FF: RAJVEER AND NAINA : THE MYSTERY BEGINS updated Pg159 - Page 48

Originally posted by: m.bahety

Cute beginning Ria!! Acha Hua Ki tumne Huda ko uss Dr Mishra ke sath dance karaya...pure time unn dono ko sath rakhna...haye dying to watch RN dance..and ha ab to Naina ko mere Raj pe trust Karana yaar...ek secret bat bolu..i just love your IF wala pro pic...ye camp wale moments were one of my most favourite moments of LRL dear...

Plz continue soon...See I am first one to comment and like ur update

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Ahhh! Huda and Ritu -- kya jodi set ki hai ! Thats the best part about this update so far ( I know a bigger and better part is coming soon ;) ) They are the only two people on the show, who had irritated me to the core ! Unlike many I could never end up liking Huda, that is until Raj's exit :( Same goes for Dr. Mishra and I feel the CVs had wasted a lot of the precious time in unnecessarily trying to hook up Ritu to Rajveer bcoz right since the begining RN had some serious currents flowing between them effortlessly ! They should have realised this much before and taken up the RN love track much before.. Thus slowly and steadily we could have seen a perfect culmination before Raj's contract ended after season 1. Kuchh parts ko unnecessarily drag nahi kiya hota toh, RN could have been in a different juncture altogether !! :(

Anyways I have ranted enough ! Your fanfic is truly the alternate LRL or what LRL could have been.. :) Beautiful yet believable.. Continue with the rest of it soon :)

Originally posted by: terrifictanzy

Awesomee !! Waah app ki soch 😉 huda and ritu best 😆 un dono ko sath rakho or raj or naina ko 😆 Alaawww !!! Next bby ??

Originally posted by: kajalkalwani

Hahaha nice update huda n ritu. Dey shuld be paired up. Ur updates r ssrly amazing. I always wait fr ur update to come n check it every 1 hr. Amazing writer u r. Even ur kaya os is amazing

Originally posted by: Sterolinelover

Hahaha! Thank u thank u for liking HUTU (Huda + Ritu 😆) I wish it could be HUTUTU 😆😆 Yes ' ye to trailer hai, picture to abhi baki hai mere dost' 😉 Lolz... really, they irritated you? Well revealing a little truth here, I don't know why I have loved the vamps of both LRL and REPORTERS 😉 Both of Ritu and Shreya had their own individual charms. I used to love watching them portraying their roles perfectly, but simultaneously I used to hate them of course because they were the reasons that our LOVE BIRDS were not together! 😡😡 Please I hope no one out there wanna throw jootey-chappals on me after reading this 😉

Damn correct about the hook up thing I swear whenever I think about this, or watch LRL I really say 'what a waste of time it was'. They could have shown Ritu falling for Rajveer, but Rajveer not interested. But I don't understand why they showed it both ways! Then suddenly he started feeling for Naina, although if I am not wrong so Ritu was still there in KMA. Remember that mentor ship program, I am talking about KEECHAD WALA scene here (my dp) During that time Ritu was interested in him, but suddenly for Rajveer it was all about Naina! When did Ritu vanish from his life and why? If I am wrong at putting this point, please feel free to correct me! 😊 Yes I wonder why they didn't take RN track before, I mean really if they knew that they gonna show Rajveer-Naina together so why putting Ritu and Huda in between unnecessarily? And even they had why was there a need to stretch it this much. One more thing, since we have starting discussing this I would like to add you remember THE POINT 1857? I mean of course you remember no doubt! 😉 Who among LRL fan would ever forget THE ONLY romantic (which was not wholly romantic 😉) scene between Rajveer-Naina. Well coming to the point here I wanna share my thinking about it, if you remember they shouted Rajveer- Naina in the open air, out there and then suddenly after giving a commercial break, they were in KMA. I felt it weird, seriously. I wanted them to show a bit more, like how they returned back to KMA. But they didn't! It kind of broke my heart. 💔 I truly am in favor to your each word about LRL. 😊

Thank you again. Thank you so much. It was a dream to view love story in LRL, but it ended before it even got started. So when I started writing I decided I'll keep Rajveer and Naina the main theme of the story and won't drift from it. I hope I am able to bring to you a proper story on Rajveer-Naina. 😊

Originally posted by: BedouinMe

Well, first of all let me clear a few things about me.. Bcoz that will be important to consider when you read the rest of it ;)

I was 12 when LRL happened. And thats the only time I have watched the show :( I couldnt catch it up on Youtube later on.. Have still not been able to.. May be someday I will.. I earnestly want to !!!

Ok, so from the perspective of a 12 yr old girl, I always felt that actual "dil ka rishta" was only building up between RN ! Rajveer might have been attracted to Ritu and also the other way round.. There efforts towards a relationship were very conscious. There's could have been an easy relationship ! Two goodlooking people belonging to the same rank in the academy would have made for a seemingly ideal couple.. But, subconsciously, quite unknown to his own self, Rajveer had grown a protective instinct towards Naina which quite slowly and steadily blossomed into love ! Remember the fresher's ball ? Where Huda played a prank and Raj had to dance on a bollywood number ? Out of excitement, he had dragged Naina to the dance floor by sheer reflex. The way he appreciated Naina's looks, come on, they were not just a teacher's words of appreciation ! His eyes had beamed with admiration ! :)

About the Ritu thingy, it seemed that everyone around was trying to impose her on him ! He was never very comfortable with her.. When she had got drunk after the Fresher's ball and was trying to get cozy, he felt so embarassed ! Well, it was the same Rajveer who gave those smouldering looks to Naina, after the Keechad wala scene ! Oh goodness ! It still passes a shiver down my spine when I watch the VMs !!!

I think the CVs were somehow a bit skeptical about showing a teacher student love story.. About the acceptance it would get. Also may be bcoz, they had quite a good age difference.. Unfortunately, by the time they shed their inhibitions, it was all over ! :(They should have known that a Hit Jodi is not always about a sexy woman and hot man dancing around !

The point 1857 scene ! Mannn ! It had SOOO much potential ! I just remember the moments they were sitting on the bench.. Raj's mere gaze at Naina could have burnt her down! What an intensity !

Oh God! I wrote so much ! Its so much fun to discuss and rant ! ;)