FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID:Rajveer Naina ff for LRL lovers.lu:25-6 P 108 - Page 66

Originally posted by: npksk8495

thank god ! late hi sahi aap aayi to
i understand you kitna muskil hai kisi story ko words me likhna but ye dil hai ki manta nahi
for all rn fans/lovers all rn ffs are important/special there is no comparison between them the all rn ffs (including yours too) have their own beauty & charm
rahi baat aapki story ki i just love it your story is so cute & lovely beautifully written to apne dimaag pe jor mat dalo jitna chahe time lo aaram se socho phir likho hum intezar karenge

Thank u so much Priyanka for the love n support:) I hope evnng tak updt rdy ho...

I am really sorry for the extreme delay. I hope u guyz wl forgive my irresponsibility. So here I am.
Btw I had updated a short part on pge no 105.it was supposed to be the extention of that part but now thinking to post it in a new update.those who havent read that part plz go to page no 105 and those who read it without PM thanks once again:) Big wala:)
Here comes

PART :57

In the evening...
All got ready for the party and were about to leave from academy and were waiting at the Parking zone. Alekh n Yudi had already left so it was only four of them. Most of them were in cassuals but the two ladies made extra effort to look more preety.Specially In a black dress Naina was looking too gorgious. Any guy would go flat on her. But still Huda was there with no HUDAGIRI.I mean hey... "Oye Jaath teri tabiyat toh thik hai na. Apna charm nehi chalayega???"Pooja asked suspeciously. "Hann Mujhe kyaa hua hai"Huda answered in a low tune which significantly said that something was wrong indeed.he stood there still hanging his head down. It was so unlike Huda.but only he knows how down he was feeling from the last night. He might been a flirt all the time and loves to live life on his own condition but at least his mummyji had taught him to respect a woman. But what he did yesterday night was beyond every limit. Not only he insulted a woman but his mummijis lessons too. He himself was feeling so shameful that he was not geting any courage to look into anyone's eyes. He was repenting so much that was not even able to convey that repentance to even that person to whom he should justify. But only he wished that if she knew the reason which made him react in that way. But right now no chance nor courage to say anything to anyone specially to the person he should.

Ali n Pooja were busy with their stupid romantic fights and Naina was quite enjoyng the sight.I guess now she knows the time has come and she will be able to see him after the whole long day's disappearance. I guess the anger side was subsidding by the excitment of seeing him al over again:) ( dekhhke phir se phoolan hi ban jayegi Though;) )

All were busy in themselves when someone said from behind "Toh chalen?"
Which made all of them to look back from where the sound came,expect Huda cause he already knew who that could be and trust me with the thought of being accompanied with the person for the rest of the night made his already sinking heart beat to double up its beat. But he was not sure of if he was sad or happy with the presence but one thing for sure that he was extremely terrified of what would come next.

"Areh Sanaya aa ja..."Pooja said excitedly then looking at the sky she exhaled "aab toh saab aa gye aab toh jeep bhej do bhagwan jee,pata nehi itne sare jeep mese ek bhi avi tk wapas kyun nhi aya" irritation was clearly visible from her tone.

sanaya came towards them and greeted all except...(u know right) ..Disappointment was visible from her face too,in fact from the last night she was in such a stage that anyone could have sense that something was wrong with her. Even when her Mentor (I think u remember who he is) caught her on the corridor this afternoon he got curious too.and finally she had to accept his proposal of coming to his house party in order to profe that she was all normal. Though I doubt how much she succeded in convincing him as u know Alekh BABA is Sarbagyani:)

Huda was feeling more guilty watching her this way. He might always be irritated with her for her overbossing everything but being the reason for her silence was making him more irritated. And he could do nothing about that.

So it keeps going on this way...and finally the jeep came and all reached the destination being lost in their own world.

