Arshi FF #2 - My Imperfect Mr Perfect (Chapter 34 on next thread)

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#511

Amira🤗

Glad that u updated after a long time...n indeed a dhasu hit👏loved it⭐️

I really liked the sense of presence of our arshi here..on one hand khushi masking a farce facade to weave shyam in her trap which actually did worked and on the other hand our very own arnav joining fots n formulating further actions..his mind is one hell of a gr8 thinker.

I just loved arnavs thought process during his nervousness...love canbe ur strenght or ur weakness..it truly depends on wat path u choose...absolutely lovable thought..and I just loved how arnav understood khushis delima..its very sweet to see him like this😆

Thanks for pm n do update soon.

Ur nutty nutter

Zee😛

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mee4

@mee4

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#512

Superb update:) thanks for the pm:). Loved how Arnav finally realized that it's Ur decision to make Ur love as Ur strength or weakness. Their heart - heart connection is so wonderful...how Arnav didn't doubt khushi for even a second. Very well written. Waiting for the next part! Take care.

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Nice chapters 29, 30...thanks for the PM

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vj2102

@vj2102

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Omg what a cliffhanger.. Now eagerly awaiting your next update

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#515

Zabardast update,Amira...

Khushi is the perfect match for ASR..

She dint let her fear show before Snakewa..

A shrewd man like him was unable to realise the situation...

Arnav already loved Khushi so much..

But her kidnap hit him hard..

He couldn't lose her at any cost...

Khushi was HIS. She was his angel. She was the centre of his existence. And there was no bloody way that he was going to let ANYONE take her or harm her.

I just loved the way u expressed his turmoil..👏

And did he cope with such a crucial situation..

Seconds before, Arnav had felt his vulnerability with the thought of losing Khushi. But right now, after knowing she was near him, he felt his strength multiply tenfold as he stood determined to save his love; his life.

I m already waiting for p-2 😊😛😃

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#516

Loved it

Khushi fooled shyam and he fell into her trap like an idiot

Arnav is ready to do anything to save khushi

Will be waitimg for the next update

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sans12

@sans12

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#517

It's 9th please update next part

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Amira

@amira039.303

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#518

Note

Guys I'm sorry I haven't updated but I've been quite busy going hospital every day this week and dad was finally discharged yesterday :D

But I have an exam tomorrow so I probably can't update until tomorrow night - if not I will definitely update on Saturday. Sorry for the wait guys but please give me these two days.

Thanks for your patience

Love

Amira