Arshi SS : Color of Distance : Thread1 : Chap 13 : pg 103 Apr9th - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem

Ahhaa looks like Arnav finally found a lead which hopefully will lead him to Khushi.

I assumed that Khushi was angry with him or they had broken up and had separated but her phone call threw a big surprise at me and now thinking that she might be in some kind of danger scares me.

Aman is a true friend and confident of Arnav indeed.

Nice update P but I have a big complaint against you.
Why are the updates so small? No, no, this is absolutely not acceptable. I remember PKI days you would give lengthier updates. Why did you change that?
So I am doing a dharna requesting/demanding lengthier updates. And my little sister, think its an order from your elder sister. 😉

A song dedicated to the separation Arshi are facing now:



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M0kVe4jKpd0[/YOUTUBE]


😆.. Dharna... Oh it is too hot here Kavi.. please bring extra umbrellas. I don't want you to get tanned..😆..

Sure big sister.. I will definitely try to give long updates from now on. You know no update is planned for that many pages. Just I looked for a right spot to stop and that's it. You know today my hubby read the second chapter and gave me long lecture how to improve the narration of the scene. If I write like he said.. every chapter will be just 2 pages..LOL.

What a perfect song Kavi..Thanks for sharing it. I feel very bad that I didn't hear so many good songs. Thank you for all of you who are sharing such beautiful songs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Something is fishy! Seems like khushi is in danger...otherwise why'd she had called him? Hai na! looks like she's been living with garima gupta...what has that got to do with hospital? Was she sick?
Thanks for pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow akka once again an amazing and outstanding chapter...

i just love the way you take the scene from one place to another without any break or dis-coordination.

You are making us eager and frustrated the same time .. by putting our love Arnav in such a condition but jokes apart its really so painful to see how much broken he is and still he rise very moment for her , to be with her.

and the way you pen his thoughts are just amazing and about his personality omg ..you gonna kill us with his arrogant and irresistible charms and looks you penned here.

Now about the update, Arnav had been looking for her since long days and it was so bad to know that always what he get was an dead end...
but hope this time this flyer and the receipt bring them to the right corner and let them reach the person they have been looking for.

I could feel the pain Arnav felt seeing the place where she stayed.. how she turned here ?? and many more such questions are running in my mind..

Khushi called him ..after three years... and she sounded in pain..what could be the reason of her calling him after so many years ??..also it means its been 3 years and how much more is still to be known as how long had he been searching for her..

She called him ?? why?? again a new question rooted in my mind... akka u are creating a lot of suspense ..and literally making us restless.. but hope with coming updates we get answers to them..

i just hope now this Garima Gupta is a clue to reach her.. is she her mother???

O akka ..u are just terrific and amazing and with every part i could feel the writer in you strengthening up and reaching new heights ..

Aman.. this poor guy has to face a lot ..but he is really a good frd and understood the real man behind the mask of ASR...

Hope his investigation this time also put a star more in his career and being joy in his friend's life

A song i just imagined on Arshi of this story..


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SOessajf_Ik[/YOUTUBE]


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

Wow akka once again an amazing and outstanding chapter...

i just love the way you take the scene from one place to another without any break or dis-coordination.

You are making us eager and frustrated the same time .. by putting our love Arnav in such a condition but jokes apart its really so painful to see how much broken he is and still he rise very moment for her , to be with her.

and the way you pen his thoughts are just amazing and about his personality omg ..you gonna kill us with his arrogant and irresistible charms and looks you penned here.

Now about the update, Arnav had been looking for her since long days and it was so bad to know that always what he get was an dead end...
but hope this time this flyer and the receipt bring them to the right corner and let them reach the person they have been looking for.

I could feel the pain Arnav felt seeing the place where she stayed.. how she turned here ?? and many more such questions are running in my mind..

Khushi called him ..after three years... and she sounded in pain..what could be the reason of her calling him after so many years ??..also it means its been 3 years and how much more is still to be known as how long had he been searching for her..

She called him ?? why?? again a new question rooted in my mind... akka u are creating a lot of suspense ..and literally making us restless.. but hope with coming updates we get answers to them..

i just hope now this Garima Gupta is a clue to reach her.. is she her mother???

O akka ..u are just terrific and amazing and with every part i could feel the writer in you strengthening up and reaching new heights ..

Aman.. this poor guy has to face a lot ..but he is really a good frd and understood the real man behind the mask of ASR...

Hope his investigation this time also put a star more in his career and being joy in his friend's life

A song i just imagined on Arshi of this story..


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SOessajf_Ik[/YOUTUBE]



Hehehe.. Vini darling.. don't you think if I answer all of your questions at a time.. the story will end right there.. 😆.. I can understand your desperation dear.. sabr karo yarr. And by the way.. Nice song yaar. thanks for sharing it.. I know that you are a complete database for hindi songs. I miss the days where we used to hear ,... me songs and you telugu songs... I miss those days.
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Posted: 10 years ago
listening to this song made me feel like i am visualizing Arshi ... Sply how Arnav is missing her and feeling her every second...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixdov26hzr4[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

listening to this song made me feel like i am visualizing Arshi ... Sply how Arnav is missing her and feeling her every second...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixdov26hzr4[/YOUTUBE]


Nice song VIni.. Very good melody.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lol i am again here to post a song..

Akka kya karu everyday some song playing on my system take me to the Arshi of this FF and i cant stop from visualizing them ..
and this song i feel so much suitable for Arnav ...and how he miss Khushi.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqAdkU1DQdQ[/YOUTUBE]

P.S. >>> I am sure you will soon kick me out of this thread or will drop me in jail for constant spamming lol..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

Lol i am again here to post a song..

Akka kya karu everyday some song playing on my system take me to the Arshi of this FF and i cant stop from visualizing them ..
and this song i feel so much suitable for Arnav ...and how he miss Khushi.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqAdkU1DQdQ[/YOUTUBE]

P.S. >>> I am sure you will soon kick me out of this thread or will drop me in jail for constant spamming lol..


Vini my darling.. no way I will ever do that. You are sharing beautiful songs and thinking about my story is making me happy. Why will I throw u out. And you are my sweet little sister.. Haq bantha hai aapko.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavini

Lol i am again here to post a song..

Akka kya karu everyday some song playing on my system take me to the Arshi of this FF and i cant stop from visualizing them ..
and this song i feel so much suitable for Arnav ...and how he miss Khushi.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mqAdkU1DQdQ[/YOUTUBE]

P.S. >>> I am sure you will soon kick me out of this thread or will drop me in jail for constant spamming lol..



Vini, I love this song too. Thanks for sharing and yes it surely suits Arnav here so much.

Now Pandu, chop chop give us the next update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: canapoem



Vini, I love this song too. Thanks for sharing and yes it surely suits Arnav here so much.

Now Pandu, chop chop give us the next update soon.


Kavi update is ready yaar.. Have to edit it and post it.. May be by tonight.

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