Naina was the first to get off the jeep and directly headed towards the house not waiting for the rest.(Raj beta be ready:)tsunami is comming) Ali n Pooja got off the next. N then Sanaya was about to get off when suddenly she felt some pull on her Dupatta from the back and anticipating who that could be suddenly she shouted out with all the frustration "Dont u dare to..." And as soon she looked back the voice decreased as fastest as it went up. No it was not Huda but the corner of the seat wher her dupatta got stucked. She felt a bit sorry for shouting at him but then it was nothing compared to what he had done last night.so she just released the dupatta and went inside. Now it comes to Huda. During the whole ride he was feeling very uncomfortable sitting beside her. His heart was burning to the fullest but not a single time he dared to look towards her.all the way he just hung his head down and... So many time he wanted to stop the jeep and pull her out and tell her every cause behind his act but not a single time he got enough courage to speak up anything. He never felt so hopeless before,nor even that day which changed his direction of life for ever(guyz its not yesterday,there is a mystry..I will revel very soon) and when every one left the car he finally was deciding to talk to her and was just about to say something and that shit happened. For the first time he looked at her today with the extreme shout she made, he could only look at those lips which were complete closed yesterday (by him) and there was a cut mark on the lower lip too,even the light pink lip gloss failed to hide it.and before he could look at her she was gone. He just sit there dumbstuck for a few second to realise what just happened now and only the lips were there in his mind, now he was feeling as if to run somewhere where no one can find him. He was feeling guilty than ever. And that shout... It was visible from her shout also that how mad she is with him. There was no guts left into him to get out of the jeep and went inside and face her al over again. He never was such helpless ever...

All the things were going inside him when the driver called him and brought back him to senses.
Unwillingly he had to get down and with no other choice left he went inside the house extreme forcefully.

Inside the House:


Naina was the first to enter and all her eyes were asking for only one person. But to her disappointment only Alekh n Nilu were there to greet her. "areh wah tu aa gyi...aur baki saab kahan hai??"Alekh asked excitedly.
"Wo aa rhe hai...aur Baki saab kahan hai?"Naina asked the same question looking for the exact answer.
And before Alekh could speak "Kyaa yaar Naina humeh bahar chorke akele hi aa gyi Shahruk se milne"Pooja came there teasing her besty but the excitment decreased as she also couldnt find Raj there. Then Sanaya joins the followed by Huda.
"Wooo...areh tum log andar toh aao.. Sab aa hi rahe hongy" Alekh tried to cover the situation but could see the disappointment clearly into Naina's eyes.

They came to the hall and were having some chit chats ,mostly it was Alekh Nilu n Ali puja who were chating actually.rest three were lost in themselves when the door bell ringed. Without any delay Naina jumped up and oppened the door but to her surprise it was Yudi. And the chat continued.
After 10mins the bell ringed again and again Naina rushed to the door with expected eyes and as soon as she opened the door her face again fall down as it was Chaubey n Ronie. She even tried to snick out if he was outside but no. And Chaubey conformed her doubt "wo Sirji ko thora late hoga sayad. Par aap chinta maat karo wo ayengy jarur" and both of them joined the group inside.
And once again phulan devi was overshadowing Naina and her anger level was increasing drastically...
After another half an hour the door bell rings and all looked at Naina with expected eyes(areh avi tak chaukidari toh wahi kar rhi thi na:)) but this time Naina gave them a deadly look and sat more comfortably on her couch clearly indicating that she is not going to open it now.
So unwillingly Pooja got to open the door again with expectations. Here Naina might ct like she doesnt care who came but didnt miss the chance to sneak.
As soon as Pooja opened the door her expected eyes filled with irritation. Yes its none other than Kutty:) Mr. Bhadresh Kutty:) and Pooja started to babbling in anger " Han bas isi ki kami thi. Yahan hum Shahruk k intezar me hai aur bin bulaye mahman ana bandh hi nehi kar rhe" Pooja babbling looking sidewise still standing at the door as if if its in her hand then she would never let him go inside.
"KUCH KAHAN AAPNE CAPT. GHAI?"
Pooja who was looking elsewhere till now and was crushing Kutty to the fullest now suddenly replied "Haan nehi toh...nehi to Sirji" all becoming serious still now not realizing what exactly happened.
As soon she looked the man infront of her as if she came out of her daze and kept looking at him as if some alian was infront of her talking in alian language.she still couldnt belive her ear nor the eyes.or better saying ear and eyes together.
"Agar aap ka inspection khatam ho gaya ho toh main andar jaun?" The person in Kutty's atire said again something in her Shahruk's assents. Her Dil n Dimag fight continued for a few more second before she made a way for the Alian person to come unside.

