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Posted: 10 years ago
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TR OS - HUMNAVA

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1st day

He was in their bedroom looking at her veil on her head, without any word; he took his pillow and bedsheet and went into the balcony.

A lone tear escaped her eye.

*

10th day

He saw her smiling and talking to his parents for the first time. But that was not her original smile. An unknown emotion stirred his heart. He closed his eyes calming himself.

He felt a pull for her first time.

Hey Humnava mujhe apna bana le
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de

*

15th day

He saw her she just put a bindi on her forehead and without any ornaments or make up she left the room. His heart clenched seeing her like that. Something was wrong.

It was her mother's death anniversary. And he couldn't do anything.

hmm.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de

*

21st day

He saw her cooking in the kitchen and his mom helping her. It was a blissful sight, his heart was craving for her, to hold her soft body in his.

But he spoiled everything.

Kab se main dar dar phir raha
Musaafir dil ko panaah de
Tu awaargi ko meri aaj thehra de

*

30th day

She was burning with high fever, he couldnt stop himself from being with her and just being with her. His heart went frenzy looking at her in that condition.

He kissed her forehead assuring that he is with her.

Ho sake toh thoda pyaar jataa de
Sookhi padi iss dil ki zameen ko bhiga de

*

1 month anniversary

He fell in love with her head over heels. Hot tears rolled down his cheeks. For some reason, his heart was finally pouring out, on the other hand he was feeling relieved. He looked at her who was getting ready. His heart skipped a beat and he approached her. She got up and turned towards him. His eyes were showing that he cried. Taani wanted to ask him but was not able to open her mouth. She dint ever talked to him in past one month.

Murjhaayi si shaakh pe dil ki
Phool khilte hain kyun
Baat gulon ki zikr mehak ka
Acha lagta hai kyun
Un rango se tune milaaya
Jinse kabhi main mill na paaya

He was so close to her and his eyes were boring into hers. Soon another tear escaped his eyes followed by a river. Her breath hitched in her throat, her hand fly to his face and her thumb wipe away his tears. He then pulled her to himself and planted his lips on her forehead. Her head rested on his chest and both of them wrapped each other.

Dil karta hai tera shukriya
Phir se bahaare tu laa de
Dil ka soona banjar mehka de
Sukhi padi dil ki is zameen ko bhiga de

After a while his lips travelled from her temple to her cheek to her jawbone making her gasp. His hand skimmed in the C of her waist and his lips tickled her neck making her shiver with pleasure.

Waise toh mausam guzre hain
Zindagi mein kayi
Par ab naa jaane kyun mujhe wo
Lag rahe hain haseen

Tere aane par jaana maine
Kahin na kahin zinda hoon main
Jeene lagaa hoon main ab ye fizaayein
Chehre ko chhooti hawaayein

Inki tarah do kadam toh badha le
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de
O.. hoon akela, zara haath badha de
Sookhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de

She held his shirt in her fist and his lips were at her sweet spot making her shudder in his embrace. Soon there was a call from his mom from downstairs. They broke their hug and taani made a bun of her hair. She kissed him near his lips and ran downstairs.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PM'S SENT FROM THIS ACCOUNT!!!
Do add this account for pm's...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Amazing One-Shot


I liked the style of writing in this os

No dragging of situation but emotions were portrayed beautifully

keep writing <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
one of my favourite songs..!!
thank you so much for the os...!!!

Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Amzing +cute..well potrayed like the end kiss.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
sweet and cute
loved this style of ur writing
the way you sequentially portrayed feeling and silent confession
loved it

Edited by dh19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
firstly amazing selection
of song really a touchy one
n coming to the os
yes it was awesome
writing style is lovely
beautifully portray of
reys feeling for her
pure love n loved it
keep writing
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Beautiful described
This song is soo beautiful attached with taarey cute and sweet love it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Lubly. Soo beautifully u hv described Feelings nd emotions.. keep it up dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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cute OS
I loved it
Slowly yet simple and elegant Love
Thanks for pm

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