SS: Make Me Yours|Sneak Peek of Part 6|12/1 - Page 14

arnav is loosing his heart


twist is that going to be shyam entry

nice one! kinda liked it.. Arnav is falling for his friend but lets see how long he will be able to hold himself..

Awesome update yagya

Alright for once I'm loving this boyish Arnav

sorryfor late comment
awesome update
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: .Srish_Tweetie.

Wonderful story.

Hey, I am a new reader of this story.

Let me tell you, your writing is superb, it's so captivating, I started from the PROLOGUE and couldn't keep in the excitement to read the next two chapters, read it all in one go and it was amazing.

Coming to the Prologue, it was really fantastic, I loved the naughty Arnav, and all his dialogues, ufff they are awesome.

And Khushi, she was trying to be bold and confident in such awkward situation with Arnav, I actually liked his flirtatious self and really, their first meet itself was disastrous and MAGICAL too.

Part 1 was another beautiful part of the story. So Arnav's mother wants Khushi as her daughter-in-law, well it's nice.

Arnav so loves to tease her. And his double meaning dialogues!!

Khushi's about to fall moment was beautiful.(oh I meant Arshi moment)

Arnav can tease anyone, infant to old wrinkled people, his character is awesome.

And Khushi is very good with the replies.

Arnav's dialogue, that moon like face one was truly fantastic, hats off to you.

Sheetal Kapoor... why is she so clingy to Arnav , okay I know you mentioned, it's for the property and wealth but still,,,, she is a little too much.

Khushi is awesome with her revenge, Sheetal ko Arnav ki would-be-wife??AMAZING!!

Part 2 was just as AWESOME. At last Khushi saved Arnav from Sheetal, Shyam is Sheetal's brother, is his character negative??

So Arshi are friends now. Loved their equation with each other. Platonic love between Arshi, Arnav trying to keep his promise but how will he hide his love from Khushi???

Just waiting for next update.

You will continue this one right?? It's long since you last updated.

I too want to be a part of the journey of this beautiful story.

Please, please ,please update soon.

Sorry for bothering with such a long comment but I just can't help myself with it, I just blabber a lot.

-Srishti

Hello Srishti! Welcome to Make Me Yours. Thanks a lot for your beautiful comments. They really stole my heart. I will be updating this ofcourse but I have been writing my other fictions according to the schedule I have planned as I want to end them soon. Shyam's character, I never feel like making his character a positive one, but I had did in the past but since this is based on MPK, it is negative. I would love to have these long comments coming. Please do read my other fictions when you have time.

Love,
Yagya

Originally posted by: .MereRangMein.

Hello Srishti! Welcome to Make Me Yours. Thanks a lot for your beautiful comments. They really stole my heart. I will be updating this ofcourse but I have been writing my other fictions according to the schedule I have planned as I want to end them soon. Shyam's character, I never feel like making his character a positive one, but I had did in the past but since this is based on MPK, it is negative. I would love to have these long comments coming. Please do read my other fictions when you have time.

Love,
Yagya

Originally posted by: .Srish_Tweetie.

Thanks for informing about update, I was just too eager to read more. And thanks for the answer to my query too.

Yeah you are right, Shyam's character is tend to be negative only, also when he is brother of Sheetal.

As much I would love to read more and more fictions by you, I can't promise reading now as my exams are approaching soon.

But I promise, I will start one or other now.

Can you suggest me any of your work to start with??

-Srishti

P.S.- Glad you liked the comment, I thought I just blabber-ed a lot once again.

In that case, all the very best for your exams, darling. May you pass with flying colors. If you ask me to suggest anything of mine, the two names which come to my mind are : Forced Bride and Pride & Prejudice. Both are complete so no worries of me updating it soon as I myself have my exams approaching.

Love,
Yagya

P.S: Will update this soon!