Agar gate pe Pooja ki yeah hatal thi toh andar batge logon ki condition bhi kuch alag nehi the...Infront of them was Kutty but his voice was no longer matching his personality. And they cant be wrong to recognise the voice.
While most of them were in the dilema of missmatch of ear and eyes the rest of them(who already knew the truth) were perplexed of what made him to disclose his identity...I mean they all deserved to know the truth but the sudden discloser of the truth made them think also what could have happened...




Okey gyuz...
Abhi tak ke liye itna hi...
U know na I cant update long..
Age ka sochke rakha h...
I hope aj raat tak update bhi kar dun...
I know it has no RN moment.
I hope next me compensate kar dun...
Hopefully wl updt today itself.till now enjoy...

Dhasuuu update superb thanks for both the update😃😛cant get enough of it😃 tooo good plz con soon thanks for PM😃😃😃

nice update
feeling bad for huda & want to know the mystery asap
eagerly waiting for next update
thanks for pm

Really awesoem

awesome update as usual...👏

Nice update. Bt sudden disclosure of identity

So ready for some more:)
Hope so

PART 58:

getting inside the hall "Gyuz relax" then taking off his false mustache he announced "yeah its me...and I have something to tell u guyz" rolling his eyes on everyone finally it fixed on Naina's. Ummm. Was she surprised more or more angry? I guess more angry for the surprise:) But Raj looked cool and give her a wink. (I mean hey uska blink dekhkke toh patthar bhi pighal jaye.. So what do u think Naina ka gussa pattar se bhi majbut h yaa pighal gya mom ki tarha:))

