Arhi FF 'Celestial Moon' Ch 18 updated on 31 May 2016

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Vanhi

@vanhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -NainaS-
Nice start and I love the Title. So the catch is Arnav is in a committed relationship from 5 years.. n then Khushi entered as a neighbour. Let's see how she enters his heart !!!! 😊 😊

a warm welcome to my world of arnav khushi, naina. looking forward to hear your opinion on this ff as the story progress

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divya

@diyadivya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

love the plot...looking fwd to see how love wud blosoom between arhi whose love is not love at first sight 😊

can we expect this vanhi????😉

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

The short description in the start was really engaging. A story minus all the grandeur and unwanted twists is always a treat to read. The character sketch sounds promising and the way a few of them have been introduced perfectly justifies the start.

A doctor Arnav will be very exciting to read. A crazy Gupta family also seems quite a bonus point.

Now that Arnav-khushi have alreay met, it will be fun to see how and when he breaks up with his LOVE and falls for his nayi neighbour.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

awesome start

Oh, so khushi is his new neighbor. Arnav personality is interesting. And i love that Khushi is a writer, great! One day, i hope to become one too.

Can't wait to read another interesting story of yours.

update soon

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Vanhi

@vanhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: diyadivya
love the plot...looking fwd to see how love wud blosoom between arhi whose love is not love at first sight 😊

can we expect this vanhi????😉

Love at first kiss... 😆

There might be chances, dear...

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@Naina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

"There was something enthralling in accompanying the women in his life for their shopping."

My eyes widened reading the first statement. How many would really feel enthralled to see women shopping. But, if they do they are the luckiest.

And when you mentioned Arnav's girlfriend.. I was just hoping that it's not Lavanya don't know why. After seeing different interesting names you gave in other stories, I was expecting more. And wow thats not her. But how does La fit into their family ?

Aman dislikes Arnav's gf. Interesting. Feels like he may play major role in bringing ArShi close. Arnav seems to be really loving her. Just to get Arshi close I never like him breaking up with his love, unless one of them is pretending.

To have a girlfriend who's similar to you is fun and thrilling but to have the woman of same qualities as a life partner is not suggestible.

Is it the only concern for Aman. That's weird... !!?

Khushi, I insist... Why does this remind me of Varun's I insist which was the reason for a storm there... 😉 😉

Edited by -NainaS- - 10 years ago

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Ashahzadi

@Ashahzadi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Amazing update. I love how the story is progressing. I understand where aman is coming from. but no worries our khushi is here. Okay now even I want to know why she calls her parents by their names. Please update soon!

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

lovely update. but I am little confused regarding Arnav's gf. it does'nt seem to be lavanya . waiting for the story to open up.continue soon

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

So who is Lavanya, if she is not Arnav's gf? Arnav should accept that Aman does not get along with his gf. Something we don't know abt yet, maybe a secret that only Aman knows.

And thanks Vanhi for clarifying abt Khushi calling her parents by their given names!

Will Arnav insisting Khushi to enter his home lead to anything?

Edited by jessjazz - 10 years ago

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

He was hapie to go shopping with his girlfriend????
Rilli...!!!?? Ausm he is then...!!!!
Well u kept the girlfriend's name secret?? Ummhmm...!!
Aman... Very nice character...
Waiting fo the interaction now...!!!
Plz update soon... This is so beautiful