds, "nahi hai na?", although he knows that he'll get a 'no' as an answer to his question, but secretly he wishes for a 'yes', 'yes that she has!'

Naina staring at the floor, thinks. Rajveer stares towards the miserable Naina, with a pinch of smile on his lips, not as a means of making fun, but enjoying a new emotion he is witnessing of Naina's, confused Naina and although not admitting himself too, but enjoying the new emotion of his too!

"So you see Cadet, agar ek bhi condition puri nahi hui", then shaking his head from left to right, then back again, repeating it for sometime, he says "to wahan entry nahi milti. I said, it's not all that easy". Smiling, as if feeling victorious, he turns and starts walking, when Naina says from behind, "Order ki jiye Sir!" Without turning to look at her, Rajveer slightly turns his neck towards left and creases his brows. Naina completes her line, "mujhey kahan, aur kitne hours par report karna hai". (Rajveer-Naina tune starts) Rajveer closes his eyes and sighs audibly, then turns to look at her. Naina smiles, Rajveer notices her determination in her eyes and shakes his head indicating, 'tum pagal ho aur mujhey bhi pagal kar dogi!'. Then holding his waist from either side, he sighs and says, "See you at 1900 hours" then he turns to leave, when Naina bends her neck a little to her left and says, "See!" Rajveer turns to look at her, "it is possible!" and smiles. Looking towards his left, Rajveer thinks for sometime, then looks towards the smiling and happy Naina. Naina bends her neck a little and says, "Thank you! Ahmm... see you!" with a heart filled with happiness, joy and something else, Naina leaves. Turning back Rajveer looks heavenwards then looking in front of him, he says "Point 1857!" Then thinks for sometime, with a little smile on his face, he shakes his head a little, creasing his eyes he says, "Nahi aayegi!"
Then smiles, admitting secretly that he'll still wait for her!

After few hours, the electricity returns, feeling too tired, they all sleep.

****

Next morning, all the first year cadets gather in an open field for attending Suriji's class. Suriji gives them lecture, "Sipahi ko jung mein apne josh ke saath-saath apni sochne ki shakti aur gola-barud ko aakhir tak bacha kar rakhna chahiye. Aur sipahi ke liye, ye janna bohot hi zaruri hai ki kab apni taaqat ka ussey sahi istemal karna hai. Koi shaq?"

Huda, looking towards Dr. Mishra, who is approaching them from right side says, "Matlab, Sirji jab banduk se kaam chalta hai to, taup nahi chalani hai!" Walking towards him Suriji says, "Correct Cadet Huda, aur...", reaching him, he grabs his face and forces him to look in front, instead of staring at Dr. Mishra and says, "nazar sirf nishane pe hona chahiye, samjhiyo?" Feeling embarrassed, Huda looks towards the ground. Naina shakes her head and smiles.

Dr. Mishra reaches them, wearing a dark green saree, smiling she says, "Suriji, lagta hai Cadet Huda ka mann nahi hai aaj class attend karne mein""Madam ji, ab tak to tha par ab lag raha hai dhyan bhatak raha hai..." flirts Huda. "Cadet Huda, khamosh honge aap" scolds Suriji. Smiling Dr. Mishra says, "It's, it's okay Suriji. Well main free thi, apne room se aap logo ko dekha, to socha yahan aakar aap logo ko dekhlun" "Madam ji apko yahan aane ki kya zarurat thi, bekar mein itni mehnat ki. Humein bula letin, hum aa jate apse milne" "Yes, I guess you are right Cadet Huda but agar aap atey to mujhey nature ke beech kuch pal bitane ka bahana nahi milta" "Arey aap kehke to dekho, ye Huda hai na apko ghumane ke liye" says Huda pointing his thumb towards himself. Smiling Dr. Mishra says, "Well Cadet Huda ye to future hi batayega ki kon kisko ghumata hai". Her voice reflects a challenge,only no one understands that it wasn't a challenge to Huda only! Clearing her throat, she says "Filhal to main wahan jana pasand karungi" she points towards the bench placed in front of them. Smiling, she walks to the bench and sits.