By this time Pooja has also joined them locking the door but no one made any comment as they will need more time to come out of the daze. So Raj continued..
"So where I was"breaking the precious eye lock with Naina finally convincing her to at least listen him first then he will give every answer to her question,he continued "hmmm..First of all I am really sorry for making it a secret,at least till now cause I also wanted to be sure if my acting was genuine enough as we are dealing with very dangerous people and for that I cant allow to disclose my real identity. So I had to be sure if I am good enough in fooling them with this identity. This is all... Rest u guyz know everything except..." Saying the last word he holds a bit to look at everyones expression
And as expected all were listening to him without even blinking.
"Tujhe pahle se pata tha na k yehi Shahruk h?"Pooja said into Naina's ear but as the environment was pin drop silent so it was louder enough to catch Raj's ear. At the same time while Naina noded in yes still with no expression but too busy to hear the rest of the story Raj answered it louder "Kyun aapko nehi pata k Capt Naina mujhse bhi jyada mujhe jante hai.." This compliment relaxed the surrounding a bit and even succeded to bring a blush in Naina's face but as soon she remember he is just buttering him and again kept secret again the expression exchanged with an anger one.
"Lekin lekin lekin...jo yahan maujud sab k sath sath wo bhi nehi janti wo hai" a complete cheer up Raj was infront of them after so long.this days they might have got him back but this extreme positive vibe was missing somewhere but today he was all the old Rajveer.That Rajveer which they knew at the initial days of their training period, a careless and selffree person with evry positivity. Or might be more glowing now as now the guilt of killing his best friend and proving his innocence to his love is not there. But whats the reason behind this change???
"Ummm so I am officially ur new commandor Major Rajveer Singh Sikhawat" he announced so proudly that everyone could sence the proud in his eyes. But his gaze was fix on one person as he wanted to see her expression as she meant the world to him. Naina could sense the joy of victory which he was fighting till now within himself not effecting any of them,nor even she. But today Naina could clearly see how desperate he was to get back his real identity,his fame and his army. Till yesterday he was guiding them for a secret mission,but he had no power as he was only a volunteer till then. For the system he was dead. But for his love for country it was enough for him to get a chance to serve for the country. But some where the complete satisfaction was missing.but today something happened and she was waiting eagerly to know what that could be,the same pride was refelcting from her eyes too with the same taste of satisfaction. The news indeed succeded to bring Naina back from pholan yet again:)
Looking at those bright beautiful eyes Raj get more excited to tell them the whole story ,"toh as I said I am officialy a member of the army again and main aap sabko bayan nehi kar sakta k aaj main kitna khush hun.Yun toh meri dusri janam mujhe bahut pahle hi mil gya tha paar yakin maniye aaj main phir se jee utha. Aj mujhe apni maan samman aur apny wardy wapas mil gyi." The happiness of his heart was clearly visible in his voice too.he continu further ," at last head office me meri maut ki sacchai bata di gyi aur kal raat hi mujhe call aya aur main aap sabko bina bataye nikal gaya"looking at Naina he said the words. "Desh ke liya ladne se bara gaurav aur kyaa ho sakta hai bhala ,lekin agar desh bhi aapko wo samman de jiske liye aap jite hai aur sau maut marne ko tayaar toh usse bari aur kyaa apekha ki jaye. Today I am finally a member of the Army again, aur yakin mainye I am feeling stronger than ever"looking at Naina and then the whole team "aur aap saab toh hai hi mujhme aur himmat barha ne ke liye.Thank you so much guyz for beliving in me. I hope age jake bhi hum saab milke desh k are ane wali haar wo saksh ko saza de payengey." His voice was so emotional that reflects in them all.Watching their inspiration is geting what he actually deserve made them all so happy that they all stood up and hugged him in silence. there were tears,happy tears in each of their eyes. Till now no one made any effort to speak and just too involve in listening what he was saying,as if some fairy tale was coming into reality. After a long group hug they separated and removing the residual drop from his eyes he continued"lekin gyuz abhi bhi mujhe duniya ke samne expose hone ka time nehi aya hai,aur main sab ke samne Kutty banke hi rahinga cause hamare mission me meri identity chupa hua rahna hi bahtar hai.. Lekin u all deserved to know the truth so here I am... Koi question?" Finally the fairy tale ends.
All were just too happy to have him back like this and couldnt ask for more but there was someone who needed to apologies.
"Wo sir...I am sorry pichle dino maine bina jane aapse aise..."Pooja was feeling sorry for all her past behaviours. But soon Raj came her side and putting a hand on her shoulder he said"arey arey arey yeah aap kyaa bol rahe hai..Infact mujhe toh aap se thanks kahna tha k kaal aap... "but as soon he realised wht was he about to say he controlled himself.but his extreme bad luck it again succeded to bring the Phulan on Naina back:) (aab bhugto;) ) It reminded her of how he again started keeping secret from her,how even last night he came and left without even any justification that too when something so big was already cooking. Doesnt she deserve to know even this much. All of this expressions were delivering through her eyes which by now Raj has already caught. "RAJ beta tu toh gaya..kya jarurat tha itna senti hoke bak bak..."Raj even didnt get enough time to crush his stupidity Naina lft from there.
"Kaal raat maine...maine kya kiya tha???"confused by Raj's word Pooja wanted the clearification but before she could properly ask for the clarification Raj ran towards Naina's direction crushing her "phir se kaam bigar diya mera".

As expected Naina was in the tarace in the same swing.
Raj slowly goes there and stoode infront of her hanging his head down like a student who forgot the homework. Naina intentionally ignored and looked away. Raj stoode there for about 10 long minutes with the hope that she will at least react so that he will get a chance to convince her but nothing happend like that and she showed no interest to solve the problem so Raj had to start with his own unique style. "I think main aur 2min aise sar jhukaye khara raha toh mera gardan(neck) akad hi jayega.I must tell u u are fitter than me" dont know from where he has chosen those stupid,really stupid words but it actually worked and it became very tough for Naina to hide her laugh. But still she didnt look back to him but Raj didnt miss the sight ad felt relax that he words are working at least,slowly though,but not complete ineffective. "Toh kyaa main yahan baith jaun?" Raj asked making a puppy face.
"Kya yeah jhula maine kharida hai???nehi na...aap ko jahan marzo baitho" Naina said angrily making fake faces and as soon her sentence completes she again back to her old position.
"Hai mera gardan...pura din driving karke waise hi halat kharab tha...I think mujhe bhi Ram dev baba ki yaga kar hi leni chahiye" Raj said dramatically massaging his neck(pain kitna tha pata nehi but surely jitna dikha raha tha utna nehi tha;) )
This finally succeded to make Naina a bit pity on him. "Kya sach me bahut dard ho raha hai?"Naina showed some concern but watching his medicine is actually working Raj made such a face that Naina too understood that it was just fake(beta Raj kuch toh perfectly kar liya karon.I know u r new in this group but I mean how can u let her know u were just acting.acting hi kar rhe the toh thora better nehi kar sakte the kya???? But I guess thats ur specialy:) sweet and innocence) . and was about to leave the swing but Raj holds her hand and indicates her to sit. Though it didnt work completely but at least she stoped. Getting up form his position he too stoode in front of her and holding his both ear and making a puppy face he said "agar main yea kahun ki mujhe khudko bhi yeah baat pura pata nehi tha toh kya tum mera biswas karogi?"
Though the face was enough to forget everything which he did but hey can a girl leave a chance like this of getting more pampered so easily? And after all Naina is just like any other ordinary girl "Nehi...kyun karun aap pe bharosha.kya kabhi bhi aap mere bareme soch ke kuch bhi kiya hai?phir kyun karun aap pe biswas?? Ap ke liye saab pahle sirf mujhe chorke.yahan tak aap chaubey ji ko bhi inform karke gaye..but mujhe kyaa mila.unka forwarding call.."Naina showed fake anger.
The last line made him to smile of how Pooja is effecting her but now he have to slove the problem first,"dekho Naina kal rat ko mujhe bas head quater report karne ko bola gaya with all my docoments so I came to ur room. Mujhe tabhi tak bas andaza tha min sure nehi tha...aur tum jante ho ki kisi bhi baat pe sure hure bagair main kisiko inform karna theek nehi samajhta.specially jaab wo baat yeah ho...U cant imagine Naina iss din ka swapna main pichley 3saal se dekh raha hun.tumne mera samman toh wapas paa liya tha lekin mujhe wapas pana abhi baki tha. Toh iss baat ko leke mujhme itna kuch expectations tha ki agar yeah baat jhuti nikalti toh main tut jata. Bas isi liye kisiko bhi janne se pahle main khud confirm hona chahta tha.aur rahi baat inform karne ki toh maine tumhe early morning nikal ne se pahle call bhi kiya tha bt tumhara ph off aya.phir pura din itna busy gaya aur actually I wanted to give this news face to face. Mujhe tumhari expression dekhni thi kyunki u meant the..."Raj was continuing with all his hearts but then again...at the main point he stops...Naina had only tears in her eyes while listening to the whole story behind the story and with the last sentence she felt like her heart will be able to hear the thing finally but "u meant the most important person,my support system"was all Raj said. Though she was not satisfied with the last line but it succeded to bring down all her anger for the previous night. She hugged her and said in a sobbing voice"I am so happy for u" Raj too took her in his strong embrace and both stood there for a while. And again Raj got the proof k JITNA BHI ACT KAR LOH DIL SE NIKLI BATEN HI DIL KO CHUKE PIGHAL SAKTA HAI...



Hah...And thats the max I can think within a day:) will be back as soon I thought of the next:) Huda ko bhi dekhna parega na:) bechara kitne din aise ghumta rahega:) and one important thing to ask...are u guyz all awar of Rajeev's upcoming movie Fever?? I hope u are...22nd july is the day:) I am too excited and already in love with all the songs:) do let me know which one is ur favrt:) till then keep smiling aur agar dil ko chu jye toh ek like aur commnt:) tataz

Originally posted by: newmoon18

superb

Thnk q soo much;)

Originally posted by: 0913155

Dhasuuu update superb thanks for both the update😃😛cant get enough of it😃tooo good plz con soon thanks for PM😃😃😃

Thanks dear:) next part i ready:)