Pooja asks Suriji, "Sir! Humein firse bandook chalani hogi kya?" "Cadet Ghai, bandook sipahi ka hatiyar nahi hoti hai, wo sipahi ka haath hoti hai, aur tumhe jaldi se jaldi iski aadat dalni padegi, okay!" Walking forward, Suriji says, "Waise, aaj ke test mein na koi ladayi hogi, na koi jung hogi. Apni soojh-boojh se apko apne rasad aur rasaale ko akhir tak bachate hue, iss mission mein kamyab hona hai. Koi shaq?" "No Sir!" all the cadets answer in unison.

After sometime, Dr. Mishra gets up to leave, "Madamji puri class to attend karlo" says Huda."Cadet Huda you are learning about 'Scavenger hunt' right now. In this task, you are given a list defining specific items, which you, along with your team members are going to gather. The one who completes the task in the given time period or in the lowest time period, shall win!" "Need I have to describe more?" asks Dr. Mishra, smiling yet challenging Huda. All the other cadets present there, smirk silently. After giving a last look to Huda, she turns and leaves.

*****

After sometime, Naina walks towards Rajveer's room, but finds him in the middle of the corridor. They both look at each other and smile, "Ahmm... apko yaad hai na Sir?" asks Naina.Behaving oblivious to what she is talking about, he asks her, creasing his brows "Kya Cadet Singh?" Staring him, understanding that he is playing games with her, she says it clearly, "apne kaha tha aap mujhey le jayenge!" "Kahan?" he teases her a little longer."Aap..."

Suddenly Major Nayyer reaches the main hall of KMA and announces on the mic, "All first year cadets are required to assemble here, right now!" Rajveer and Naina turn to look at each other. Smiling, Rajveer says, "filhal to main apko wahan tak le jaunga", he points towards the main hall with his hand, as a gesture of asking her to move forth, Captain Rajveer follows.
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arre wah Ria darling!!! Kya baat hai...Aj to do do update ek sath...ek pe ek free...!!!! Aur dono hi updates pataka hai...Raj to Naina se flirt karne ka koi mauka nahi chodta...hehehe...mast likhti Ho yaar tum...ab ye Naina Rajveer Ki nokjhok dekhne me maja ayega...

Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
abhi abhi up to 150 episodes dekhe lrl ke, lekin i like your story much more, bcoz its a love story 😛 aur udhar wo sirf apne bhaiya k katil ko hi dhundhne me lagi hai.. Plz update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: m.bahety

Arre wah Ria darling!!! Kya baat hai...Aj to do do update ek sath...ek pe ek free...!!!! Aur dono hi updates pataka hai...Raj to Naina se flirt karne ka koi mauka nahi chodta...hehehe...mast likhti Ho yaar tum...ab ye Naina Rajveer Ki nokjhok dekhne me maja ayega...

Plz continue soon...


Yes 😉 hahaha pataka 😉😛 Thank you sweety 😳 mere hotey hue kaise chor sakta hai mauka Rajveer 😉 I shall take good care of it ki future mein bhi usse mauke milte rahey 😆 Thank you so much Megha for the appreciation 😳 Haan koshish karungi ki achey scenes dun future mein bhi Rajveer-Naina ke. 😳❤️ Will continue soon! 😊
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Originally posted by: fym23

abhi abhi up to 150 episodes dekhe lrl ke, lekin i like your story much more, bcoz its a love story 😛 aur udhar wo sirf apne bhaiya k katil ko hi dhundhne me lagi hai.. Plz update soon.


Ohhh I am glad to know that you like my story more. Hahaha Yes it was all about searching the culprit and I am focusing on Rajveer-Naina's relationship. 😊 Will update soon ! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
read all the parts superb work ria
raj naina ki chemistry wow simply awesome fantastic
cont soon
thanks for pm


love naina

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